Stabbed by Memories

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Stabbed by Memories

#1 Post by dretchlord » Thu Nov 28, 2013 5:40 am

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Yuza Tachizuki (First name is changeable) is a 15 year old male that moves to Tokyo to forget about a tragic incident (Death of his childhood friend Nanami. She was stabbed to death but the killer was never found) in his hometown. He enters Ayoushima Academy as a transfer student in its second semester. There he meets Shiro Ayase and Yuki Hanayo. He has a normal high school life filled with laughter and romantic comedy while time to time remembering his childhood friend. As Yuza progresses in the VN, he has dreams/memories that he has yet to understand and overtime pieces it together. At Day 25, the final scene and the route Yuza ends up with either him killing Shiro, him killing Yuki, him getting killed by Yuki, him getting killed by Shiro, him getting caught by the police, him killing himself, or him crying on the rooftop with Shiro and Yuki.


The game has days with very crucial choices. Other days include common dating VN types such as, "what to do after lunch?" or "Where should I go now?" There is a point affection system, however the affection is not aimed for love but more of whom you get close to. There is also a neutrality point system.

(Note: I wanted to hide some important details at the moment, like what caused him to go insane, why does he carry a pocket knife, where is him hometown.etc)


Characters


Yuza Tachizuki - 15 year old male trying to find consolation in Tokyo. He has also short black hair, with blue eyes. He has a kind and cheerful personality. He also has a lady killer smile which he uses in his class introduction making him favorable among the women. However, he is running away from a painful memory that would soon change his personality completely.

Shiro Ayase - 15 year old female student in Ayoushima High who is the student council president. She ranked number one in the most popular girls in Ayoushima high. She has long blong hair, with scarlet read and and light pink lips. She meets Yuza on the school hallway and harbors secret affection towards him, but has hard time expressing it. She has a serious personality in the outside, but a cute and gentle personality inside.


Yuki Hanayo - 15 year old female student who is the captain of the female softball team in Ayoushima high. She has a kind and overly happy personality. She has short red hair with a ponytail, and purple eyes. She meets Yuta by accidentally hitting him with a softball. She likes to eat a lot and is super friendly with Yuza. Suprisingly, she is good in Math and English as she ranked number one in this categories during the school quiz bee. Despite her cheerful personality, she is actually soft in the inside and experiencing family problems. She also holds secret affection towards Yuza.


Side Characters


Aunt- She is at her mid-twenties who works as a call center agent and is the caretaker of Yuza. She was describe by Yuza as an "old geezer" because the way she jokes around with Yuza saying stuff like "Lets make a new generation!" and explicit material underneath her bed.

Dean- She is at her mid-twenties and is in charge of Ayoushima High. Yuza describes her as being the same with her aunt. She also acts like a "desperate housewife" to Yuza.

Female Teacher - Also at her mid -twenties, she is the the homeroom teacher of Yuza. Though with a serious personality, she occasionally jokes around with Yuza concerning about love. Yuza then makes the conclusion that all mid-twenty women are like this.

Routes:


(Trial ending) (If Only I could Fly) – I rather tell a lie than get hurt by the truth.


Yuza finds out the truth and pieces everything about the incident with his childhood friend Nanami. Yuza is crying at the top of the school rooftop and looses himself to his emotions. Being unable to bare the pain any longer, he jumps of the school rooftop and dies.
( BAD END)


Route 1 (A Friend Till the End) – I will always hold on. Until you decide to let me go.

Yuza goes insane and stabs Shiro with the pocket knife he carries
( BAD END)


Route 2 (Last Hit) – So close before the last strike

Yuza goes insane and beats Yuki with a nearby baseball bat
( BAD END)


Route 3 (Close to the End) – You made it this far, but this is the end of your journey.

Yuza tries to stab Shiro with a pocket knife, but misses and hits the wall. The knife drops to the floor and Yuza reagains his composure trying to figure out what just happened, but Shiro still terrified grabs the fallen knife and stabs Yuza
( BAD END)


Route 4 (Strike Out – The Game is Over) – Nice try, but the game is over

Yuza tries to beat Yuki with a baseball bat, he misses hitting her right arm. Yuki runs away and Yuza chases after her. She runs down the stairs leading to the track and field ground. Yuza, chasing after her, trips down the stairs landing on the hard ground with his rib cage shattered and his leg unable to stand. Yuza, while lying on the ground, whispers Yuki’s name. Yuki, approaches him, however Yuza grabs her right foot. Yuki , terrified at Yuza, grabs the baseball bat that had fallen out of Yuza’s hand and beats him to dead.

( BAD END)

Route 5 (It's you – Time to confess the truth) – You thought you could run, but you ran straight to the truth

The police have found out about the mystery with the death of Nanami and confronted Yuza. Yuza is arrested on top of the school rooftop.


( BAD END)


Route 6 (I will continue to Fly) – Yuza is crying on the school rooftop after finding the truth about the incident concerning his childhood friend Nanami. He tries to jump of the school rooftop, but is stopped by Shiro and Yuki. He tries to convince them to let him jum, but Yuki and Shiro hug him and start to cry together.The detective feeling sympath for Yuza actions, decides to cloase the case calling it a mystery.

(GOOD END: Hardest to obtain) Since this is the best ending in the game, I would like to make this the hardest to obtain. There are certain clues in the games as to how to obtain this, but that is kept a secret 8)
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Re: Stabbed by Memories [Title in progress] (Yandere)

#2 Post by soraibi » Thu Nov 28, 2013 8:15 am

Sounds interesting...and gory. I don't mind. I'm looking forward on how you'll write out the characters and their developments in the story (^^)

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Re: Stabbed by Memories [Title in progress] (Yandere)

#3 Post by YandereYuka » Sat Nov 30, 2013 12:50 pm

I think that it sounds like a really great game. I like that you involved most of the characters in each ending and gave each of them individual personalities. I also like that you explored the weight the situation would have on the main character's sanity, since allot of VNs leave that out sometimes. Also, if you'd like sprites I'd be happy to make some for you for free.

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