Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]*UPDATE*

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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem

#16 Post by Ran08 » Fri Jul 11, 2014 11:42 am

Oh, it's cute! I like it. :3

1) What do you think of story so far?
I like the story. And also... the genre combination is interesting. Hahaha.

2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, mainly because he seems like a unique fellow, and partly because he's an albino. :o It's just that... we rarely have albino obtainables, and we have lots of amnesiacs. I really would like to get to know him better. And not just because of his genetic condition! (Wait, genetic condition. Gene...tic. Gene. Cool.) He just seems interesting.

I would probably go for Allen too anyway, hahahaha. :)

3) What do you expect from this VN?
I expect it to be fun and light, and of course, mysterious. Hahahaha. =)

A proofreader would be appreciated though, since there are some fairly obvious mistakes. ^^ Don't worry, they're pretty minor. Ah, also, one 'o' in the logo doesn't have a transparent middle. :(

Anyway, good luck!

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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem

#17 Post by Aruise » Fri Jul 11, 2014 1:57 pm

Ran08 wrote:Oh, it's cute! I like it. :3

1) What do you think of story so far?
I like the story. And also... the genre combination is interesting. Hahaha.

2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, mainly because he seems like a unique fellow, and partly because he's an albino. :o It's just that... we rarely have albino obtainables, and we have lots of amnesiacs. I really would like to get to know him better. And not just because of his genetic condition! (Wait, genetic condition. Gene...tic. Gene. Cool.) He just seems interesting.

I would probably go for Allen too anyway, hahahaha. :)

3) What do you expect from this VN?
I expect it to be fun and light, and of course, mysterious. Hahahaha. =)

A proofreader would be appreciated though, since there are some fairly obvious mistakes. ^^ Don't worry, they're pretty minor. Ah, also, one 'o' in the logo doesn't have a transparent middle. :(

Anyway, good luck!
Ooh thanks for comment, another breeze for me! XD

1) So much genre, right? (lol) You will know why when it finish someday.

2) Aww hear that Gene? She likes you, come on say Hi! XD
Anyway there's a reason why I made he's an albino :D *by the way I got Gene's name randomly* //shot

3) Yep it will be like that
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Ughh yeah I'm bad with this grammatical and tenses things, gonna find a proofreader soon orz. And for the logo, I won't realize it if you didn't say it, thanks Ran08! X'D
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Re: Endless Corridor[GxB][Fantasy/Mystery/Slice of Life]-Rem

#18 Post by SweetChiel » Tue Jul 15, 2014 12:42 am

aww the Chrysanthemum logo is awesome! :D I wonder if they have a significant meaning in the game OvO
and the new characters are cute too. The bright colors are very cheerful c:
Though I prefer Allen wearing black for some reason *it made him look more mysterious* xD

Will the corridor theme is also cheerful like Alice in wonderland or dark? o.o
the color palette changed from dark to bright so I'm very curious about the setting xD
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#19 Post by Aruise » Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:13 pm

SweetChiel wrote:aww the Chrysanthemum logo is awesome! :D I wonder if they have a significant meaning in the game OvO
and the new characters are cute too. The bright colors are very cheerful c:
Though I prefer Allen wearing black for some reason *it made him look more mysterious* xD

Will the corridor theme is also cheerful like Alice in wonderland or dark? o.o
the color palette changed from dark to bright so I'm very curious about the setting xD
Ooh thank's for your comment again Miss Chiel, another breeze for me! QvQ)/ And yup, the flower will be "something" in the story XD

No.. the story will be much darker than AIWL and I really really tried to use darker color palette but somehow it won't turn like that! Do you have any idea about it? ;;A;;

PS: I saw your DA and hfdkjfhadk you're from Tangerang too? :shock:
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#20 Post by Akitsuki » Sat Aug 02, 2014 5:23 am

Oh, I love mystery! Though if it were me, I'd be scared to death LOL. And I hope I don't have to fight that creature.

1) What do you think of story so far?
It piqued my interest! I wonder how they'll go back to their original place and whether they'll stay there or not.

2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, maybe. The fact that he always answers with unrelated things makes me think he might be hiding something.

3) What do you expect from this VN?
Mysteries solved! Plot twists! Unexpected endings!

Good luck with your game! Doing a one person project isn't easy, but once you finish it, the feeling will be satisfying!

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#21 Post by Aruise » Tue Aug 12, 2014 4:23 pm

Akitsuki wrote:Oh, I love mystery! Though if it were me, I'd be scared to death LOL. And I hope I don't have to fight that creature.

1) What do you think of story so far?
It piqued my interest! I wonder how they'll go back to their original place and whether they'll stay there or not.

2) Who’s the most you want to know about?
Gene, maybe. The fact that he always answers with unrelated things makes me think he might be hiding something.

3) What do you expect from this VN?
Mysteries solved! Plot twists! Unexpected endings!

Good luck with your game! Doing a one person project isn't easy, but once you finish it, the feeling will be satisfying!
Aah thank you for answering my questions! latereply XD

1) Don't worry everything are already in my head little note! :3

2) Aww my little Gene got another vote! Don't forget to say thank you, 'kay? :lol:

3) Okay noted! I'll do my best to fulfill your expectations! >:3

Thank you again, Akitsuki and yeah it is ;;w;; but I determined to finish this one no matter what woohoo~! XD

-UPDATE!-

Hello everyone, just back from underworld long time no see! *waves* Sorry for no updates in a long time, this project is not dead yet! XDb
Anyway, just got time to do GUI things! :3 It was really took my time, because I'm suck at programming (all hail internet!) and drawing use mouse isn't that easy, my hand's cramps TTwTT

Here's some GUIs!

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*The BGs are just placeholder and the last one isn't mine!*

And here's a sketch for main menu.

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So... how it is? Any opinion or something like that? :'3 Oh and I'm sorry if it's OOT but... does anyone know why there is no screenshot thing(?) at my save files even it is saved? :?
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#22 Post by kisa » Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:44 pm

I love the GUI so far! OQO
*grabby hands*

As for your question, Did you make certain to define the screenshot change properly? o3o
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#23 Post by Rinima » Tue Aug 12, 2014 9:37 pm

Oh my goodness that GUI is so damn pretty :O
Your really not helping my hype levels XD
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#24 Post by Aruise » Wed Aug 13, 2014 7:59 am

kisa wrote:I love the GUI so far! OQO
*grabby hands*

As for your question, Did you make certain to define the screenshot change properly? o3o
AAAH thank you very much Kisa! thatgrabbyhand you don't know how happy I am QwQb

... OH YES you're right, deleted it by accident, gotta make it now, thanks! XD
Rinima wrote:Oh my goodness that GUI is so damn pretty :O
Your really not helping my hype levels XD
Ajfakdhksj I really really glad and happy to hear that from you, thank you very much!! QuQ)b

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I change (AGAIN) the MC's design because somehow her design before didn't match this project's theme orz Trying to use darker color palette this time _(:"3

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Her default name's Arca by the way XD soo how it is? omo
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#25 Post by kisa » Wed Aug 13, 2014 8:31 am

I'm glad my praise makes you happy. ^u^

Deleting things by accident and I are old buddies. I'm glad you found it so quickly! OuO

Arca is a pretty name. OuO (I haven't met anyone named that so it also seems weird to me. But, meh.)

Her character design would probably still match with brighter colors (since the logo is a flower) But, she looks lovely. OuOb

I used too many happy faces... OTL
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#26 Post by Akitsuki » Sun Apr 26, 2015 2:30 am

You're making a progress! Great work!! The GUIs are so simple yet elegant, I like them 8D
Well... Yeah, programming is difficult if you're not used to it yet (including me!) but at least you succeeded in making the GUIs! Congrats!!

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#27 Post by siyereeee » Sun May 31, 2015 5:26 am

Interesting~ ≧ω≦
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#28 Post by Lazy-Levia » Sun Aug 09, 2015 12:48 pm

How.. how.. I LOVE THE GUI!! *Q* It's so.. so.. beautiful.. /melted/
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