Truffle! [GxB][School life, Romance, Cooking?]

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Re: Truffle! [GxB][School life, Romance, Cooking?]

#16 Post by Akitsuki » Sun Aug 03, 2014 8:38 am

KittyKatStar wrote:Eeee it looks adorable! I love the art and premise. <3

Good luck with the project. You can do it. ^o^/
Thank you! I'm going to need that LOL. I'll do my best!
Alice PH wrote:I like Kio~ I like Seaon, Rekka, Mara~~ I LOVE KIO. Maybe because I'm kind of like that too, hahaha~ Yay~ I'm looking forwards to it ;D Because the concept is rather simple and cute so it's easy to understand, although I DO hope that this game will be longggggg but I know it might be hard on you so, it's okay if it's short. I think I might be in love with Kio more than the guys xD Searon's angry face though <3 Hm, hm, I love this!
Really? That's nice if you can relate yourself with the MC! I don't know about the length yet. I mean, the story should sound simple and straight-forward, but somehow I'm getting too excited with the writing so a simple scene might get detailed xD I really need to edit it first though. Thanks for your support! Glad if you like it!

Now, I'm preparing to make the other sprites, so I'm lining all the characters to see their height differences.
Anyway yes, Kio is pretty short LOL. Reka is good at sport so it's kinda obvious why he's the tallest.
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#17 Post by Akitsuki » Wed Aug 06, 2014 10:34 am

Finished drawing Searon's default sprite! Guess I need to practice more so I can keep up with the consistency...
Tell me what you think about it! :D
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Re: Truffle! [GxB][School life, Romance, Cooking?]

#18 Post by Hazel-Bun » Fri Aug 08, 2014 9:24 pm

I like him a lot ^^ His anatomy is kind of strange in places (elongated face with a very small ear for instance) but, he still looks good. I love the feature of winter fashion as I love it too! I agree that MC looks masculine but it fits her tomboy appeal I believe :D

Good luck with your VN! Reminds me of a sweet shoujo manga and I can't wait to read it...

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#19 Post by Laera-chan » Mon Aug 11, 2014 2:17 am

I am on this like white on rice!!!!!!!!! :lol: //shot


Seriously, though. This is adorable. Totally stalking this thread, yeah? :mrgreen:

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#20 Post by Akitsuki » Mon Aug 11, 2014 8:30 am

Hazel-Bun wrote:I like him a lot ^^ His anatomy is kind of strange in places (elongated face with a very small ear for instance) but, he still looks good. I love the feature of winter fashion as I love it too! I agree that MC looks masculine but it fits her tomboy appeal I believe :D

Good luck with your VN! Reminds me of a sweet shoujo manga and I can't wait to read it...
Ah, thank you for pointing that out! I'll fix it right away!!
Thanks for your support! I'll do my best!
Laera-chan wrote:I am on this like white on rice!!!!!!!!! :lol: //shot


Seriously, though. This is adorable. Totally stalking this thread, yeah? :mrgreen:
Thank you! I hope when it's finished, it'll be worth your stalking (?) LOL xD

Also school has started now and since I'm in last year of high school, I might get busier that I was before. And some things are going on my house now, so until I can get used to it, I might not be able to update as much. But I'll try to keep doing my hardest when there's time! Thanks for your support guys! :D

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#21 Post by Ran08 » Wed Sep 03, 2014 6:18 am

My first thought after reading this was, "Well, she doesn't have to give it to a someone she loves romantically!" But, haha, anyway...

1. What do you think of the story?
I like the premise! It's simple but it sounds sweet, and I like that. :)

2. Do you prefer the length to be short or a little longer?
For the kind of story this VN seems to have, I think it's nicer to keep it short and sweet. ^^ If you have plans of making a longer game, though, you can always just use the multi-persistent thingy. Haha.

3. Who's your favorite guy between the two?
Ahh, it's hard to choose! They're both so adorable! I think I like Searon more, though! =) Nevertheless, I'm looking forward to getting both of their routes!

4. The story is pretty expectable though, but what do you want to see?
Well, I'll play this because it sounds like such a sweet and short game, so that's exactly what I want to see. =)

Anyway, good luck! =) I hope to play this soon!

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#22 Post by CSV » Wed Sep 03, 2014 8:46 am

1. What do you think of the story?
I like it! It's simple and Kio looks like an interesting protagonist, which is something I think is hard to find in otome or GxB games.

2. Do you prefer the length to be short or a little longer?
I think it shouldn't be very long if it doesn't have a lot of choices, but it shouldn't be so short that it sounds rushed.

3. Who's your favorite guy between the two?
Searon. Also, I must agree with others that all the characters' clothing designs look amazing.

4. The story is pretty expectable though, but what do you want to see?
I just really expect it to be cute. X) Good luck in this project, I definitively want to play this game when it's released.

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#23 Post by MadlandPrincess » Fri Dec 05, 2014 12:36 am

Aww, I like this a lot. It's cute.

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#24 Post by Akitsuki » Sat Jan 10, 2015 5:18 am

Thank you for your posts and your support!

Actually I have to put this project on hiatus first before I need to focus on my study since this year I'll be graduating. Well, you know, with all the tests and preparing before entering university and such. Once it's over, I'll probably back to continuing this project :) Perhaps when I need to refresh a bit, I'll try to draw a little but I can't promise you anything at least until around August. But I hope you'll still wait for it.

And again, thank you very much!

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Re: Truffle! [GxB][School life, Romance, Cooking?]

#25 Post by AsHLeX » Sat Jan 10, 2015 9:24 am

1. What do you think of the story?
It sounds cute and fun <3 Definitely bookmarking this one!
(The art is seriously good!)
2. Do you prefer the length to be short or a little longer?
Uhm...medium length? Hehe ^^"
3. Who's your favorite guy between the two?
Mara. Scarves FTW!! (and blue hair too haha)
4. The story is pretty expectable though, but what do you want to see?
A lot of awesome art >w< (hehehehe...)

I really like your art though <3 All those clothes and colors and... OwO (I'm not an artist so i'm at a lack of words for it hehehe)
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#26 Post by MadlandPrincess » Sat Jan 24, 2015 6:24 am

Cool!

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#27 Post by recolzer » Sun Feb 08, 2015 7:53 am

Akiiiiii you make a VN !? :D //whoareyou if you don't notice me as who am I, then I'm Reko, residence of TBH too www
I hope you do your best on the exams and graduating!

Anyway it looks really cute! and I'll be answering the questions:

1. What do you think of the story?
Super cute? I don't know, but it seems the story is really refreshing, a very pure love *7* which I need to play hffngg

2. Do you prefer the length to be short or a little longer?
As I see the story.. maybe you can make it not too long and not too short? But it's more likely to be short since I think the plot won't be too heavy, will it?

3. Who's your favorite guy between the two?
CAN'T CHOOSE YOU MADE THEM BOTH ADORABLE

4. The story is pretty expectable though, but what do you want to see?
What do I want to see hmm.... Well I am hoping for a not anti-climatic ending.

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#28 Post by Aqacia » Sun Feb 08, 2015 8:58 am

I am really looking forward to playing this when it's done, it looks really cute and the character designs and art is simply stunning.

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#29 Post by Charlie599 » Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:52 am

This looks adorable~! (Such a cute little logo)
1. The story seems short and sweet (pun intended)
2. I wouldn't want you to force it to be longer just because we asked you to - whichever length best suits the story is the one I want.
3. Searon :D I love how color-coordinated he looks.
4. I'm really interested in the cooking side of things in this story so I'm curious to see how you go about explaining it all.

Good luck with this :D
P.S. I'm willing to proofread this for you ^-^

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#30 Post by kukiko-tan » Sun Apr 05, 2015 6:17 am

The very first thing which attracted me was the logo. It is well-polished, has bright colors and a cute theme, suitable for the story. It also matches the overall art style, which I enjoy, especially for the colors and character design.

:) By the way, take care at If Clauses:
“I bet >I can almost surprise< you everyday if you were my girlfriend.”
The correct way of saying it, as far as I know, is:
“I bet >I could almost surprise< you everyday if you were my girlfriend.”

1.What do you think of the story?
It has an interesting premise and I imagine it'd be a lighthearted, fun, relaxing novel.

2. Do you prefer the length to be short or a little longer?
It depends on what you want to say and how long it takes for you to do that. I believe it affects the quality of a novel when it's long/short for the sake of being long/short. I dislike it when, for instance, a TV series becomes overly long, delaying to give the ending, for the sake of keeping the series going. However, I also dislike it when it ends too abruptly, leaving out a lot of uncovered plot holes and unnecessary questions risen from confusion.

3. Who's your favorite guy between the two?
Personality-wise...I can't say I have a favorite...one is harsh and cold while the other is proud and flirtatious. Not really the kind of guys I would personally like to hang out with. Appearance-wise, they are both handsome, but I prefer Searon.

4. The story is pretty expectable though, but what do you want to see?
I'd like to see the development of the relationships between the characters and character growth, but also how will Kio respond to the problem of finding a mate.

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