Raidaa no Asahi [Coming Soon... Very Soon]
Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 2:21 am
UPDATES
December 9
Hello! Small update! First off, there have been some major content cuts. Everything is linear now. We're aiming for a total of 14 episodes, each roughly 2200 words in length. That's a total length of about 30 000 words, which is still a very length adventure, considering this is going to be completely free game.
So far, I have written about 13 000 words of the storyline. Before I go any further, I would like to have somebody proofread/edit/modify/critique what I have of the story so far. You don't need any prior experience as an editor, but it's always a plus if you do. However, you must
-be dedicated
-be a good writer
-be imaginative
-be an anime fan
Just so you know, Raidaa no Asahi is a science fiction action romantic comedy with interactive SHMUP segments. There's plenty of thrilling space action, interpersonal drama, ecchi comedy, and political intrigue! If this kind of thing interests you, please apply either in this topic or leave me a PM. Thanks! ^_^
Oh, and another thing... The entire thing's a script like in an anime. Since the entire VN is going to be structured like an anime with "episodes" for chapters, "advertisement breaks" halfway in between these episodes, and OPs and EDs before and after each episode, suffice to say, everything's done in dialouge as you would expect in an anime. I hope I was clear enough in my stage directions for you to understand what's going on, but if you're confused about anything, tell me. :3
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Hellooo... :3 I guess I should stop lurking around here and actually post a bit on what I'm working on... :3 I apologize in advance for any rules I might break with this post and for my lame art. ^_^;;;
Title: Raidaa no Asahi
Genre: Sci-Fi SHMUP-RPG-Date Sim cross over
Premise: Three girls travel the galaxy in the name of love, justice, and a little money on the side
The World
Raidaa no Asahi takes place in a complex galaxy that's taken approximately six years of my life to flesh out. There's a vast amount of literature (all of it completely disorganized and in note format and totally unfit for anyone but me to understand) on all of this, but I'll try to explain everything. ^_^ Ask me questions though if any of this stuff doesn't make sense...
The galaxy is split into three different catagories of nations.
THE SUPER POWERS: THE CATAGERY ONE NATIONS
-These nations have planets located at ideal places throughout the galaxy
-Excellent planetary conditions
-Highly industrialized nations with enormous military and economic power
-The two superpower nations are currently at war with each other
The United Tharine Alliance
This is an economic, military, and research alliance between Earth and her one hundred colonies. They have been the industrial and military powerhouse of the galaxy for centuries. The government is based around the Congress of One Hundred where a single representative from every colony and a presiding officer from Earth determins public policy for the entire Alliance. They are held together by the NAFTA Agreement: An attack on one is treated as an attack on all. However, the Alliance has become beset by corruption as of late. Earth always seeks to leave the alliance because it feels that it must take quick and decisive actions, unhindered by the voices of her colonies.
NET - The New Empire of Tropicolis
This is a new superpower. The entire nation was formed as a response to the declining power of the Tharine Alliance. They believe that true freedom can only be accomplished by eliminating all rights. Rights lead to the idea of entitlement - entitlement leads to greed - greed leads to inevitable conflict. They believe that the majority of the galaxy is being decieved by the Tharine Alliance and have embarked on a galaxy wide mission to force every individual to become free.
THE MEDIUM POWERS - CATAGERY TWO NATIONS
-Although they possess fairly comfortable planets, these nations have not yet developed the military and economic power of the category one nations
Halflander Resistance
They're a conquered nation of enlightened scholars who are fighting against their PACT invaders.
The Nation of Aquamaria
The banking capital of the galaxy. They have declared themselves neutral in the Tharine and NET war and are making a fortune out of selling arms to both sides. Because every nation in the galaxy depends on them to supply arms, they have no need to develop a military.
THE OUTLAW POWERS - CATAGERY THREE NATIONS
-These nations live on remote planets that are barely hospitable to life.
-Contains the vast majority of the population
PACT (People’s Alliance for Common Treatment)
They're a powerful force in thousands of planets outside the control of Tharine and NET forces. A band of assorted criminals, pirates, and desperate individuals who are willing to do anything to survive. Famine, disease, and continual warfare in the catagory three nations lead millions to join the PACT every year.
The Characters
Kaito Jirou
Role: The player character
Gender: M
Age: 20
Hobbies: Collecting strange artifacts from across the galaxy, writing in his journal
Brief Description: Completely 100% average guy who's life gets turned upside down when he meets the SunRiders.
Birth Place: Earth, Japan
Family Background: His father's a salaryman who works for the recycled paper industry. His mother runs a little traditonal Japanese bakery.
Brief History: He's always wanted to fly into the stars ever since he was little, but his down-to-earth father forbade him to join the Tharine Fleet Military Academy. Now he's the captain onboard the civilian cargo ship, UTA Bluebird.
THE SUNRIDERS
The following three characters are the primary dateable characters! Hope you find atleast one that suits your tastes. :3 They're a team of space rogues who are travelling through the galaxy in the name of love, justice, and some money on the side. (Or atleast that's their slogan anyways) In fact, they all have much more personal reasons for flying through the stars...
Ikkari Ichinaya
Role: Tsundere leader of the SunRiders
Age: 19
Gender: F
Hobbies: Collecting ancient Japanese swords, Gothic Lolita fashion
Brief History: Her family was killed by PACT space pirates when she was 12; she joined the SunRiders so that she can avenge their deaths
Birth Place: Earth, Japan
Personality Quirks:
-She comes as being cold and distant at first, who's focused completely on avenging her family. But in the inside, she cares deeply about her teammates and is scared of losing them like she did her family.
-She's a rabid fan of Gothic Lolita fashion, but is too embarressed to admit it, leading to amusing sitations where she must hide her hobby from her teammates.
-Her favorite food is super spicy ramen noodles. She can't stand raisins though.
-Her most prized possession is a teddy bear her father gave to her when she was little - the only thing she has left of her family.
Asaga Okashi
Role: Jack of all trades rogue of the SunRiders
Age: 19
Gender: F
Hobbies: Gambling, partying, playing pranks on everyone else, playing crazy difficult bullet-curtain-hell SHMUP games
Brief History: Her father is a very influential Aquamarian arms dealer who supplies both the NET and Tharine military with new technologically advanced weapons. Her mother divorced her father, unwilling to live with an arms dealer. Asaga left her aristocratic life of privilege soon afterwards and joined the SunRiders. She believes she can undo the damage her father causes across the galaxy by helping others. Secretely wishes that she could return to the old days of her childhood before the war when her father was a honest computer hardware businessman.
Birth Place: Aquamaria
Likes: Gambling, adventure, excitement, shopping, spending money, pulling pranks on everyone else.
Dislikes: Boredom, cruelty
Fears: Growing old
Personality Quirks
-Loves to gamble, but isn't very good at it. Usually ends up losing most of the team's money.
-Also loves to party and go shopping, further spending most of the team's money. On the other hand, it's her that's usually always complaining about the team's "abysmal" financial situation most of the time...
-Has an absolute heart of gold however; she's always willing to go the extra mile to help others.
-Her favorite food is sushi. She is absolutely mortified by instant "add water and you're done" meals though...
-She's a total fan of hellishly difficult "bullet-curtain" SHMUP (Japanese shoot 'em up) games. She seems to have almost godly reflexes when it comes to video games...
-She's very superstitous... She thinks its bad luck for a woman to be on a ship and thinks the SunRider is doomed. Black birds are a century's worth of bad luck. She sprinkles a bit of salt on her Ryder before every mission. Ikkari thinks she's absolutely nuts.
-She's always playing pranks on Chigara
Chigara Akahadi
Role: The shy brains behind the SunRiders
Age: 18
Gender: F
Hobbies: Inventing new gadgets and gizmos, reading, writing, daydreaming
Brief History: She was separated from her family four years ago during a PACT attack on her home planet. She's been a refugee ever since. She joined the SunRiders to find her family. She misses her older brother in particular.
Birthplace: Half
Pets: A mechanical puppy she invented, named "Momo-kun"
Likes: Books, manga, mechanical manuals, peace, quiet
Dislikes: Noisy machines (she's always trying to invent better forms of noise suppression), mean people, boys (she's shy around them), bugs, heights, small spaces, the dark, mice, ghosts
Personality Quirks
-Tends to say the first syllable of her name, "Chiii..." whenever she gets flustered or nervous (which is quite often)
-Tends to be reserved and soft spoken
-Her most prized possession is her old brother's right glove. When she was seperated from her family four years ago on Half, her brother told her to hold onto his hand no matter what. Her entire family and a thousand other refugees were in the middle of boarding an emergency shuttle off the planet when the PACT fleet commenced bombing operations on the planet. Her family managed to board the shuttle, but there was no more room for her and she and countless other desperate refugees were shoved off the shuttle by government troops. She never let go of her brother's hand, but the glove he happened to be wearing at that time slipped off, leaving Chigara stranded on the planet with only his glove as the sole memory of her family.
-Ikkari is sympathetic towards Chigara and is always trying to protect her
-She can usually see Asaga's pranks coming, but she always pretends to fall for them to be a good sport
-Her favorite food is strawberry ice cream. She hates the taste of leeks.
THE UBER SHORT AND CONDENSED STORY OF HOW THE SUNRIDERS WAS FORMED
Asaga decides to run away from her father once she realizes that he doesn't care about her or for her mother. Together with Ikkari and Chigara, they steal his latest weapon of war, the SunRider, a top secret Destroyer-class capital ship that was going to be delievered to the NET government, declare themselves the SunRiders, and head off into the stars.
THE SUNRIDER, PHOENIX, BLACK JACK, AND LIBERTY
The SunRider, as stated before, is a Destroyer-Class capital ship. There are seven different classifications of capital ships, corvette, frigate, destroyer, cruiser, battle cruiser, battleship, and dreadnought. (listed in order of increasing power) I have alot of literature on the exact specifications of each class, but I won't write all that here for the sake of space. :3 A Destroyer-Class means that it's a small-sized capital ship that has the equivalent firepower of a cruiser, but the speed and maneuvrability of a frigate. In other words, it's heavily armed and fast, but it doesn't have much in the way of armor. It also carries three Ryders - small starfighters - that can provide support as well.
With the assistance of an onboard ship AI, the SunRider can be effectively controlled by a single pilot. Piloted by Kaito.
A 3D model of the SunRider: Rear view
PHOENIX
-The first Ryder carried by the SunRider. Piloted by Ikkari.
Rear view of the Phoenix
BLACK JACK
-The second Ryder carried by the SunRider. Piloted by Asaga.
Front view of the Black Jack
LIBERTY
-The third Ryder carried by the SunRider. Piloted by Chigara.
Front view of the Liberty
***exact specifications of each Ryder to come... Will change greately based on in-game balance and enjoyability.
THE FIREHAWKE UNIT
The primary villians! They're three super hot boys chasing your girls throughout the galaxy... Except they want to vaporize them instead of doing anything perverted with them... They're the top aces of the Tharine Fleet and have been ordered to eliminate the SunRiders for the betterment of humanity. The Tharine Government has assigned the SunRider a threat to national security and have placed its destruction at top priority.
Kryst Nook
Age: 21
Gender: M
Role: Cold, scheming, merciless leader of the FireHawke Unit.
Brief History: He has become the leader of the FireHawke Unit primarily thanks to the influence of his father in the Tharine Fleet. Many question his true qualifications for this role.
Likes: Results, success, respect
Dislikes: Shame, humiliation
Life goals: To defeat those pesky SunRiders
Character Quirks
-Extremely paranoid of others who question his authority
-An extremely dangerous pilot
Helio Apollo
Age: 21
Gender: M
Role: Cold and calculating strategist of the FireHawke Unit
Brief History: Rumored to have an IQ of 400, widely viewed as the smartest man in the entire Tharine Alliance. Many believe it should be he who should lead the FireHawke Unit.
Character Quirks
-Almost emotionless - thinks only in statistics and numbers
-Holds no respect for Kryst - believes that it should be he who should lead the FireHawke Unit.
-Wears glasses
Rai Stargazer
Age: 19
Gender: M
Hobbies: Playing video games, soccer, dating cute girls
Role: Laid back and easy going, the joker of the FireHawke Unit.
Brief History: An excellent Ryder pilot, Rai was selected to be the final member of the Firehawke Unit. While overshadowed by the two other members of the team, he is the most level headed of the unit and provides the team with much needed sensitivity.
Life Goals: To date atleast one girl from every planet in the galaxy
Pets: A goldfish named Nemo-kun
Character Quirks
-Can't stand diet cheese... Anything but diet cheese...
Hah! That seems like a good place to stop for now...
Oh..... But before I finish.....
Behold my crappy, derivative art style!
A promo picture! >^_^<
Yeah, it's not that great... >_>;;; I'm a story writer, what can I say! ^_^
It's soooooooooo unoriginal... It looks like Eika from Sky Girls in a ZAFT Red coat! Gah! *shoots self* >_<
Whew... That's one helluva long post. ._.;
Let me gather my thoughts a bit... And then I'll start talking about the gameplay mechanics...