Plat du Jour [1-13-09]

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Re: Plat du Jour [11-11-08: Rennovations]

#61 Post by PyTom » Sat Nov 22, 2008 4:54 am

I'm also wondering what will happen with multiple lines of text. Will they start to overlap the image on the left?
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Re: Plat du Jour [11-11-08: Rennovations]

#62 Post by monele » Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:29 am

Yeah, try going for a more opaque, or darker (or both) background for the text box :). The background looks nice. Good perspective :)

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Re: Plat du Jour [11-11-08: Rennovations]

#63 Post by sake-bento » Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:56 pm

Thanks for the comments. Made the box darker and more opaque and rotated the spatula to not be in the way. I also muted the background a bit to not be so obnoxiously bright.
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Re: Plat du Jour [11-11-08: Rennovations]

#64 Post by Vari » Sun Nov 23, 2008 1:39 am

It's odd, but... the lineart makes her look a lot more mature than the colored version - to the point that I would believe it if you told me they were two different people (or the same person at different ages). The lineart has her face (chin, anyway) a bit more pointed, and the colored version seems to have squished the face a bit, vertically speaking. This makes the cheeks a bit more chubby, making her seem younger in that instance.

So, now I'm curious: Which were you trying for?

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Re: Plat du Jour [11-11-08: Rennovations]

#65 Post by monele » Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:36 am

I totally agree with Vari, she looks older/taller :). Was it intentional?

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Re: Plat du Jour [11-11-08: Rennovations]

#66 Post by LVUER » Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:34 pm

The new art is obviously better but it make her radically different. It almost as if she's grown mature (same person different age). It's alright if your intention is indeed changes Kurara's image. But if it isn't, then you should tweak her anatomy and shorten her chin a little.
Old Kurara = cute
New Kurara = pretty

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Re: Plat du Jour [11-11-08: Rennovations]

#67 Post by sake-bento » Mon Nov 24, 2008 3:59 am

So uh...Kiyo says he's not too fond of the lineart and stuff so...pretend you never saw that. >.>

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Re: Plat du Jour [02-10-09: Progress, Sample Art]

#68 Post by sake-bento » Wed Feb 11, 2009 12:29 am

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Not dead yet.

Writing is moving faster than artwork. Looking to complete the first route within the month. Hopefully NaNoRenO will give me some much-needed motivation.
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Re: Plat du Jour [02-10-09: Progress, Sample Art]

#69 Post by monele » Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:23 am

It looks like we said something she didn't like o_o..... I'm glad this is still going :D

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Re: Plat du Jour [02-20-09: Sketch, New Members]

#70 Post by sake-bento » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:57 am

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--strawberrybocky

And we have a composer and a BG artist now. :D I'm surrounded by talented people. orz

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Re: Plat du Jour [02-26-09: BG]

#71 Post by sake-bento » Thu Feb 26, 2009 11:34 am

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New BG, courtesy yu_eriyama.

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Re: Plat du Jour [02-26-09: BG]

#72 Post by monele » Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:33 pm

Filter + postwork?... Interesting result :)

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Re: Plat du Jour [02-26-09: BG]

#73 Post by Samu-kun » Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:50 pm

Nice. Will the artist be contributing all the backgrounds from now on? =3

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Re: Plat du Jour [02-26-09: BG]

#74 Post by sake-bento » Thu Feb 26, 2009 2:58 pm

Yes indeed.

They're a mix of photography and filtering, and some are 3D renders. I'm pretty pleased with the results so far.

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Re: Plat du Jour [02-26-09: BG]

#75 Post by LVUER » Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:12 pm

Wow. At first glance, I thought that the BG is hand-drawn. Although several seconds later, after seeing too many details, I know that it's a filtered photo.

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