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Mujinchitai (Horror/Suspense VN)

#1 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 2:27 am

Mujinchitai, or No Man's Land, is my third visual novel game. The second visual novel I was working on is unreleased and may end up being released after this game.


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Mujinchitai means "No Man's Land" in Japanese. The game takes place in an isolated island with very few people, if any, living there.

The story of this visual novel game takes place in Japan. One day, a class goes on a field trip to an island maybe 4 miles away from Japan. When the students arrive, everything goes well, with everyone having fun and nobody getting hurt. However, the last group of kids return to the dock to find their class, with their boat, leaving home already. The sky gets dark and all kinds of ghosts, zombies, monsters, and serial killers/psychotic people come out from hiding. The main character and his friends must do all they can to survive until they can get help.


Characters (sorry for big images. I'll fix them later)
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Kai Yamazaki
Age: 16
Information: The protagonist of the story. He's your typical shounen boy.


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Ai Plectranthus
Age: 16
Information: The princess of another planet and Kai's friend and classmate. She tells her friends that her reason for coming to Earth was to meet other races. Her name means "love".

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Akihiko Yamada
Age: 16
Information: One of Kai's friends and classmate. Akihiko, or Aki (nickname given to him by Kai), is smart and in most times he can get out of trouble. He's also crazy about weapons and is excellent with guns (BB gun training). He may look like a nerd, well he is one, but once he takes off those glasses, he turns into a bishounen. Akihiko used to date with many girls, but they never work out because more girls come after him, which is why he makes himself look as nerdy as possible. His name means "bright" or "prince".

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Akane Kawasaki
Age: 15
Information: One of Ai's friends and classmate. She's smart, energetic, and outgoing. She's a year younger than most of her classmates, but that doesn't scare her or anything. Out of all her friends in her class, she likes Makoto the most because he's always shy. Her name means "brilliant red".


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Makoto Saito
Age: 15
Information: One of Kai's friends and classmate. He's another younger student in the class, like Akane. He's very timid and sometimes too friendly and quiet, due to constant teasing and bullying. Kai and his friends try to comfort him as much as they can. Makoto has some feelings for Akane. He also has a tendency of going crazy whenever the pressure of a situation is tight or when he's in danger. His name means "true".

???
Age:???
Information: The character that wanders around the island to complete his mission. He's not a human, but he's not hostile.

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Minor Characters

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Mizuki Yamazaki
Age: 17
Information: Kai's older sister. She's very smart, but she's very childish. Since she graduated already, she stays home and helps her mother with housework and takes care of the house when her mother is out.


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Kaori Plectranthus
Age: 21
Information: All the main character's teacher and Ai's older sister. She's very strict, therefore, she loves her students and cares about them.

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Yuu Ashida
Age: 25
Information: The lousy police officer that escorts the students to the island. Yuu is very rude, stupid, and selfish. The man is so bad, even monsters and zombies avoid him (figure of speech). He patrols the island at night to see if the "monsters" are real.
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Ai's ear is a bit funny looking, but Krapmaster took a whole week to finish this.


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So far, the workers are:

Story: Cybeat
Character Designer: Cybeat
Artist: Skythnir, Krapmaster
Programmer: Cybeat
BG Artist: 背景素材提供
入江ささ
YWAKA
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Skythnir
Cybeat

Musician: Cybeat, Stardust Recordz

Opening/Action Scenes: honoreixix

Plans (may change):
1. 100,000 words
2. Sudden pop up images
3. Some "Covert Front" style gameplay
4. Three Endings
5. Event CG's
6. Gore (Probably rated M)
7. Cameo appearance (from my other games). If possible, you can ask me to add in "your" game character.


If anybody wants to help out, let me know. Members will get credited, of course. I'll update this thread whenever I can.

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Re: No Man's Land (working title)

#2 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:06 pm

Update:

I made the first music.

That's all for this update.
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Re: No Man's Land (working title)

#3 Post by bloodywyvern » Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:22 pm

*clap* I like the premise of the story, if done as I'm hoping you do. I like Akane Kawasaki the best (as she's the closest to a loli ^_^).
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#4 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 7:49 pm

Closest to loli, haha. I hope it turns out like I planned, too. I haven't even started yet. My partner is still drawing and I'm still making music.
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Re: No Man's Land (working title)

#5 Post by bloodywyvern » Tue Apr 01, 2008 7:55 pm

Well then you -have- started, just not on the writing :wink: All the pieces are important, so if your working on even one of them, you ARE working.

And yes closest to loli ^_^ *whisper* eroge? xD
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#6 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 7:59 pm

Nope. It'll have gore though (slashing off zombie heads). Maybe a little fan service to ease the scariness?
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#7 Post by bloodywyvern » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:01 pm

As long as that fan service involves the close to loli girl O.o
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#8 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:04 pm

lol. I'll see what I can do. Any suggestions? It'd be great to hear some, so I can satisfy my readers. I'll post my game in a Japanese site after I translate it.
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#9 Post by bloodywyvern » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:10 pm

Um let's see...they meet a ghost who actually seems to be friendly, except for the fact he is a total pervert. Using his ability to temporarily fade in to reality, he takes every opportunity to lift girls skirts! O.o hey that's what you get for asking (though, I'd rather not clutter your thread any further. So any response can be PMed to me XD)
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#10 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:13 pm

Perverted ghosts? I don't know about that one. The game needs to stay scary. Also, clutter away!!!! This place could really use some posts. Post everything that's in your mind.
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#11 Post by MorphineSoldier » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:16 pm

Cybeat wrote:Perverted ghosts? I don't know about that one. The game needs to stay scary.
Phantom Tentacles. >.>
They grab and writhe all over bodies and stuffs. Panty shots just happen to be an inevitable side product of the process.

Or there's any billion reasons to fall over in frightening situations.

Re-reading your summary: Also, if there's serial killers and psychotic people, why not serial rapists or molesters? They're no less common, and probably far more frightening to females than any murderer.
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#12 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:18 pm

That's......something. Is there such thing as a hentai/horror game? Never heard of it, but it might work.
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#13 Post by bloodywyvern » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:21 pm

MorphineSoldier wrote: Phantom Tentacles. >.>
They grab and writhe all over bodies and stuffs. Panty shots just happen to be an inevitable side product of the process.

Or there's any billion reasons to fall over in frightening situations.

Re-reading your summary: Also, if there's serial killers and psychotic people, why not serial rapists or molesters? They're no less common, and probably far more frightening to females than any murderer.
I like the way you think! Especially if it involves pretty little Loli's <3

Ahem...>.>

I still say those psychotic people should work separated from the zombies, but that's just me. A three war of survival, except one of the groups is a school group ho don't know s***. Hmm, I don't like rape though T_T can't they -want- it just a bit (of course in that case, THEY ARE 18...all of them >.> *tries not to laugh)
Cybeat wrote:That's......something. Is there such thing as a hentai/horror game? Never heard of it, but it might work.
Pfft, I don't know. Bible Black and Discipline horrified me pretty well...
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#14 Post by MorphineSoldier » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:24 pm

Cybeat wrote:That's......something. Is there such thing as a hentai/horror game? Never heard of it, but it might work.
Bible Black and Discipline were mentioned.
Also try DIVIDEAD, which is A.) A classic, and B.) the only time I've ever been scared of a porn game.
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#15 Post by Cybeat » Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:28 pm

Hmm. I'll drop the hentai thing. Fan service is good enough. I'm aiming for people aged 15-18 or over.
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