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Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2015 7:38 pm
by Ozurie
Author's Note: Hello! This is my first time creating an otome ;o; I don't know much, but those who are interested or can give me some tips, please don't hesitate. Thank you!!
PLOT:
A girl wakes up in a strange, vibrant world with amnesia. There, she meets a policeman who came from the same world as her but cannot speak, a doll who only has an interest in girls, a scientist who accidentally turned himself much younger than his actual age, a flower girl who cannot leave her flower pot, and a powerful demon who knows a method on how to get her memories back!
You play as the girl, find out what was your past (or not), choose a lover, and decide what you want to do afterwards.
CHARACTERS:
[click to see full sprite!]
FEATURES:
Different Endings + CGs
Due to recruiters, we can finally make this official!! ;v; I'm still looking for a BG artist You can easily get in contact with me on my tumblr. Thank you!
DONE:
Sprites: About 50% Done!
CGs: 10% [Getting Started]
Everything Else: No
Story&Art: Ozurie
Co-Writer: XxScarletxRosexX
Proofreader/Editor: Chasing Summer
Programmer: Dre@_0re0
Music:
Murasato
More to be added soon i think ;v;
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2015 9:12 am
by polarisked
I'm sorry I can't give any advice bc I suck ugh ugh BUT I have to say I /love/ your art style and colouring!! *q*
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2015 10:26 pm
by Ozurie
polarisked wrote:I'm sorry I can't give any advice bc I suck ugh ugh BUT I have to say I /love/ your art style and colouring!! *q*
Thank you very much!! ;O;
Idk if I started off too big, but if I don't find a partner(s) then i might start another project solo (most likely a VN) so that I can learn as I create it.
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 3:37 am
by Chasing Summer
I agree with polarisked that the colouring style is absolutely beautiful. The amnesia plot is somewhat overused, but it could also take a unique twist depending on the execution.
Pmed you!
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:36 pm
by Dre@_0re0
I can help if you don't put this on hiatus just yet. I like the plot and the characters that you created and beside the characters might be fun to interact with from the bios.
So pmed you too.
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 2:24 am
by Ozurie
SO HAPPY ♥ TY FOR YOUR LOVELY PMs!! ;o;
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:25 am
by riiko08
Oh my! Your art is so pretty!!!
And I'm likinng the premise so far!
As mentioned, the amnesia bit is already overused, but I'd like to see how you make it unique and interesting.
Idk if I could be of help with anything, but I sure love to help you out *v*
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 9:54 am
by Agashi
Oh, this has potential! I'm a little sad that there isn't much of a plot yet, but this is definitely fertile ground for a potential writer to come in and work some magic. The character designs are all really interesting and make me want to learn more about this world and how all the characters got there.
Good luck! Hopefully more details come out soon!
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:35 pm
by Ozurie
Thank you very much to the both of you!! ;v; And i hope that i'm able to execute the amnesia idea very well and avoid the cliches!!
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2015 12:05 am
by Hazel-Bun
Looks very cute! I like the unique characters and hope that you can execute the amnesia theme well ^^ If you ever need some help with GUI down the road, let me know!
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2015 7:56 pm
by Lesleigh63
This has lovely looking art and the ideas for the characters are wonderful. Bit of a cringe with the amnesia thing hopefully you will have a plot that will do your characters justice (such great descriptions).
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2015 11:52 pm
by projectotome
I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR ART! Its gorgeous <3 If you need any help in designing logos or such, I'll gladly help out, so hit me up if you'd like~ ^^/
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2015 10:46 am
by YuukiCrossPudding
Oh my gosh, I'm totally in love with this!
The art are lovely /////
Also I clicked because it have GxB and GxB options and Mystery tag on it.
The concepts are interesting and especially how you portray the characters <3
Wish you guys all the best with this project and I'll be keeping eye on it!
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2015 3:33 am
by Ozurie
Since there hasn't been any updates (mostly all due to my own fault since i'm a very busy college student) I was thinking about delaying this project for a better time but since its beginning to take notice again its motivating me to continue the script ;v; thank you very much to those who are looking forward to this and i hope that this game doesn't disappoint you!
Re: Re:Collect [Mystery Otome] [GxB, GxG]
Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2015 12:14 pm
by sunTARIA
i love the art (you've heard this a lot of times tho huh xD)
even though i haven't played i already love it by the soft tone of your art style and coloring!
:3
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