Tsundere-sama [GxB][Romance, Otome, Comedy, Free]

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Re: Tsundere-sama [Romance, Otome, Comedy, Free]

#61 Post by Suika » Wed Jan 11, 2017 9:56 pm

I get super excited when you post updates to this \(^o^)////
I love the new style!

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#62 Post by hiko27 » Thu Jan 12, 2017 1:21 am

Suika wrote:I get super excited when you post updates to this \(^o^)////
I love the new style!
And I'm always excited when someone posts about the updates, so thank you very much!!
Haha thank you, I'm surprised it was very noticeable, but it's probably just because I like the way that came out.
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#63 Post by Xandra » Sat May 13, 2017 2:49 pm

I LOVE the concept of this game and I'm really interested to see how it all unfolds! I'm especially excited for the tsun x tsun route. Please stick with this!

1. What type of tsundere would you prefer? Describe or give an example if you can (include the name/series in case I don't know it). Are you fine with tsunderes who get violent, or just tsun?
I lean toward "Type A" because that just seems like it'd be the most fun. But I think so long as the MC's characterization is consistent and suits the overall tone of the story, she'll be great. I like her design! She's very pretty and definitely gives off that 'tsun' vibe. xD

2. What do you feel about protagonists who only fully develop and grow as a person just in their love story, as opposed to having outside influences (ie friends, or just non-romantic events that build the character)?
I don't have a problem with that. I think if outside influences naturally come up while you're writing the story, then great. If not, there's no need to force it. There's nothing wrong with having a more focused story.

3. Comment on characters so far? Any Mary Sue/Marty Stu's? Let me know.
No, my mary/gary stu radar did not go off, and I think if you're aware of potential mary sue problems you're going to be just fine. I'm liking both girls' personalities/designs! I'm really interested to see the guys next! :)

4. Any questions about the game so far? Having questions thrown at me about characters and the gameplay would help me look at every part of the game, and see if there are any holes in them.
None at the moment as it looks like the questions I had were answered earlier in the thread. I'll definitely be checking this page for updates from time to time. Good luck!!
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#64 Post by hiko27 » Mon Jul 10, 2017 5:06 pm

Xandra wrote:I LOVE the concept of this game and I'm really interested to see how it all unfolds! I'm especially excited for the tsun x tsun route. Please stick with this!

1. What type of tsundere would you prefer? Describe or give an example if you can (include the name/series in case I don't know it). Are you fine with tsunderes who get violent, or just tsun?
I lean toward "Type A" because that just seems like it'd be the most fun. But I think so long as the MC's characterization is consistent and suits the overall tone of the story, she'll be great. I like her design! She's very pretty and definitely gives off that 'tsun' vibe. xD

2. What do you feel about protagonists who only fully develop and grow as a person just in their love story, as opposed to having outside influences (ie friends, or just non-romantic events that build the character)?
I don't have a problem with that. I think if outside influences naturally come up while you're writing the story, then great. If not, there's no need to force it. There's nothing wrong with having a more focused story.

3. Comment on characters so far? Any Mary Sue/Marty Stu's? Let me know.
No, my mary/gary stu radar did not go off, and I think if you're aware of potential mary sue problems you're going to be just fine. I'm liking both girls' personalities/designs! I'm really interested to see the guys next! :)

4. Any questions about the game so far? Having questions thrown at me about characters and the gameplay would help me look at every part of the game, and see if there are any holes in them.
None at the moment as it looks like the questions I had were answered earlier in the thread. I'll definitely be checking this page for updates from time to time. Good luck!!
HOLY CRAP I FORGOT TO REPLY TO THIS! This reply is two or three months late, so I sincerely apologize for that ><

Thank you for the response btw! Let me try and reply to this as much as I can.
1. Gotcha about the consistency, I'll hopefully be able to deliver on that. And thank you!

2. I think the reason why I put this question up is because in most otome games, there's always the bestfriend/confidante role, and this person feels more like a plot tool (sometimes to check up on the guys' affections even), and that makes me a little sad because who wouldn't want to have a bestfriend to gush about stuff with, or just someone to relate to that's of the same sex/gender? I think for this, instead of focusing on the romance and just seeing if the friendship falls into place, it might be the opposite. Like Suika said earlier, friendship hits home for most people, which is why it's more relatable. I might just do the whole "the MC is just trying to improve herself, and trying to make friends, and it just so happens that one of these guys happen to like her for who she is, warts and all." I feel that sends a more positive message wherein it's okay to not have a boyfriend by the end of the game, you're still your awesome self. But idk, I'm still playing with that idea, and I'll have to see if I can let both of these go together seamlessly.

3. Thank you! I'm so used to drawing girls, so tbh, I'm sorta nervous about drawing the guys but as of right now, I'm actually discussing the whole game, and the guys with a friend of mine. So hopefully, I'll have more stuff to post about them later on :D



UPDATE: The whole hime/kuu/dan kind of thing might be removed, because now that I look at it, it feels like I'm trying to cram so many deres into one game. Though I might use the idea (one guy liking a certain type of dere) for a different game. Maybe for Kaoru lol
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MC's design is being redone as well. Since I'm removing the whole hime/kuu/dan thing, I had to change her design as well to make it seem less hime. Title is still the same, I do have an idea on how to make it work.
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Re: Tsundere-sama [Romance, Otome, Comedy, Free]

#65 Post by Suika » Fri Jul 14, 2017 12:10 am

hiko27 wrote: UPDATE: The whole hime/kuu/dan kind of thing might be removed, because now that I look at it, it feels like I'm trying to cram so many deres into one game. Though I might use the idea (one guy liking a certain type of dere) for a different game. Maybe for Kaoru lol
Reducing the scope might not be a bad thing. In any case I'm here for Tsun Squared!
hiko27 wrote: MC's design is being redone as well. Since I'm removing the whole hime/kuu/dan thing, I had to change her design as well to make it seem less hime. Title is still the same, I do have an idea on how to make it work.
Aww :'( I really liked the idea of having the hime look with a tsundere attitude. The new sketch looks good though ^.^

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#66 Post by hiko27 » Fri Jul 14, 2017 2:19 am

Suika wrote:
hiko27 wrote: UPDATE: The whole hime/kuu/dan kind of thing might be removed, because now that I look at it, it feels like I'm trying to cram so many deres into one game. Though I might use the idea (one guy liking a certain type of dere) for a different game. Maybe for Kaoru lol
Reducing the scope might not be a bad thing. In any case I'm here for Tsun Squared!
hiko27 wrote: MC's design is being redone as well. Since I'm removing the whole hime/kuu/dan thing, I had to change her design as well to make it seem less hime. Title is still the same, I do have an idea on how to make it work.
Aww :'( I really liked the idea of having the hime look with a tsundere attitude. The new sketch looks good though ^.^
It's mostly because now that I had the time to plan out how each tsun combo was gonna play out, it kind of made it hard. It's probably just me, but I didn't know how to make a dandere more tsun with it being obvious she's both. I may put it back there again once I've managed to figure it out, but for now, let's say I'm removing it. TSUN SQUARED FTW!

As for the design, same. I love hime hairstyles, I kid you not. I always seem to draw girls with hime hairstyles so I might do two different looks to the MC, just cause the hime is my personal fave lol.
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#67 Post by hiko27 » Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:40 pm

UPDATE: Okay, Suika has indirectly convinced me. Default would be the hime hairstyle, but because I already have the other hairstyle in there, I figured I might as well keep it in case I ever needed it (aka I'm hoarding layers rn).
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#68 Post by skyeworks » Fri Aug 04, 2017 3:48 pm

hiko27 wrote:
Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:40 pm
UPDATE: Okay, Suika has indirectly convinced me. Default would be the hime hairstyle, but because I already have the other hairstyle in there, I figured I might as well keep it in case I ever needed it (aka I'm hoarding layers rn).

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YES! (Sorry I too, liked the Hime style) Can't wait to play the game!
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#69 Post by Suika » Mon Aug 14, 2017 10:47 pm

hiko27 wrote:
Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:40 pm
UPDATE: Okay, Suika has indirectly convinced me. Default would be the hime hairstyle, but because I already have the other hairstyle in there, I figured I might as well keep it in case I ever needed it (aka I'm hoarding layers rn).
Yay!! :P
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Fri Aug 04, 2017 3:48 pm
YES! (Sorry I too, liked the Hime style) Can't wait to play the game!
Hime allies! >:)

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#70 Post by skyeworks » Mon Aug 14, 2017 11:48 pm

Suika wrote:
Mon Aug 14, 2017 10:47 pm
hiko27 wrote:
Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:40 pm
UPDATE: Okay, Suika has indirectly convinced me. Default would be the hime hairstyle, but because I already have the other hairstyle in there, I figured I might as well keep it in case I ever needed it (aka I'm hoarding layers rn).
Yay!! :P
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Fri Aug 04, 2017 3:48 pm
YES! (Sorry I too, liked the Hime style) Can't wait to play the game!
Hime allies! >:)
YAY HIME ALLIES!

THANK YOU FOR CONVINCING HER! Hime is best~!
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