Sleepover[BxB][Romance, Friendship][PG-16]

[kyakyakyu]

So...
Hi (?)

This VN is rated R-18 for the uncensored/censored sex scene and still rated PG-16 for Sammy's angelic, delightful manners.
This is a collab with my friend, but yeah, I just. So. (?)
It should've been in the adult content part for the R-18 part, but I want to focus on PG-16 a.k.a shounen ai part here.

CHARACTERS
I won't reveal the plot first before revealing the characters, because, why can it exist without characters?

Joshua Geraldyn Geovanni
POV of the game (except for the secret scene). A soft, gentle youth that has suffered an illness for his lifetime, thus making him weak outside. Inside, he's a strong, kind man. Once a homeschooling student, he now attends a public school. He is quite popular in his new school, but he's only loyal to his 2 best friends, Andrew and Sammy. He is an American-Japanese, but never reveals his Japanese nature mentally. Instead of Josh, he prefers to be called Jo more. Depending on the player's option, he may or may not be Andrew's chosen one.

Andrew Lim
A quiet nerd. He prefers spending his time in library than wasting his time doing sports. His feeling is hard to read, as he quickly hides whenever he feels sad or angry. Loves Jo and Sammy to the bottom of his heart, since they both are only his best friends. He's a tsundere when it comes to Sammy, but soft and caring when it comes to Jo. A Chinese. Depending on the player's option, he may or may not be Jo's chosen one.

Sammy Tjiu
A bastard. I'll tell you some of his lines.
"Well, son of a dick." "I guess I can't stop up, for fuck sake." "Fuck, fuck, fuck fuck fuck."
You will either hate him or love him once you saw him. He's an Indonesian, thus his terrible grammatical error. He is one kind of a pervert, yet feeling that he's 'fabulous', 'awesome', and all those stuffs while he always got lowest grade and rank at school. However, when it comes to stamina, no one could beat him. He has a dark backstory, thus him today. He's a bisexual, and attracted to both Jo and Andrew despite being his best friends.
(And no, no Indonesian people have an attitude like him. That's so far what I know.)

Lloyd Geovanni
NPC. Runs Fisherkron Company, a big multilateral company. He's Jo's father-like brother. Despite being the eldest, he can't spend his time too much on his siblings, but still works his best to do whatever he can in order to help his only brother.

PLOT
Jo was attending a public school in hospitalization.
But that time, it was different.
Jo was late, because his medication took a long time. Fortunately, Andrew, his best friend was also late at that time. They were both given a science fair project which took two months to finish. But Andrew was different. Days passed, and he showed a lot of attraction towards Jo, which made Jo confused. The last project creation day will decide their fate; will they stay as best friends, or becoming the other one...?

PLANS!
So far I'm ready to recruit a BG artist, voice actors, another CG and sprite artist, aaaand beta-testers. But since the game's not done yet, I won't post a recruitment thread unless the VN's 75%~95% done.
There are approx. more than 8 endings in total (shounen ai version and yaoi version). Getting the 'true' ending of the yaoi version in the VN will unlock a secret scene of Sammy x Jo x Andrew.

Sorry, but due to me and my partner that doesn't have any progress in the art yet, we don't provide screenshots for the game yet!

Q&As!
It'll be focusing more on the PG-16.
1. I'm still confused on which illness will Jo adopt. Any suggestion? Short detail, he will get weaker and weaker in impulse and movement. He will also get even more easier to faint.
2. What do you think about the plot?
3. What about the character? Which character do you like, and why?
4. Will mature filter be prompted at the beginning of the game or during the game?
5. Is a demo version of the game recommended?
6. Do you have any other comments, suggestions, or critiques towards the overall of the VN?

Sorry, I got confused whenever I should put this on WIP or ideas, since I've developed the script, but it's just the script QvQ

[lilliesandcoffee]

Hi there!

1. I'm no expert on chronic illnesses, but maybe give him a heart condition that worsens over time?
2. To be honest I'm not sure what to think since there's barely enough in what you posted for me to form a conclusion, but I can say that I'm kind of interested. It sounds simple but sometimes simplicity goes a long way
3. I like Sammy 'cause he's Indonesian too lol. But in all seriousness, a guy who cusses a lot and says "Son of a dick" is a-okay in my book.
4. I prefer to have it offered at the beginning, but either way is fine for me.
5. Definitely. Gives your players something to look forward to in the final product
6. I hope you can show us art assets soon because I'd want to see what the characters would look like XD But otherwise, fight on!

[projectotome]

I like the fact that this has an Indonesian character in it! Because I am from Indonesia myself ^^/ ehehe
Good luck with your game!

[kyakyakyu]

I like the fact that this has an Indonesian character in it! Because I am from Indonesia myself ^^/ ehehe
Good luck with your game!

Thank you! You can see the progress of the game [a href="http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 43&t=36019"]here![/a]

1. I'm no expert on chronic illnesses, but maybe give him a heart condition that worsens over time?
2. To be honest I'm not sure what to think since there's barely enough in what you posted for me to form a conclusion, but I can say that I'm kind of interested. It sounds simple but sometimes simplicity goes a long way
3. I like Sammy 'cause he's Indonesian too lol. But in all seriousness, a guy who cusses a lot and says "Son of a dick" is a-okay in my book.
4. I prefer to have it offered at the beginning, but either way is fine for me.
5. Definitely. Gives your players something to look forward to in the final product
6. I hope you can show us art assets soon because I'd want to see what the characters would look like XD But otherwise, fight on!

Sammy is one badass Indonesian~
You can check the progress of the game on the link I've just provided! I was going to reply your message, but thank you for replying!