Dream On! [ROYA SPRITE ADDED.]
Dream On! [ROYA SPRITE ADDED.]
Ain't nothing here but us chickens.
Last edited by 4394 on Fri Jul 15, 2011 1:41 pm, edited 8 times in total.
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Re: Dream On! [WiP]
I can only say one thing...
Good luck with your project. Hope it turns out well. :3
Good luck with your project. Hope it turns out well. :3
Re: Dream On! [WiP]
Thank you sir, I appreciate the sentiment. =)
Re: Dream On! [WiP]
Agreed . It sounds lighthearted, self-referential and... well... just fun . Neat art too ^^
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Yay, that's cool I really like "genre savvy" stories, which this definitely is. Your art style is very cute. And I do love me some childhood friends and tsunderekko So go for it!
As we often say to first-time game makers here, don't be afraid of making the game smaller than you might want to; be very cautious of perfectionism and the urge to explore all possible routes. Games with lots of different endings (including platonic endings) can end up ballooning out of control... and remember your audience would rather play a smaller game than never get to play a game which would be perfect but never got finished.
So go for it, cause you've got a really fun idea here: I want to play it!
As we often say to first-time game makers here, don't be afraid of making the game smaller than you might want to; be very cautious of perfectionism and the urge to explore all possible routes. Games with lots of different endings (including platonic endings) can end up ballooning out of control... and remember your audience would rather play a smaller game than never get to play a game which would be perfect but never got finished.
So go for it, cause you've got a really fun idea here: I want to play it!
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Re: Dream On! [WiP]
Well. I was going to put a nice little comment here when I saw the plot. It's very cute and entertaining.
And now I'm twice as excited because there's BL options! [clings]
At least I hope. You've got two girls and two boys there, four endings (plus a bad one) to get.
[dramatic sigh] I can't wait.
You're doing this all by yourself? I commend thee.
And now I'm twice as excited because there's BL options! [clings]
At least I hope. You've got two girls and two boys there, four endings (plus a bad one) to get.
[dramatic sigh] I can't wait.
You're doing this all by yourself? I commend thee.
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Re: Dream On! [WiP]
This sounds really great! I LOVE the idea of a *dream world* and like the descrptions of everyone...I hope you can complete this, I'd like to play this too...it sounds great!
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Re: Dream On! [WiP]
this sounds reallly nice! =D
good luck! ^__^
good luck! ^__^
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@Chrono:
Good goddamn, I love that wiki. Most tropers are young nerds, they say? I'll be the first to back the statement. =D
Thanks for the advice, buddy (I can call you buddy, right?) I appreciate it. Since I'm a writer/artist, not a coder, a couple things may end up being cut out when everything it said and done. (You can tell I'm a bit intimidated. Hehe.)
@Sinister:
Haha, thanks for the enthusiasm. =D
Yes, BL endings available. I hafta secure my female audience, y'know?
That, and most of the female friends who know I'm working on this are BL fangirls.
I'm practically obliged to cater to 'em. Hehe. =P
*cough*
About doing this 'all by myself'...
I don't have a formal team, but I'm not exactly all alone in the universe.
I have writer pals who helped me with the story and such when I got stuck.
The art's all mine, though -- hence the lacking quality.
Glad you're excited! ☺
@The Rest:
Thanks for your support.
My appreciation for you is 9000+ !!
*grin*
Good goddamn, I love that wiki. Most tropers are young nerds, they say? I'll be the first to back the statement. =D
Thanks for the advice, buddy (I can call you buddy, right?) I appreciate it. Since I'm a writer/artist, not a coder, a couple things may end up being cut out when everything it said and done. (You can tell I'm a bit intimidated. Hehe.)
@Sinister:
Haha, thanks for the enthusiasm. =D
Yes, BL endings available. I hafta secure my female audience, y'know?
That, and most of the female friends who know I'm working on this are BL fangirls.
I'm practically obliged to cater to 'em. Hehe. =P
*cough*
About doing this 'all by myself'...
I don't have a formal team, but I'm not exactly all alone in the universe.
I have writer pals who helped me with the story and such when I got stuck.
The art's all mine, though -- hence the lacking quality.
Glad you're excited! ☺
@The Rest:
Thanks for your support.
My appreciation for you is 9000+ !!
*grin*
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Re: Dream On! [WiP]
Curse you people with artistic talents. You people tear into your own work so much that it makes my scribbles seem that much worse. Please, think of the scribblers.4394 wrote:The art's all mine, though -- hence the lacking quality.
You know, I'm not a fan of BL, like, at all, but I'm so interested in the story that at this point, I could easily see myself going down the BL routes anyways. I guess we'll see once you release.
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I defiantly dig the whole fantasy/otaku retrospective theme. Have you watched "welcome to the nhk" anime? It has a whole otaku insight facet thing going plus a bit of the story is about dating sims. Its the reason I started to write one.
you shoudln't down yourself. Your art is functional.
Gonbatte!
you shoudln't down yourself. Your art is functional.
Gonbatte!
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@Mistik
Yeah, I checked that out. Great fun.
Thanks!
@North Hawk
I'm not much of a BL fan myself, actually.
But hey, if it'll rope in the ladies, then...
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And I'm sure your art isn't /that/ bad.
If you think I'm okay, we're probably on par with one another.
Yeah, I checked that out. Great fun.
Thanks!
@North Hawk
I'm not much of a BL fan myself, actually.
But hey, if it'll rope in the ladies, then...
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And I'm sure your art isn't /that/ bad.
If you think I'm okay, we're probably on par with one another.
Re: Dream On! [ZOMG ART UPDATE.]
Art updated. *grin*
Indirect thank you to the community for being so damn inspiring; I've never had so much fun trying something new. Hehe.
Indirect thank you to the community for being so damn inspiring; I've never had so much fun trying something new. Hehe.
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Re: Dream On! [ZOMG ART UPDATE.]
[drools]
Tell me that sandman has an ending, plz.
He's uber-smexy for a 2D make-believe character.
The outfits are real simple, and I think that's nice. It goes with your style of art.
[thumbs up]
Oh, and Brione's boob is overflowing on her arm.
I thought that was funny.
Tell me that sandman has an ending, plz.
He's uber-smexy for a 2D make-believe character.
The outfits are real simple, and I think that's nice. It goes with your style of art.
[thumbs up]
Oh, and Brione's boob is overflowing on her arm.
I thought that was funny.
Re: Dream On! [ZOMG ART UPDATE.]
x__sinister wrote:[drools]
Tell me that sandman has an ending, plz.
He's uber-smexy for a 2D make-believe character.
...
Oh, and Brione's boob is overflowing on her arm.
I thought that was funny.
Haha, that's the first time anyone's said that to me.
Maybe I have a future in otome games?
Rofl. Jk.
Also, now that I think about her huge overflowy breast, it IS kinda funny. xD
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