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Mirena
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Vortex (Proofreader found)

#1 Post by Mirena » Sat Aug 02, 2008 1:37 am

I'm finally done with the script for my visual novel Vortex.

Now I need someone to proofread and make sure things are understandable. I guess it's mostly a drama story. There's no dating or choices involved, current version of the script is 64 pages long and has nearly 29k words.

You probably want to know what you'll be reading, so here is a short summary:
Vortex is the story of Rachelle Scarrett, a young woman who joins the military in order to restore her family's lost honour. However, when a long-going conflict in her country escalates, she is dragged into the events and things take a turn she never expected..

If you're interested in helping, pm me and I'll pm you the script.


EDIT: musical74 has offered to proofread the script. Thank you!

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Re: Vortex (Proofreader found)

#2 Post by Midnighticequeen » Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:39 pm

Good for you! Do you have any artwork done?

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Re: Vortex (Proofreader found)

#3 Post by Mirena » Sat Aug 09, 2008 2:39 pm

I have quite a bunch of character sketches, and I've started to sketch locations. Getting everything ready will still take a while though.

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