I recently came up with an idea for a VN, and I'd greatly appreciate some feedback! ^_^
Here’s the basic premise:
You, the player, get to watch the cute, comedic interactions between a cast of four young women and their boss in a cafe setting as they work, go to school, and learn about themselves and each other! It’s not an otome game, so there aren’t any romanceable characters; this game focuses on the friendships between the characters, and in doing so, hopes to bring you smiles and laughs!
Here are the main characters:
Their appearances aren’t 100% figured out yet, but I’m working on it! I have some hair styles in mind, and I’ve been researching references for outfits.
And here are some considerations I’m keeping in mind with regards to artwork, story, and structure:
- Art: I’d like to make chibis as the main style of character sprites. I think having chibi sprites instead of regular, “full size” ones would match the tone of the game! As such, the backgrounds will also be “chibi-fied” somewhat to match the style and proportions of the sprites. I am considering having a bonus CG gallery that unlocks a CG after each “episode” (see story structure below). These CGs would be a mix of chibis and “full size” characters.
- Plot: Will there be any? Certainly! Daily events can be fun to watch from a fly-on-the-wall perspective - that’s the main premise of most slice-of-life anime series, isn’t it?
- Settings: The cafe is the main setting, but I’d like to feature other places as well! Like the homes of the main characters, the school that three of the characters attend, etc.
- In-game choices: I’m not 100% sure about incorporating in-game choices for the player to make… If I do have some, I’d like to have an even mix of choices that contribute to different outcomes within each “episode” as well as choices that are otherwise trivial, but still give the player a sense of active participation in the story.
- Story structure: My inspiration comes from 4koma manga, so the story itself won’t be a continuous series of events. I’d like to structure it in episodes that can each stand alone as a “mini story.” I'm thinking... maybe 12 to 15 episodes? I'm not quite sure how long each one would be in terms of game play or word count, but I don't want to bite off more than I can chew since this will be my first full-length project.
- Does this visual novel sound fun? Like something you would want to play?
- Do you have any suggestions for a name for the game?
- What do you think about the characters? Are they different from each other? Do you find them interesting?
- What do you think of having in-game choices for this particular genre of game? Does it work?
- Do you have any specific ideas about what you imagine each character to look like based on their profile description?