Idea Dump
Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2016 6:11 pm
Hi guys, this is just my idea dump for various VN ideas I have that eventually will be used (most probably haha).
No assets for them have been created. Any feedback for these ideas is appreciated.
IDEA 1:
This idea is a dark slice of life/romance game set in high school. The protagonist is a 17 year old boy from a high tier criminal family, who is brought back into his hometown and family home to act as a bodyguard to his sister. He lef because of a dispute when he was 8 with his father over why he had to learn martial arts and fight which turned violent, eventually causing a fire in the kitchen which scarred his face and torso incredibly bad on one side. Because of this he has deep psychological issues, particularly pertaining to how he finds the fact that he is naturally good at fighting (after having to constantly fend off bullies after the incident) and seeing himself as a monster. He left to stay with another crime family who are his family's long time allies after overhearing his younger sister compare his looks to a monster and telling his mother how his new face scared her. He also naturally has a dislike of fire, though whenever someone tries to instead use this fear to goad or scare him, he tends to break out in a blind rage.
The protagonist's personality is incredibly quiet and much of the VN will focus on his monologues and few interactions with the characters when he speaks up. His speaking tends to either be to pipe up with something incredibly cynical and sarcastic, or logical and insulting. He has a knack for pissing people off and witty retorts, but seldom uses it. Also has a childish love for pranks, though this is not ever shown outward due to his now incredibly introverted nature.
He also meets up with old childhood friends and new acquaintances through his sister. The interactions between these will be used to flesh out his character before the incident, and to flesh out the other characters.
Common Route: Consists of introducng and fleshing out the characters. Also there is a common route after the branching path, which sees the MC become incredibly obsessed with violent approaches and involved in the crime aspect of his family after finding out that someone was hired who was responsible for messing with the gas which caused the fire. This arc will completely focus on the MC and his psychology as he breaks down and desperately goes on a vengeance quest, essentially pinning all of his problems on this unknown person.
Childhood Friend Route: This route focuses on his male childhood friend and female childhood friend. Since the start of the VN, these two childhood friends are together as a couple. During this route the male friend and MC become close agan, and the increased interactions with the female friend ignite old feelings that the MC had for this girl. The girl also struggles with her reignited feelings, and eventually the two almost sleep together. This ends up with the MC using this to reinforce his vision as himself as a monster and spiralling more downward as him and the female friend become even closer as the couple become more estranged.
Sister Route: This focuses on the MC's family relations and their crime negotiations with varying families far more intensely. This route is used to flesh out the sister, the mother and the father. The father becomes ill and as the sister is still seen as the heir she must officially take over as the family head.
Stranger route: This route focuses on the one person the MC finds of his own accord during a walk to calm himself during the end of the common route (before branching). This girl is in crutches and has an illness which will eventually leave her in a wheelchair. This route focuses on the MC and the girl opening up to each other because of their similar deformities and eventually overcoming their issues together as they become closer and eventually fall in love. Has issues such as suicidal thoughts and attempting suicide in this route.
Only these routes are the ones I plan on certainly completing, however I am not against other routes for other characters happening.
No assets for them have been created. Any feedback for these ideas is appreciated.
IDEA 1:
This idea is a dark slice of life/romance game set in high school. The protagonist is a 17 year old boy from a high tier criminal family, who is brought back into his hometown and family home to act as a bodyguard to his sister. He lef because of a dispute when he was 8 with his father over why he had to learn martial arts and fight which turned violent, eventually causing a fire in the kitchen which scarred his face and torso incredibly bad on one side. Because of this he has deep psychological issues, particularly pertaining to how he finds the fact that he is naturally good at fighting (after having to constantly fend off bullies after the incident) and seeing himself as a monster. He left to stay with another crime family who are his family's long time allies after overhearing his younger sister compare his looks to a monster and telling his mother how his new face scared her. He also naturally has a dislike of fire, though whenever someone tries to instead use this fear to goad or scare him, he tends to break out in a blind rage.
The protagonist's personality is incredibly quiet and much of the VN will focus on his monologues and few interactions with the characters when he speaks up. His speaking tends to either be to pipe up with something incredibly cynical and sarcastic, or logical and insulting. He has a knack for pissing people off and witty retorts, but seldom uses it. Also has a childish love for pranks, though this is not ever shown outward due to his now incredibly introverted nature.
He also meets up with old childhood friends and new acquaintances through his sister. The interactions between these will be used to flesh out his character before the incident, and to flesh out the other characters.
Common Route: Consists of introducng and fleshing out the characters. Also there is a common route after the branching path, which sees the MC become incredibly obsessed with violent approaches and involved in the crime aspect of his family after finding out that someone was hired who was responsible for messing with the gas which caused the fire. This arc will completely focus on the MC and his psychology as he breaks down and desperately goes on a vengeance quest, essentially pinning all of his problems on this unknown person.
Childhood Friend Route: This route focuses on his male childhood friend and female childhood friend. Since the start of the VN, these two childhood friends are together as a couple. During this route the male friend and MC become close agan, and the increased interactions with the female friend ignite old feelings that the MC had for this girl. The girl also struggles with her reignited feelings, and eventually the two almost sleep together. This ends up with the MC using this to reinforce his vision as himself as a monster and spiralling more downward as him and the female friend become even closer as the couple become more estranged.
Sister Route: This focuses on the MC's family relations and their crime negotiations with varying families far more intensely. This route is used to flesh out the sister, the mother and the father. The father becomes ill and as the sister is still seen as the heir she must officially take over as the family head.
Stranger route: This route focuses on the one person the MC finds of his own accord during a walk to calm himself during the end of the common route (before branching). This girl is in crutches and has an illness which will eventually leave her in a wheelchair. This route focuses on the MC and the girl opening up to each other because of their similar deformities and eventually overcoming their issues together as they become closer and eventually fall in love. Has issues such as suicidal thoughts and attempting suicide in this route.
Only these routes are the ones I plan on certainly completing, however I am not against other routes for other characters happening.