Ah well, it just means the regular font system still looks nice ^^. Only the italics are sometimes a bit messed up what with the kerning and all :/
I noticed something new in my second playthrough : the top status bar keeps "flickering". What really happens is that at each transition, it transitions along with the rest of the screen, as if it was never there. Just look for any dissolve and see the bar dissolving in, instead of simply staying put.
And now for a few typos and strange sentences :
Keep in mind I'm not a native speaker either ^^;
"The show before my eyes isn't certainly very pleasant."
-> "The show before my eyes certainly isn't very pleasant." should be better.
"Marie puts her arms round my neck, staring into my eyes."
-> I suppose "round" might work, but noting it in case you meant "around" and typoed it.
"John is nothing to me in this moment."
-> I'd go with "at this moment", but not saying this is a mistake. I've just never seen this version.
"Hello. Want to take a walk on deck?"
-> Again, probably correct, but my mind want to say "on the deck".
"I don't see any bad in resistance, but I don't see any good in it, either..."
-> "I don't see anything wrong in resisting, but I don't see any good in it, either..."
Again, personal preference
"We go up to the stern, to better admire the
see"
-> sea
"It's windy and chilly. Not my kind
fo weather"
"Marie turns her head to me and starts looking at carefully"
-> "looking at me" ?
"Will Heileen save Marie from falling down?
There's something more between them than just friendship?"
-> "from falling?" I don't know if "down" is necessary here.
-> "Is there something", since it's a question.
"Is Lora hiding something? Why she is always so kind..."
-> "Why is she...", again, question.
"And John? Does he love Heileen, or for him she is just another girl?"
-> "or is she just another girl for him?"
"There's only one way to find it out..."
-> "to find out"
"Many new characters (...) await
s you!"
-> "await you", since the subject is plural.
Also have to ask : how linear is the story? I like the quest thingie but I'm curious as to how it fares in the rest of the game. Not looking for pure spoilers, just an idea of how this demo compared to the full game :
Obviously, the first kiss part is mandatory. But then, how much of the story will be forced upon us and how much can we change in it? Is the game part only about finding out the various secrets or doing some "tasks" such as embarassing Otto?
so I used normal TTF.
