Np - proofreading found!

[jack_norton]

Since the girl that was helping me before disappeared (1 week without reply) I could have the need of a hand soon. I'm at chapter 6 of my game, so 4 left to go, and even considering the various branches of the story, I think I would have the need of help in 1-2 weeks max. So not in a hurry, but wouldn't want to delay the release because of this.

If anyone want to help, will be much appreciated. This is my first attempt at VN (Summer Session was written by papillon) so I'd like not look written by a fool then if the game will be criticized for the story, fine, but at least not for grammar/poor english.

PM or email me (info at winterwolves.com) to discuss about it.

[Hyperguy]

E-mail sent.

[jack_norton]

Ops sorry, forgot to update... N0UGHTS offered to help and she's already doing it... should have posted about it but was busy with the game !

[N0UGHTS]

I'm not a girl. Or am I...

The story's good so far. I'm just starting chapter two... And no, the game isn't short. At all. I just have no life I read fast.

I suggest editing the post title...

[jack_norton]

I'm not a girl. Or am I...

The story's good so far. I'm just starting chapter two... And no, the game isn't short. At all. I just have no life I read fast.

I suggest editing the post title...

Ops sorry, thought you were one. Your enthusiasm for lesbian stories was a bit confusing indeed
Edited the title, good idea!

[N0UGHTS]

Mmmm.... I suggest you edit it to something like, "Hired the dashing N0UGHTS to be my proofreader," or something like that.

[Hyperguy]

Mmmm.... I suggest you edit it to something like, "Hired the self absorbed, gender confused, and attention depraved N0UGHTS to be my proofreader," or something like that.

Fixed.

Because I love you. <3

[N0UGHTS]

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hyperguy "Mmmm.... I suggest you edit it to something like, \"Hired the self-absorbed, gender confused, and attention-deprived N0UGHTS to be my proofreader,\" or something like that."

Squee~ :3 It is fixed...

Though I guess I am depraved. :laughs evilly:
Not my fault, though. Family like mine, childhood like mine, mental disorders like mine that were probably passed down from my uncle and aunt... Bweh.

[Hyperguy]

N0UGHTS-chan! T_T

I'm rooting for you! ^_^=b