Thousand doors project (GxB V/N)

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Thousand doors project (GxB V/N)

#1 Post by Nimuell » Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:26 am

Uh.. Well, hello everyone! I'm Nimuell (or Nimu-chan, you may call me as you like :wink:) and I've been wanting to do a GxB visual novel with the help of my best friend, who writes really wonderful stories. So I do all the programming and artwork.

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+ Genre: Mystery, Surreal, Detective, Everyday routine.
+ Rating: PG-16, I think.
+ Characters: Protagonist (Nao), 4 boys datable (three in general and one secret-chara), 2 very important side characters, 5-7 side characters.
+Gameplay: pure (no simulation elements) GxB visual novel, with branching plot.


Story and protagonist

The protagonist of the story is Nao Watts.
Sarcastic, energetic adventurer, who moves into N. city.
She's a young beginning writer (failure in that). Loves strange dreams, spiders, ice-cream, she's totally in love with books and old town's bridges. Although she's very lively, she has a strange disease, which is considered being incurable. (Childhood traumas pack included :mrgreen:)

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The N. city is really old town, with lots of bridges, channels, small streets and wonders. (Ghost stories, anyone?)
This is the city of mechanics, researchers and inventors, so the town is full of mechanical dolls, robots and all this steampunk atmosphere.
I can understand Nao in her wish to live there. <3

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A man without a face appears in her dreams to warn her, that she's in danger, and she should never open hidden doors.
At this time she has a great writer's block and can't think up a new story. So, to overcome this she wanders through the old town to see something new and inspiring.
She finds a big abandoned mansion not far from the town and being true adventurer ("hey, I've got the idea for my story!") begins exploring it. Since then she becomes just obsessed with that mansion, she opens the countless doors, that should never be opened and meets with the blind young lady (who's just crazy sociopath) of this house...
Nao will have to wander through the memories of the lady (Deyal) to close all the doors, to put everything together.

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Well I know, the scenario sounds really like corny story, but I promise, it IS interesting. It's just, that it's difficult to me to explain this story in English, since it's not my native language.
Yeah, the worst is, that the game will be in Russian. (now, I think, noone will be interested in it at all) But we just don't have good dojin VN in Russian, so I want "Thousand doors" to be the first one. T_T
However, some my friends in UK got interested in the idea and promised me to help with translations. It sounds really like daydreaming now, but I honestly want it to be translated, so that anyone can play.

I'll update this post soon with details of the story and characters descriptions. Also I have many sketches of the datable personages.

Characters

Datable personages:
Marko
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Marko is such damn sweet and kind guy.. True adventurer, traveler and storyteller. He has such a vivid imagination, that you can never tell if his story is true or false. He works as a postman in eastern district (where Nao lives), the pay is not so good, but enough for him to live as he wants. He lives at his aunts place with his little genius brother. His aunt runs her own business , so you can tell, he just doesn't need money for living. No goal for living either.
Sometimes he acts kind of strange. By the way, his personality is darker, than it seems from the first sight.
He also has this "I'm nothing special, really" complex and feels that he's a failure compared to his genius bro.

(the information about other personages will be added later)

Other sketches
Well, Nao's outfit is really cute, isn't it?
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#2 Post by Vatina » Fri Jan 09, 2009 7:25 am

I love the art so far, and I would love to read this story as well. I really hope that the english translation will come to be :D

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#3 Post by monele » Fri Jan 09, 2009 7:55 am

I'm becoming more and more interested in steampunk lately so this comes as a very good surprise ^^... The premise sounds awesome (I love that kind of adventure-mystery with a bit of paranormal/magic) and the art looks so sweet ^__^.
Do keep us updated :)... *and crosses fingers for a translation when it's done*

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#4 Post by Nimuell » Fri Jan 09, 2009 9:41 am

Thanks for the replies and kind words and everything :oops:. I plan to update the theme as far as I get new images for characters :wink:
Also I would like to hear suggestions and ideas for the game :roll: Feel free to tell me your opinion about the story, characters and so on.
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#5 Post by Deji » Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:18 am

cute idea and lovely characters and character art so far :D!!!
will be realy looking forward to this! *-*
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#6 Post by Cerberusia » Fri Jan 09, 2009 3:46 pm

This looks absoulutely fascinating. And oh, the pretty art!

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#7 Post by Nimuell » Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:17 pm

Ladies and gentlemen, I'm so honored))
Thank you for your kind words. I'll update the subject as soon as possible :roll:
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#8 Post by Midnighticequeen » Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:09 pm

I can't wait! This sounds like an interesting game and your a very talented artist too. I'm sure this game will be fabulous

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#9 Post by gekiganwing » Fri Jan 09, 2009 7:03 pm

Nimu-chan: don't worry about writing in English yet. It may help you to write in your own language, then find a multi-lingual person who can translate.
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#10 Post by Novinha » Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:43 am

This looks very promising... You are clearly a talented artist, I'm looking forward to see your partner's story :)
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#11 Post by Aetheria » Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:20 am

Ooh, a rare GxB game! Your art is beautiful, and the story sounds interesting... If there were a translation when it's done, that would be awesome. Even if there doesn't end up being one, I might play it anyway just for the art! :D

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#12 Post by Nimuell » Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:59 pm

Novinha, thanks for your kind words :oops: , the progress is slow, but we want to create a really good VN as much as possible close to professional novels. I still haven't introduced many characters here, because of my lazyness :wink: , however everytime I meet with my friend we start disussing all the personages like they are real persions. :roll:

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Aetheria wrote:If there were a translation when it's done, that would be awesome. Even if there doesn't end up being one, I might play it anyway just for the art! :D
I cannot promise anything now offcourse, because the game is really at an early stage of creating, but still I'll do everything possible to translate it. Because... I kind of know your pain(yeah-yeah, all these Atlas and AGTH things, Applocale and so on, and in the end you're lucky if you can get about 80% of the understanding what is going on in all these otome-games), you've come from Neo-romance forums, am I right? I often visit them, although I don't really take part in the conversations.
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#13 Post by Watercolorheart » Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:03 pm

Amazing work, I can't wait for this! :mrgreen: Please release a demo or beta version soon!
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#14 Post by Aetheria » Fri Jan 16, 2009 12:29 am

Nimu-chan wrote:I cannot promise anything now offcourse, because the game is really at an early stage of creating, but still I'll do everything possible to translate it. Because... I kind of know your pain(yeah-yeah, all these Atlas and AGTH things, Applocale and so on, and in the end you're lucky if you can get about 80% of the understanding what is going on in all these otome-games), you've come from Neo-romance forums, am I right? I often visit them, although I don't really take part in the conversations.
Yeah, I usually just lurk when I'm here... I post a bit more over there, but I decided to register here finally. :P Good to hear that you're interested in doing a translation! (I wonder if machine translation of Russian is any better than it is with Japanese? Hmm.) Probably best to focus on getting the game done first, though, and worry about translating it after that.

Well, I think a lot of us are going to be following the development of the game with interest - it seems like a really exciting project, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it all comes together. :D

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#15 Post by sake-bento » Fri Jan 16, 2009 3:15 am

Looks wonderful~ The art is really nice, and the setting looks great. I hope this gets a translation, but I understand it's a lot of work.

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