Girlfriend for A Day

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Girlfriend for A Day

#1 Post by alberte » Wed Apr 18, 2018 12:48 pm

Hey everyone, I'm writing a short kinetic or possibly with choices visual novel.

It's about two characters: Sayuri Sekiguchi and Seito (Re nameable)
Basically Seito has always had a crush on Sayuri and wanted him to be his girlfriend , but since she's someone who's hard to get to know that's proving impossible for him.
What he does is he blackmails her because he finds out one of her secrets that would possibly ruin her if anyone found out, for her to act as his girlfriend for a week.
The game will be both all ages and 18+ (for every nsfw picture there will be instead a normal picture in the all ages)
I'll post a sample of what the art is going to consist of. (Pencil sketches because I like the style)
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Thoughts?

What would you like to see from a visual novel like this?


This will be my first attempt at a visual novel so i'm aiming to make it fairly short.

Writing progress as of yesterday night: 730 words/10,000 words
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Re: Girlfriend for A Day

#2 Post by alberte » Sun Jul 15, 2018 11:13 pm

Updates: changed the story added new art.
Including this a sprite drawing! of Sayuri.
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Here's a sprite drawing of a side character Sayuris best friend~ Aiko Nanami:
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Re: Girlfriend for A Day

#3 Post by alphawolf » Thu Nov 29, 2018 12:16 am

hi...
nice idea and cute pics.

some thoughts i had are...
maybe the blackmail is a bit harsh.

how about he likes her but shes not interested.
all her cute friends like him but he only likes her.
but she needs him for something important so she agrees to be his gf for a special occasion but only after he helps her.
hes all for it and goes about doing what she needs.
she starts to fall for him...seeing how hard he is trying to please her.
but she wants to know if hes genuine or not...so...
she gets each of her friends to test his loyalty...one by one...and later in pairs n groups.
they like the idea as each one wants him for herself.
they try everything to seduce him and win him away from her.

the player has to guide him thru to true love...or go on wild adventures with all her friends.
overcoming the temptations of here cute friends will be the test.

ciao...

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