proofreading/editing help needed [filled]

[jack_norton]

I'm basically done with my current game Spirited Heart, but I already started another one, a sci-fi story called Bionic Heart (I'm too lazy to link but you can find more info about it in this forum).
I started writing it in italian to have it translated, but I think I probably would get a better result if someone just edit my texts once I have rewritten them in english. I can write in "decent" english but I'd need someone to recheck the texts for errors and "enrich" them, since I don't know many english words (to avoid the story/narration become too much repetitive).
So far the script is about 8k words, so I'm still far to finish it, but if someone could check/edit what I've done so far in the meanwhile would be great

edit: seems like I found someone already. thanks!

[Adoxographist]

Wow! Sounds tough...
I would offer to help, but, unfortunately, I don't really think I've got the English editing expertise that might be required to assist you.
After all, I'm rather young.

Still, I wish you luck! I had a look at the game demo, and it looks fabulous so far!

[Nya-chan Production]

I'd reccommend renaming the topic name to something like "proofreaders needed", since that is what you are actually looking for. I'd help, but I am not native speaker as well and I am already TLing, but I hope I might be of some help in case that some people were driven away just by the name of the thread ^^ (since I expected fairly different thing from "editing help")

[jack_norton]

Ok changed the thread name BTW happy Easter anyone.