General Type: Short ADV Genre: Drama/Romance/Otome Rating: 15+ (blood)
Story What to do when you discover you wasted your entire life trying to fake yourself for others sake? And what when you discover you can’t live, and yet, you can’t die altogether?
That day must’ve be the best day of their life. They had just been accepted in medicine in University of Oxford, so they went out to celebrate. But a truck smashed the car killing three of the students in the car. Emilie Gray, the one who never wanted to do medicine in her life, just survived by a miracle. But at the same time, she was forced to live the rest of her life in a hospital bed. The doctor told her that the damage in the spine was irreversible and she would never be able to move once again. After moving to home, because her mother begged the doctors to, Emilie met Ciel, a strange and way too girlish guy who was sent to kill her...
(yep, I’m not good at all in synopses, sorry)
Characters
( I'll put the pictures as soon as I finish 'em ^^ -removed the old ones because, except for Ciel, I changed the other characters design xD- )
Emilie Gray
Hair: Auburn
Eyes: Brown
She lived all her life without doing things her liked even once... untill she suffered that car accident. Then she realized she never lived her life, but maybe she still have a chance. That depends only of you =D
Ciel
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue/Green
He is a way too girlysh guy that appeared out of nowhere in Emilie's life. And... he's a cutie <3 he found interesting to toy her.
Doctor Jill Summers
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black
The doctor who treated Emilie. She's very kind and somewhat mysterious. Also, she often go to check-up on you.
Hilde Gray
Hair: Auburn
Eyes: Brown
She’s Emilie’s Mother, and an indeed strange one. Maybe she still suffers with her husband death?
Status
First route sort of complete .-. I have so many things to do that I couldn't even finish the character art yet i.i so I decided to take them off and put a little alpha demo here.
Hope you enjoy.
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Nice screens, you got there. Guess once I am done with my graphical stuff I must start to look into coding, since your customized stuff looks pretty awesome.
Once this is out, I will definetly give it a try.
~Imagination is more important than knowledge (Albert Einstein)~
Just working on graphics for the moment... May start talking about my project once they are done...
The plot is really interesting and well thought out!
I also like the characters.
Will it really have blood in this game?
Good luck on your project! ^______^
So, there's been some updates. I write the first three chapters of Ciel's route (didn't started writing Jill's route yet). Right now, these are the statistics.
The game contains 1091 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 8683 words,
for an average of 8.0 words per screen.
The game contains 3 menus.
icerain wrote:Will it really have blood in this game?
Actually, I was planning to don't have blood, but I ended up writing a scary scene for a dead end (even though I didn't planned any dead ends to the game xDDD)
I thought of releasing a alpha demo of the game now. This cover one route (Ciel's) but there's no character art/cgs i.i
Btw, this turned out to be a larger project altogheter. Ryuno was writing a similar story and we decided to write one togheter. It'll be a story told from 2 different point of views and will have more endings/routes too, so the final release will be delayed a bit (well, most probably more than 'a bit') ._.
eh?! i was a bit confused about the florence emilie thing...
at first her name was emilie, but near the end of the demo, her name became florence... i think it was her cousin's name... or i din't understand what ceil said XDDD
anyway, nice demo... it made me cry.. (but there was some typos so you might want to check it out)
nice plot!
I.... didn't quite get it... though the moment when they were in the park really touched me. Was her name changed? So far I really like the story. The way it's written it's just beautiful, though it maybe just some simple words. And I think the story without the character was beautiful already, but I would really like to see what they really looks like.
Anyway, I think there's a lot of typos. Like realease should be "release" and grous shoud be "grows" and felling should be "feeling". Felling and feeling was entirely different word with different meaning.
And... I love the menu interface! It is nice to see some different things from the custom RenPy menu XD
