WiP - The Children of Elements

[xBreeze]

Uh hello, I just got this program yesterday and knew nothing of scripting. I basically just self taught myself yesterday, so don't expect mine to be as well as others.

I can't really give you details on my VN for certain reasons, but I'll give you guys a demo and you can tell me what you think so far.

I'm lacking sprites at the moment...if anyone would like to try drawling for me that's welcome here. Just show some sample work.

(05/18/09)
1) Fixed music. Corrected their spots.
2) Fixed sounds.
3) Lengthened demo.
4) Uploaded on Megaupload. (All three versions.)
5) Attached. (All three versions.)

(05/19/09)
1) Lengthened storyline.

(05/20/09)
1) Lengthened storyline.
2) Introduced Anna.

(05/21/09)
1) Made...simplified sprite faces?
From left to right:
Kyle, Ken, Isabel, Lily, Anna, Zack


(05/22/09)
Too sick to do anything, slept all day pretty much.

(05/23/09)
1) Corrected grammar and spelling errors.

(05/24/09)
1) Lengthened storyline.

(05/25/09)
1) Lengthened storyline.

(05/26/09)
1) Nothing...felt like relaxing.

(05/27/09)
1) Lengthened storyline.
2) Introduced Zack.

(05/28/09)
1) Went through story and re-did some of it.

(05/29/09)
1) RL Work

(05/30/09)
1) RL Work

(05/31/09)
1) RL Work

Title: The Children of Elements
Length: Around 10 hours (Demo - Less than an hour)
Characters: Kyle, Ken, Lily, Isabel, Zack, Anna, Others not mentioned yet. (Demo - Kyle, Ken, Lily, Isabel)
Plot: Your normal, teenagers given power and must fight an evil power. Romance is included.

Windows Version - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=8WFFKEL8
Linux Version - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=GYJ0O6PD
Mac Version - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=DX82TLUY

[usul]

Too bad there's no linux version, I would have checked this out this morning. I think a heroes title à la X-Men would be uber fantastic!

[xBreeze]

Okay, I re-did the Demo and made it a bit longer, added more detail, and fixed some typos and grammar mistakes. I also uploaded all three versions on Megaupload and attached all three to the first post.

[dstarsboy]

Not bad for a few night's work. You certainly wrote alot in a short time.

It will be much better with the sprites in place. Don't forget to credit the art/music you're using appropriately.

Keep up the good work.

[xBreeze]

Yeah, if I can get someone to draw me some sprites it'd be great. I will give credit where credit is due. xD When I'm fully done the credits will be there. Finally got Anna into the storyline. Oh and for those of you wondering, those updates aren't for the demos here. Those are my current updates that I did, but not attaching or uploading. Well...not yet anyways.

[Concealed Fury]

Looks great. Especially the backgrounds. I may be able to help with some of the sprites. Just PM me

[xBreeze]

I made some simplified faces of my main characters. Just their normal faces. If any artist out there would like to create the real things from those ones' looks, just PM. Thanks.