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Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 4:23 am
by dott.Piergiorgio
azureXtwilight wrote:I wonder wether I should release a revamped demo, just to give a nice closing to it (since I've fixed that stupid traceback).
victorita9 wrote:no no! No need to away time from you making the game into putting a closing to the demo. You could just write next to the link for the demo that when its says error on chapter 2 that means that the demo is over?
this demo being mainly a showcase/preview demo, I guess that a bit of polishing isn't a bad thing; having a crash at the very end of the show I guess can be on the disappointing side, esp. after enjoying it...

So, I guess that azure twilight can upload the demo, or at least a fix patch...

Best regards from Italy,
Dott. Piergiorgio.

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:11 am
by azureXtwilight
Nah, after the crashing part it should be a six minutes more gameplay. I'll release the revamped demo within this week. And sadly I have to say that this project will go very slow starting from this week. School has started and since next year I'm gonna go to college (Actually, in 2011 since my age is stil 16, but I'm gonna finish high school in 2010 and that's why I have to learn harder) and my parents want me to major in doctoral education.

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:21 am
by Xino
Aw, I'll have to wait longer for Volg... But it's better to wait for something good, then to rush for something bad! I'll just have to torment Volg in some fan art...

WHA HA HA HA HA HA!!

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:06 pm
by azureXtwilight
LoL, Can I see ur drawing? Don't worry, I always have weekends, u know.

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 12:19 am
by lepapillonrouge
^_^ Sigh, I really should play the demo again soon...

Hey, azure, how do you make really nice textboxes like yours?

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 10:18 am
by azureXtwilight
Textboxes? Well, to be honest I made them with lots and lots of brushes. Most of them are from obsidian dawn. XD

Let's see... I've finished chapter two, and decided to do Cgs for last so I can make them while waiting for proofreaders. But then, I'm wondering. There are 5 chapters all together, so I'm kinda confused branching the plot. For those who are willing to help me, see spoilers.
Chaper 1: Introduction
Chapter 2 : Dawn in the woods (Still friendly relationship)
Chapter 3 : Aboard the ship (Don't know what to name this yet), I'm thinking to branch it here, because all the conflic mostly starts here. Murder attempt, fighting, betraying, and all those. I'm thinking to make Valen pick sides to solve the problems.
Chapter 4 : The Last Mana Spring (Don't know what to name this yet, either) Or maybe I should branch it here? Bad ends will take place here. Or maybe, problem solving.
Chapter 5 : TITLE VARIES DEPENDING ON WHOSE ROUTE. Mostly about facing Thanos. I already have a concept for these ones and the endings.
For the endings,
I think each guy has three. Bad, normal, and good. Except for Cain. I'll give him four. The last will be the best ending (Prepare tissues, his first three are the saddest ones among all, even the good ed. Only his best end is "good") . But keep in mind that there's no true ending this time. Best ending is true eds for each character. Tell me what you think, but put it in spoiler too, please :mrgreen:

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:14 am
by KimiYoriBaka
If the conflict begins in chapter 3, but chapter 5 is when the story really start to depend on the character, it would make most sense to have the branching subtly begin in 3, but not have the final decisions until mid-chapter 4. Perhaps since you have so many characters, you can group them according to when they happen to be together (like in the party in chapter 1) and then by the end of chapter 3, limit the choices to only one group.

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:46 am
by azureXtwilight
You mean, like in YoJinBo?

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 8:18 am
by azureXtwilight
I've decided on something, about the branching plot.
It will start to branch in the third chapter, but there's still some chance to minus the points of the boy if you feel like changing your mind. So in the fourth chapter the important decisions will be made. And the vital choices will be in chapter 5. How does that sound?

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 9:31 pm
by icerain
You plan is nice...
What will the endings for Cain be like?

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:02 am
by azureXtwilight
Let's see...
Bad ending : Because Cain has transformed fully into a hellraiser, Valen kills him, crying.
Normal ending 1: Cain becomes a hellraiser and Valen asked thanos to turn her into a demon too
Normal ending 2: Oswald dies along with Thanos and asks Cain to take care of his daughter
Good ending : Cain, upon transforming into a hellraiser, decided to destroy himself. Oswald then tries to take Valen home, but instead she runs to Cain and they dissapear together. A few months later, at night, Oswald and Cheryl saw children who resembles Cain and Valen playing swings.
Best ending : I'll keep that a secret XD

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 1:41 pm
by M.C
Yay! Good job, azure!

I'm waiting for this game, OMG I'm so excited >_<

Hip, hip, hurray for azure!!! =D

Cain and Valen are so cute, I like Valen's pink eyes. :mrgreen:

If you need help, I'll do my best, and everything to help you ^_^

Good luck with your game, your progress fast!

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 11:10 am
by azureXtwilight
Thanks! I'm currently focusing on school, so I'll do it every weekends. Whew, it sure is slow now... XD

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:04 pm
by M.C
Hehehe, I wish you have succes with your school! And take your time, better a neat game that one in a rush. XD

Geez, I have 3 months summer vacantion, and I'm boring to death. :(

Anyway, I enjoy playing the demo again, and again, and again yay! <3

Cain/Valen ftw! >D

I wish I could switch our situations lolz.

Re: Fantasia, Requiem of The Abyss (Demo 1st page)

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 4:13 am
by azureXtwilight
Blame indonesia for short holiday periods XD