Dream Savior Gakuen II Demo Release

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#1 Post by illuminate001 » Thu Jul 02, 2009 1:49 pm

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DSGII DEMO AVAILABLE NOW! Download it at -> http://www.filefront.com/user/illuminate001

Hey everyone! Just a friendly headups for those of you who love Dream Savior and in particular the Visual Novel "Dream Savior Gakuen" I just had to let you guys in on alittle teaser. The DSGII Demo is now available for download! Try it out and let me know what you guys think so far. Keep in mind it is a demo so Im still working on it so be gentle.

Anyways I hope you guys enjoy this little promotional piece I did of one of the DSGII guys. Its kinda pornvid cover in a way isnt it? Yeah I must admit I wasn't really sure what I wanted to do as a promo piece so this will suffice for now.

DSGII takes place again at Dream Savior Gakuen with all new characters. Experience a new dramatic story line that blurs the line between whats real and whats possible. Smile, Cry and laugh with the boys of DSG one more time... and choose the one you like most and hopefully a Supreme Ending is only a heartbeat away.

This is a BL (Boy Chases Boy) Visual Novel but it was designed to also be believable from a female player's perspective (Girl Chases Boy). **Rated:Teen** This game does not contain any hentai/yaoi. Its geared more towards the romantic side.

Here's the Basic Stats...

Title: Dream Savior Gakuen II Demo©
Dwnld Link: http://www.filefront.com/user/illuminate001
Platform: Windows Only
Game Type : Visual Novel BxB but can also be a GxB
Rating: Teen
Playtime: N/A
Endings: N/A
Full Release Date: N/A

Please feel free to comment! Visit my online gallery if you enjoyed the art in Dream Savior Gakuen© at http://illuminate001.deviantart.com/ or my brand new blog at http://jwmontenegro.blogspot.com . Thanks!

PS. Ignore the download download address on the poster. It changed recently due to Filefront changing its whole website. The new dl site is... -> http://www.filefront.com/user····inate001 Thanks!
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#2 Post by Kittylove » Thu Jul 02, 2009 1:53 pm

The artwork is impressive, especially the ones in your deviant account! Your an awesome artist, can't wait for the full release.

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#3 Post by Xino » Thu Jul 02, 2009 2:11 pm

Downloading now~! I love your art!! YAY!!
Want something drawn? Just ask~! I love to draw! Free of charge!

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#4 Post by raylynn » Thu Jul 02, 2009 10:46 pm

nice! *downloads* i loved the first one *runs to play the demo* :)

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#5 Post by azureXtwilight » Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:06 am

I love this! Especially the part when you can choose the name, if I picked a girl's name, then it'll be GXB :mrgreen:
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#6 Post by Alphonse » Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:30 pm

Heh. The art style in the menu is something I've officially dubbed "Grand Theft Gakuen".

There was one particularly amusing typo in which Jayse said he majored in "Architexture". Please leave that in.

Orion's chatspeak is...unsettling, to say the least. But even more unsettling?

"Amnesia though?"
"Yeah...didn't you know? It seems to be a common thing in this city."

Is there something in the water, or something?

Did Jayse just use the word "hella" in one sentence, and "radical" in the next?! Then he says "dig". And then "bodacious"? Do I smell "Totally Radical"? Or do they live in California or something? And please be decisive about what type of slang you plan to use! (Also, for the record, having characters use lesser known regional slang, or simply pick a term that's more common for their area is definitely a bonus for me. It doesn't have to be so obvious!)

Okay, now I know it seems like I totally hated your game because of what I've said so far. But that's not true! I love the little black bars that appear whenever you go to a new location! That's soo cooooool! And the art is so awesome! It reminds me of better days. Ah, the days of my youth, like the smell of fresh lemon, you see. And Orion's hair is winner! I wanted to reach to my screen and touch it (and did at one point). It looked so soft... So is the rest of Orion, if you know what I mean. *raises eyebrows up and down*

Also, about the picking a name thing mentioned above. I originallly picked Allith, a name I made up (or at least I think I did), which I considered gender neutral and love. But then after I got to the first scene with Orion, with the shower and what not...I felt really wrong making a dude blush and what not and I remembered in the last game that I was wondering why the hell all the males in the game were gay (I named the protagonist Allith there too), so I went back and renamed my character "Alice". It was weird, because just picking a feminine name made me feel a lot less disturbed by the odd gay to straight ratio. Maybe if I picked an even girlier name like Laura, I might've forgot this game was BL in the first place!

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#7 Post by illuminate001 » Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:21 pm

Kittylove wrote:The artwork is impressive, especially the ones in your deviant account! Your an awesome artist, can't wait for the full release.
Awww you checkd out my DA? Thanx Kitty! Im guesing you have a DA acct as well? Lemme know wut it is I'd love ta take a look. :)
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#8 Post by illuminate001 » Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:21 pm

Xino wrote:Downloading now~! I love your art!! YAY!!
*bows* Thank you Xino! I really appreciate it. :)
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#9 Post by illuminate001 » Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:22 pm

raylynn wrote:nice! *downloads* i loved the first one *runs to play the demo* :)
Ah haha did you make it after the run or did u run outta breath Raylynn? lol.
I hope you like it, lemme know what ur 1st impressions are if u get a chance. It'd be nice to get get sum feedback and improve the game. ^_^
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#10 Post by illuminate001 » Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:25 pm

azureXtwilight wrote:I love this! Especially the part when you can choose the name, if I picked a girl's name, then it'll be GXB :mrgreen:
Heh yeah its the same concept as DSG Azure...I was actually thinkin of having you be able to choose your gender at the start of the game and the game changes accordingly (like Boy= you get called "stud", Girl "= you get called "cutie" I dunno bad example but you know wat I mean.) :)

Lemme know ur 1st impressions id love ta hear watcha thought so far.
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#11 Post by illuminate001 » Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:32 pm

Hey Alphonse thanx for the long message! No seriously ! I do appreicate u taking the time to write an indepth comment on ur 1st impression. It's actually given me something to think about.

Im glad you liked the menu! I was gonna have the guys drawn that way possibly in a less anime style for the actual ingame but decided against it. Its jes too much work. lol. And as for the amnesia thing...it'll make sense later trust me. Its a goody. ;)

Now for Jayse I was trying to make his lingo match a place "Cali" like since the city DSGII takes place in is similar I guess to Miami or Los Angeles. (You'll get to see more of the Locales with your favorite Blackbar and text included! hehe as the game progresses). I was jes taking a stab at what I thought beach going Cali ppl talk like but maybe I should research moreso their actual slang if it comes across strange already. Im trying to establish definitive characters and one way is thru their use of words/how they speak.

anyways this is why i put out the demo and ur feedback was super helpful! Thank you! :)
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#12 Post by KimiYoriBaka » Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:58 pm

"lawlz"?"pown"? Are these...phonetic spellings? Orion's speech was really awkward... It felt like someone trying to badly imitate the people I hang out with. Perhaps if you're brave enough it might help to look up encyclopedia dramatica for research.

Was that music ripped from Kanon? The part in Orion's room definitely sounded like it.

Good start for the story itself by the way.

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#13 Post by azureXtwilight » Fri Jul 17, 2009 10:51 pm

Well, sometimes i don't get the lawz and phown thingies, so I was just guessing. But the story is nice! And I'm the type who don't care about typos as long as I understand the what is going on in the game. XD
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#14 Post by victorita9 » Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:22 am

i gotta say i really dig seeing Orion's backside naked. His hair does look better wet than dry. Great demo/

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#15 Post by illuminate001 » Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:21 pm

KimiYoriBaka wrote:"lawlz"?"pown"? Are these...phonetic spellings? Orion's speech was really awkward... It felt like someone trying to badly imitate the people I hang out with. Perhaps if you're brave enough it might help to look up encyclopedia dramatica for research.

Was that music ripped from Kanon? The part in Orion's room definitely sounded like it.

Good start for the story itself by the way.
Hey thanx Kimi...yeah the music is from Kanon, its temporary tho as I havnt found all the rite non-copywritten tracks that I want for the story yet. As for the Orion speech I know it mite be awkward BUT his speech is actually referenced from a real life person I know who actually does talk like that. He IS a very awkward person. lol.

Its supposed to be gamer-speak. well, thats how HE explains it anyways. :p
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