FFTA2: A Bride for Montblanc - WIP

[Kuzlalala]

This is kinda my first visual novel ever!



(full view http://kuzlalala.deviantart.com/art/FFT ... -129453369 )

It's a game based most of Final Fantasy Tactics A2 (and a bit of Tactics Advance, of course), at the mission Moogle Bride. I'm not sure if fan visual novels are really allowed, but this is worth a shot.

The main characters are Montblanc, Fras, and Reaker as the rival.

Story
Fras tells the reason the history of why she posted A Bride for Montblanc. After she was beaten by Montblanc at the mission, she felt very sorry and wanted to apologize to Montblanc. But then there's Reaker, a moogle Montblanc had met before. Without Fras knowing, Reaker has a crush on Montblanc. The goal of this game is to make Montblanc gain his full likeness to Fras while facing Reaker.

I need some story help I supposed.

Now I'm in the part that Fras will meet Reaker because she has a relationship with Montblanc, but what should she do? Fight like in an RPG way or what?

Thank you for reading.

Note that FFTA and FFTA2 belongs to Square Enix.

Give me some feedback if you want to.

When it's done, I'll put the game in deviantART, and will be treated as a FanArt.

[Kuzlalala]

(am I allowed to do double post?)

I have an announcement! I am going to redraw all the characters and write the story on pieces of paper. I will put them here when I've already have a scanner which works.

[V2Blast]

Sure, you can double post. It's your thread.

[Kuzlalala]

Good then. This will be my journal for the creations of my VN. I'll start by completing my story, than my characters and their feelings.

[pinkmouse]

Good luck! I hope you have fun making your story. Sorry I can't help; I don't really know the Moogle stories well. I never made it past FF8.

[Kuzlalala]

(As far as I know I don't think you have to get past FF8 to know about moogles. )



I've made a new artwork, just kinda a sign that I had better art skills now. The rest is still in the paper while I can't scan. Maybe I should ask my friend to scan some of my work.

[tigerkidde]

Good luck! I hope you have fun making your story. Sorry I can't help; I don't really know the Moogle stories well. I never made it past FF8.

Tis' alright. You won't have to play any of the FF games in sequence. The Gameboy Advance version, Final Fantasy Tactics Advance, you can find ye cute moogles. Or ones that sound like Danny Devito-ish...

By the way Kuzlalala, I like the artwork!

[Kuzlalala]

Thanks.

Anyway, I'm going to make this game in 2 types. The first one is Reaker's while the second one will be Fras'. I'm going to ask the people at another thread.

[Kuzlalala]

I'm starting to make the character sprites all over again. Here's Reaker:



I'll continue with Fras, Montblanc, and write the rest of this visual novel's story.

Oh, and I was wondering if anyone is willing to help me with this project.

[rimir]

What kind of help do you need ?

[Kuzlalala]

Well, I'd probably need some help of lineart and shading, that's what I'd need the most.

Though you may also offer some other help, too.