An elf story {LOTR inspired}

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An elf story {LOTR inspired}

#1 Post by Nightfable » Sun Jul 14, 2019 10:38 pm

Lately, during my spare time, I've been doodling and working on an idea for a short kinetic novel.

It starts with a young elf (Nidhil) being brought to a cave against her will by brigands. Thankfully, a wood elf passing by the town's inn (Arveldir) overhears some men talk about their ploy to assault a helpless woman the following night. He arrives in the nick of time and saves her from a terrible fate. He brings her with him and as they travel together, she learns to trust and smile again. I want a few conflicts happening in between but at the end, they both fall in love and live happily ever after.

What do you think? Do you think this is worth it? Should invest my time and effort? I'm on the fence, honestly. Thank you! :)

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Re: An elf story {LOTR inspired}

#2 Post by fleet » Mon Jul 15, 2019 1:47 pm

I like the artwork, and I enjoyed reading LOTR. I'd probably read your kinetic novel if it's free.
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Re: An elf story {LOTR inspired}

#3 Post by Nightfable » Tue Jul 23, 2019 3:21 pm

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Re: An elf story {LOTR inspired}

#4 Post by Gery » Tue Jul 23, 2019 4:41 pm

Beautiful art! :) And I love stories about elves, so please keep going!

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