The Tale of the City (IN DEVELOPMENT)

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Re: Tokai no Shousetsu `Tale of the City`

#121 Post by risingdreams »

My condolences.
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#122 Post by Suzumiyaandy »

Thank you, both. I really appreciate it. He was such a great man, and I miss him so much..
I might have to pass the project onto someone else for now. My dad was usually my inspiration to write, or draw, or anything really.

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#123 Post by sake-bento »

Wow, I'm sorry to hear that. Hang in there.

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Re: Tokai no Shousetsu `Tale of the City`

#124 Post by Midnighticequeen »

I'm so sorry for your loss. It's terrible to lose a loved one

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Re: Tokai no Shousetsu `Tale of the City`

#125 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

Oh dear. My condolences. If there's anything we can do to help, let us know.
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#126 Post by Suzumiyaandy »

Thank you so much for the kind words, guys.
I will try to finish this, because I know my dad wouldn't want me to give up on something. It will just take time.
I do not need anything in particular at the moment.

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#127 Post by Danichuu »

I'm really sorry to hear that... I hope you'll be okay.

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#128 Post by Suzumiyaandy »

A month has passed since his death...
I think I'm ready to start working on this again.
Script is not done yet. Possibly enough for a demo if I can get the sprites, backgrounds, and graphical interface ready.

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#129 Post by risingdreams »

I hope you're feeling better now.
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#130 Post by Suzumiyaandy »

I'm Back from...
2 months ago? D:
I'm currently rewriting some parts due to the fact that they sounded like they were written by a boring 8 year old. >.<
I really need to update more often...
But, I need backgrounds and and if I can't find music on the 'webs, a composer.
Yo, yeah.
Nice to finally be back. :D

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Re: Tokai no Shousetsu `Tale of the City`

#131 Post by Suzumiyaandy »

AGHHHH! Sorry to double post, but I need some help >.>;;
Would... would anyone consider writing a little bit for me?

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Re: Tokai no Shousetsu `Tale of the City`

#132 Post by Chansel »

YOSHIKO MURATO:
A well kept, sky woman
A 'sky' woman? I think you mean 'shy' woman? ;)
Unless a sky woman is some new type of girl I haven't heard of yet... ^^"

Besides that, your game sounds like a nice and fun game :)
So, I might be willing to help you with writing, depending on what kind of help you're looking for.
I mean, do you need one scene? Or one whole character plot?
Or maybe it's something completely different that I can't come up with right now :P?

If it's one to three scenes or so, then I'd like to help you out. If it's much more than that, I'm afraid I won't have enough spare time to help... :S

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#133 Post by Suzumiyaandy »

Ah, yes. I think around 3 scenes would be nice right now ^^;;;
I'll need one for:
Yoichi helping Yoshiko put away books in the library after school.
Yoichi after he knocks over Mitsuko's bucket of mop water, and he helps clean it up with her.
Yoichi helping Kana correct papers after a school day.

If you need any more information feel free to ask. :D

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Re: Tokai no Shousetsu `Tale of the City`

#134 Post by Chansel »

I see, sounds like something I could give a go ^^
Could you perhaps pm me some more details?
Like the relationships the characters have with each other at that point?
(strangers, acquaintances, friends, etc.)
And maybe a short example of your writing style?
Since I doubt you'd want to include a scene with a totally different feeling from the rest of your game XD
And do you also want me to define what expressions your sprites should have? If so, tell me which are available ^^
And should it include menus with different conversation branches?
(Wow, that's quite a long list :P)

Before I start, I have one confession to make though.. English isn't my native language, so there will probably be some grammatical errors... I run all my texts through the Spell Check in word, but I'm afraid that won't correct everything.
Also, I'm pretty busy the next 3-4 days (my social life suddenly became very active). So I'm afraid I won't be able to write much very soon.
But after that I'll do my utmost best!
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Re: Tokai no Shousetsu `Tale of the City`

#135 Post by dstarsboy »

Do you mind me asking... why are you listing their blood types? Does that have something to do with the story or their personalities?
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