Chain Letters (another Horror/Suspense VN)
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Re: Chain Letters (another Horror/Suspense VN)
The plot kind of makes me think of Chaos; Head. But don't worry about originality since there is nothing new beneath the sun.
All stories of love, war, death, mystery, journey, and triumph have been told but should always be told again.
All stories of love, war, death, mystery, journey, and triumph have been told but should always be told again.
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Re: Chain Letters (another Horror/Suspense VN)
New character art up.
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I like his hair. ^-^
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Sasaki is moe...
Don't worry, we can get through it together. I didn't forget about you! I just got overwhelmed.
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@Sake-Bento: Thanks.
@JinzouTamashii: I guess, lol. Thanks. My goal is to make cute characters.
@JinzouTamashii: I guess, lol. Thanks. My goal is to make cute characters.
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Yes, in fact you made it! They all look so cutish, and I'm sure now girls wanna play this too! (Including me) XD
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I dunno why nobody's bothered to say this, but there's something weird about the art. While the render quality is pretty decent, the underlying basics are not that great. The vertical proportions are hovering around acceptable levels, but the horizontal proportions are terrible. All the characters are far too thin and have emaciated legs. Beyond the good colour choice and decent shading, the flesh and bones of the characters are pretty lacking. I see more style than substance here...
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Re: Chain Letters (another Horror/Suspense VN)
@Samu-kun: I guess I'm just not that good yet. I'm working on it.
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>.>"
"emancipated" should be "emaciated", I think... unless you mean that their legs have been freed from the slavery of walking! XD
"emancipated" should be "emaciated", I think... unless you mean that their legs have been freed from the slavery of walking! XD
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Spell checker can't fix words that I've spelled right, but used in the wrong context unfortunately...
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