Chain Letters (another Horror/Suspense VN)

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#16 Post by JinzouTamashii »

The plot kind of makes me think of Chaos; Head. But don't worry about originality since there is nothing new beneath the sun.

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#17 Post by Cybeat »

New character art up.
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#18 Post by sake-bento »

I like his hair. ^-^

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#19 Post by JinzouTamashii »

Sasaki is moe...
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#20 Post by Cybeat »

@Sake-Bento: Thanks.

@JinzouTamashii: I guess, lol. Thanks. My goal is to make cute characters.
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#21 Post by azureXtwilight »

Yes, in fact you made it! They all look so cutish, and I'm sure now girls wanna play this too! (Including me) XD
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#22 Post by Samu-kun »

I dunno why nobody's bothered to say this, but there's something weird about the art. While the render quality is pretty decent, the underlying basics are not that great. The vertical proportions are hovering around acceptable levels, but the horizontal proportions are terrible. All the characters are far too thin and have emaciated legs. Beyond the good colour choice and decent shading, the flesh and bones of the characters are pretty lacking. I see more style than substance here...
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#23 Post by Cybeat »

@Samu-kun: I guess I'm just not that good yet. I'm working on it.
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#24 Post by dracothrope »

>.>"

"emancipated" should be "emaciated", I think... unless you mean that their legs have been freed from the slavery of walking! XD

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#25 Post by Samu-kun »

Spell checker can't fix words that I've spelled right, but used in the wrong context unfortunately...

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