Missing Pages (a second version of the pre-game + hiatus)

[risingdreams]

Thank you for the advice. If it wasn't intended as an advice, it helped a lot, though XD.

...I don't know wheter I should be excited or absolutely terrified. This being my first project and all, in English (which isn't even my second language, as I never left Brazil in my entire life) XD.

One day I'll be in serious trouble because of my ambition. I swear.

[JinzouTamashii]

It's advice and I hope someone benefits from it. There's nothing more devastating than a project that crumbles halfway through...

[risingdreams]

Thank you.

I hope it suceeds. It's my first project and I like to tell stories, even though I'm not the best at it.

[risingdreams]

I'll fix a few things in the demo and post it here. Even though the graphics and possibly the music are just temporary.

I'm under the impression I annoyed the heck of everyone who was working with me, though. But I could be wrong.

[JinzouTamashii]

I'm under the impression I annoyed the heck of everyone who was working with me, though.

That's par for the course for any team coordinator, really...

[Mrs. Abject]

Are you still looking for editors? This sounds like an interesting project, and I'd love to help out.

[risingdreams]

Forgive me for taking so long to repply. ^_^ I think so. I think I would have to ask Suzumiyaandy first, though. But if she Suzumiyaandy agrees... Of course!

And thank you.

[Suzumiyaandy]

I don't mind. It would nice to have a second editor, it'll make the process come along faster.

[Mrs. Abject]

That's great! I like the sound of this story and want to help it be the best it can. Just send me whatever you want me to edit via a PM (or by putting it here in this thread-- I'm not picky). I edit for content (plot, characterization, flow, etc) as well as spelling/grammar, if that's okay.

[Danichuu]

Uwaa. I apologize for being so slow at getting some sample sketches done.... Life's been coming full force at me @A@ I'm making a sketch riiight now~

[Tsundere Lightning]

And I'll have them by Friday.

This was me slacking, not you annoying us, don't worry

[kim rii shein]

May I know what type of game is that?

[JinzouTamashii]

Mystery/Romance.

[kim rii shein]

erm...I mean what of games like Visual Novels or RPG games^^;...

[JinzouTamashii]

Can you say that with more words, please? I don't understand you.