@JinzouTamashii:
That's what I keep asking myself to make sure I'll be able to portray it in the VNs, that's not my main issue - I just think I'm really bad at writing proper dialogues. I really need to broaden my English vocabulary... somehow.
I really appreciate all of your kind words, and no matter whether it's intended or not, they all inspire me in a way.
@Danichuu & renpao:
Thank you! I sure hope the full version will live up to the demo. XD
@Deji:
Thanks to you as well!
Don't worry about the nitpicking, haha, I'm up for any kind of feedback!
Ahh, yes, the gameplay... I wanted something different from other VNs - I don't want the players to focus on one character, but rather on the whole plot. I guess it's sort of a hit or miss thing, I personally like it, but I completely understand when people don't.
The shake/sound effects sound like a good sounds like a good idea! I was thinking of something like in the Phoenix Wright series, I just didn't get around creating sound effects yet...it's not like I'm lazy or anything. XD /shot
About Takun...
His gender and the way he behaves are a huge theme in the story, all I can say right now though is that there's a reason for everything. His behaviour is sort of a facade, buuut if I said any more than that, I'd spoil the whole story, so... if anyone really needs to know, PM me or something? XD
I don't have an excuse for his weight though, his extreme anorexia is just a part of his character design. XD