Sheru-chan wrote:lol. well, they're punk-ish afterall... colorful clothes are just normal..lol
Well, that's my excuse.
And you're the one who colors? You do a pretty good job, cell shading is not my friend ): When thin I can say as well then though is that something I noticed is that the shading on the skin is very subtle, it might just be my laptop, but I can't see the difference between the darker shades and the main color on the skins of some, Robin and Liz for sure(Bruno here is fine
Thanks for the honest feedback! I do need more tips about what does and doesn't look good.
And I totally agree that the skin shading is too light, now that I look at it. I think I made it really light to hide the flaws.
I'll go through and strengthen the skin shadows.
PrettySammy09 wrote:And so far I am AMAZED at the complexity and detail that's been put into this. The writing is just phenomenal. The programming is top notch, the art is great. This is seriously commercial worthy material.
The writing is really sophisticated and well-done. That scene between Dallas and Robin is legitimately heart-breaking and we're given so much information with very few words of explanation which is so brilliant. We're shown, not told, exactly what happened between them. And I'm REALLY excited for the relationship to unfold (I'll probably go for him first ^^). I'm CRAZY impressed, just so you know.
Wow, thanks!! I can't wait until you finish the demo. xD It is pretty long, I was surprised when I clocked it at an hour, but I honestly didn't see how else to pace the introduction of the characters. Also, I have to thank IonicMomo for her initial characterization (and of course, unknown5). When I just had placeholder sprites, she knew how the characters spoke and thought ... Great stuff. Also, thanks about saying it could
be commercial. Not my plan, despite how much it would help me. ^^; When I wrote the DallasxRobin scene, I was hoping that people would know what was going on ... I'm so relieved that others are getting those [butterflies in your tummy/whatever you felt personally] from reading it as I did from writing it, hehe. xD
blakjak wrote:The Bruno sprite is cool, and looks rough enough. I really like the Liz one though =P
Awesome! I love blakjak approval. (^-^)b