[WIP] Idol World (visual novel) (looking for artist)...

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[WIP] Idol World (visual novel) (looking for artist)...

#1 Post by Battler » Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:05 am

Hey everyone, I have a visual novel in progress here, it's about a guy helping three idols to overcome their problems so they can join an important audition, and getting to date them as well.
The storyline is already finished, and so is the first chapter of the script. I need someone to do the art (mainly characters) [note: azraillesama lost all of its original art, and due to lack of time, he can only color now], if someone here is willing to help, go ahead, I'd greatly appreciate it.

If anyone is willing to read the storyline, it's at: Link removed, because it essentially spoils the entire storyline, PM me (or e-mail at oubattler@gmail.com), if you wish to get the file) . Any feedback is welcome.

Thanks in advance, everyone. ;)
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Re: [WIP] Idol World (visual novel)...

#2 Post by curry nochi rice » Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:44 pm

wow...an Idol managing game....or is it really an Idol management game?
this one is interesting because Idol-themed games are kinnda rare...

wait, it's kinnda like
Love? Love! Rec and The Idolmaster
I'm really impressed (I'm still a newbie) on how you organized your script....how many days did you work on it?...

and are you the only writer in your group?...you don't employ path writers right?.

Off-topic:
Kayoko Nonohara (coincidentally) sounds like two of my characters, Kyo Nakahara and Maya Nohara
lolz...I think this will be a good one...I can help in reviewing scripts if you want to.
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#3 Post by Battler » Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:08 pm

The storyline and script are being done by me only. It took me about two days to get the .DOC storyline done, and about one day to finish the Ren'py script for the first chapter (I can send you, if you want). Also, I'm currently the only person in my team.

Thanks for the feedback, anyway. And yeah some help in reviewing scripts would be nice. ;)
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#4 Post by curry nochi rice » Wed Apr 28, 2010 10:38 am

btw, i think you should Pm that storyline instead...i think it's a spoiler....
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#5 Post by Battler » Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:08 pm

- curry nochi rice: OK, I'll see what I can do about that.

BTW, do you happen to know anyone who could help me with the art? Right now I'm doing it myself (was able to quick-learn how to draw anime-style females by reading on a site I found on Ggoogle), but my drawing isn't perfect, and I have no idea if I can get all the art done by myself. :p
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#6 Post by curry nochi rice » Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:45 pm

We're on the same boat, i also have a project but no committing artist...(yet)

I too, is learning how draw..

(My reference. [Deji i think is also a forum member)
http://deji.ishtera.net/blog/?page_id=357
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#7 Post by Battler » Wed Apr 28, 2010 10:26 pm

Well, I used this site as my tutorial, namy Tachihohe's tutorial there. I'm able to draw faily well after that but I still have problems with getting the hands and feet looking right. I also have problems with drawing males (Tachihohe's tutorial seems to be mostly oriented at drawing females), but I found another tutorial which helped me draw a more masculine face. I'm going to post my drawings here tomorrow, so you can see, what I managed to do. ;)
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#8 Post by Battler » Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:44 pm

OK, here's my drawing of Mai Nishino, my visual novel's main heroine: http://www.cursedvideo.co.cc/chars/pict0012.png. Not perfect, but not bad, either. Later on today, I'll get a friend of mine to color it in Photoshop, then I just need to modify the face for various moods, and that's one character done. ;)
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#9 Post by azraillesama » Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:08 pm

I received your message and have read the topic. Here's an attempt at drawing your character (took me a minute literally)
Mai Nishino http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii21 ... /tried.png
I don't have her colors, you could at least write it in paper (label it, for example say light blue in hair, red in clothes, etc)
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#10 Post by Battler » Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:25 pm

I'll do the color labels right now. :p

Edit: And your drawing of Mai is extremely nice, I like it a lot. ;)
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#11 Post by azraillesama » Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:28 pm

Why thank you. Label your character sheets with the proper colors (or just dot them using mspaint with the color) and we'll have a deal.
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#12 Post by azraillesama » Fri Apr 30, 2010 5:16 am

Okay, I tried working out her standard pose, colored

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#13 Post by curry nochi rice » Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:34 am

that was quick....
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#14 Post by azraillesama » Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:03 am

Haruko Ibuki, the loli(youngest) idol. :D
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#15 Post by curry nochi rice » Fri Apr 30, 2010 9:31 am

give us Kayoko....
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