Hierofanía... is in dire need of proofreaders

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Hierofanía... is in dire need of proofreaders

#1 Post by ludeshka » Mon May 17, 2010 5:28 pm

Hello, everyone.
(I am posting this in the right forum, I hope... *crosses fingers*)

I'm making this post because I really need your help.
I would really like a second opinion (and third, if there's more than one person interested XD) on Hierofania`s script.

It's almost finished, and I would like to know...well, mostly if it doesn't suck. If it does suck,
then I want to know where and why, so I can make it better. ^^
I mean, I think it's kinda cool, but I'm the one who writes it, so...you know. I might be standing a little to close to the story to see if it works or not!

I'd like the point of view of someone who has nothing to do with it.

So...please? pretty please? help me out?
Maybe I can proofread you in exchange for your time? Or draw you a little something?

Thank you so much ^^

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#2 Post by Fluffycrow » Mon May 17, 2010 6:18 pm

Proofreading, you ask? 'Tis my specialty! If only I could apply the same insight to my own writing. -_-;;

I'd be glad to help. In addition to tips on your writing style, characterization, etc. etc., I'm a bit of a grammar nazi, and could help you out in that field as well.

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#3 Post by cloudyssky » Mon May 17, 2010 6:50 pm

I'll be glad to proof read. In exchange I'd love a proof reader myself :) (Also, I need an artist for my VN, *wink *wink*). But yeah, I'll gladly proof read whatever you got.

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#4 Post by ludeshka » Tue May 18, 2010 1:58 pm

Thank you so much for helping me! ^^
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#5 Post by lepapillonrouge » Tue May 18, 2010 7:55 pm

How long is your game~? :D I'd like to proofread it.

I've proofread The Curious Alliance before, that was fun :3

In return, you can proofread black butterfly's demo...
When I finish it. -_-~
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#6 Post by shiki » Thu May 20, 2010 3:05 am

I'm down for proofreading. Send me a copy, and let me know how merciless you want me to be. :3
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