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[WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 3:05 pm
by Lanna
First of all, hi guys! I've been gone for nearly 6 months, wow. That's right, after 'finishing' my first game, I had to take a break for almost half a year until I really felt inspired again. /headdesk

If you've played the first chapter - Please pretend it never happened lol. I hope you'll give this a try, since I'm 100% sure it'll be a LOT better ^^
If you're new to this whole thing - ...hi! If you like cartoon-ish art styles, quirky characters and insane amounts of stupidity my horrible sense of humor, you might enjoy this.

♦ Plot
Will is an arrogant, nerdy guy who loves swearing and the color pink. And he is what most people would call a robot. Highly annoyed by the fact he's always surrounded by scientists, he decides to abuse his one-time permission of leaving the laboratory - and somehow ends up as a cranky prodigy's partner in crime.

[Chapter 2 is (mostly) a prequel to Chapter 1. However, there's no need to play the first one at all. It'll still be confusing though :P]

♦ Genre: Comedy/Mystery

♦ Features:
- Lots of imagemaps :D (That's probably the only gameplay you'll get OTL)
- CG Gallery / Music Room
- Multiple endings (though only one true ending)
- ...and possibly some other things.

♦ Demo:
- Windows
- Mac
- Linux

♣ There's no music yet.
♣ I can't test the Mac/Linux versions myself. I hope they work ^^;
♣ If you have any comments/questions, please let me know :D

♦ Screenshots:
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Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink

Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 3:49 pm
by dstarsboy
Looks like alot of fun! I love the art style. I would recommend removing those dark brown corners from your text box and making them transparent instead.

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink

Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 6:20 pm
by Kyosuko
pretty unique protagonist! I love the art and I'll want the demo!

Goodluck!

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink

Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 6:23 pm
by aestate
WOAH THIS LOOKS SO COOL. I adoreeee your art. It's so colourful and crazy and amazing at the same time. >w<
I'm in the process of downloading chapter 1, actually. The dialogue in your preview screenshots amuse me... I'm looking forward to this. *.*

Also, I agree with dstarsboy--making the dark brown corners of the text boxes transparent would have a much more epic effect.

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink

Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 7:10 pm
by IonicMomo
I love your art! The style reminds of a childhood spent watching Saturday morning cartoons. [/nostalgia]
I really enjoyed your first game, and I'll look forward to this too. (And it's a yes to the demo. :))

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink

Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 9:15 am
by ludeshka
Oh, a Will-centric game? ^^
He was my favourite character in chapter one.
I'm very intrigued to see what his story is about.
I'm happy to see the artwork is still as colorful and awesome as usual from Lannako. :)

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink

Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 9:19 am
by Lanna
Thank you everyone! lol every single time I post here I get nervous because I feel kind of intimidated by all the pretty anime art in most of the other WIPs haha.

I was just going to re-use the text box from chapter 1 until I realized you guys were right... I like it a lot better now :D

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Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink

Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 11:16 am
by dstarsboy
Yay! Looks awesome! I think your art is as good as any I've seen around here. it's really all about style and you have that in droves.

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 5:32 pm
by Lanna
Demo is done ^^ I refuse to take breaks lol so here, this is what I have so far...enjoy! :D
Lanna wrote:♦ Demo:
- Windows
- Mac
- Linux

♣ There's no music yet.
♣ I can't test the Mac/Linux versions myself. I hope they work ^^;
♣ If you have any comments/questions, please let me know :D

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 7:25 pm
by Aka-kami
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HOMG. A GAME WITH WILL AS THE PROTAGONIST.

ILU did you know that *3*?

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 8:45 pm
by azureXtwilight
Wow! Awesome! Will? He was my fave! *runs to play*

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 3:50 am
by Kyosuko
Thank you for the demo! I really liked it! really gives a different aura! hehe. GoodluckZ!

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 5:54 pm
by Lanna
lol, I seriously had no idea how popular Will was especially compared to Takun until like everyone mentioned him hahaha. (Possibly) interesting trivia - he's supposed to be the main character in all games, but *some* characters just like acting like they're more important... :mrgreen:

@Kyosuko - Thank you very much ^^ Glad you enjoyed it!
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I should probably stop posting screenshots (especially since these are post-demo stuff) but this thread still lacks OTP love Takun :P

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(^ prequel timeline)

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(^ future timeline)

I don't think I'll ever manage making a non-confusing game without any sorts of flashbacks...lol

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 6:05 am
by HiroC
wow... i just downloaded the demo and i already liked(really liked) Will.

this is an awesome game. hope it would be finished soon! XDD

Re: [WIP] PN Chapter 2 - green Ink (Demo!)

Posted: Sun May 30, 2010 8:41 am
by pmoys
I thought it was pretty neato~ The only thing that bothered me was M. Marjory, her sprite grew like, 2 feet for one position and it scared me the first time. haha. It's a very nice break from all the anime style games though. I am excited for the full version! (btw i tested windows, but i can try to test the mac version for you tonight)