What are you Afraid Of? (First VN~) Sketch added

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What are you Afraid Of? (First VN~) Sketch added

#1 Post by mangakaluna » Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:05 am

Hey there~

I'm planning on making my first Visual Novel this summer :D

I'm basing it on a Japanese Fable that is translated in a similar name :)

Characters: 2
Endings: 3 unique, 2 repeat endings (5 in total)
Playtime: Probably under an hour to get all endings :)
Art: By myself
Story: Based on the Fable, but interpreted in my style
Genre: Humor/Dark (I don't think it will actually be horror, storyline wise :P )
Music: ....will be needing music >>;;



Story Summary:
A woman lives alone on a large mountain. One evening, a human-eating Demon pays her a visit. It's up to you, the reader, to out-fox the demon and keep the woman alive.


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#2 Post by Fluffycrow » Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:27 pm

Sounds fun! I'm curious, though; what exactly do you mean by "repeat" endings?
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#3 Post by mangakaluna » Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:37 pm

There will be two "game over" endings that you can get in multiple ways (generally consisting of the demon winning), and 3 specific endings that you get through making the correct choices :)

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#4 Post by alberte » Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:57 pm

Intrested, waiting whenever you are ready to post sketches *A*

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#5 Post by mangakaluna » Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:30 pm

Thanks!! I should hopefully have some rough ones up today after I get off work :)

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#6 Post by Chansel » Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:35 pm

Sounds interesting :)
I'm looking forward to hearing more about it.
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#7 Post by mangakaluna » Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:00 am

Added a sketch of the main character, currently a WIP. Trying to figure out a name for her...

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#8 Post by lepapillonrouge » Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:53 am

If you don't mind me asking, and considering the game, I think this makes sense, but is she going psychotic in that sketch? XD

It also just occurred to me that I've actually heard of the story that this game is based on. ;D
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#9 Post by azureXtwilight » Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:58 am

It's a beautiful sketch! Loved your style! There will be a massive otome project, I can see. ;)
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#10 Post by mangakaluna » Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:18 am

lepapillonrouge wrote:If you don't mind me asking, and considering the game, I think this makes sense, but is she going psychotic in that sketch? XD

It also just occurred to me that I've actually heard of the story that this game is based on. ;D

Hahahaha, not quite, although that would be a fun twist to add.
I was contemplating making this game rather simple, and then releasing a "full-version" that was more interactive with more endings :3
Hahah, I found the story in a book full of fables about fear, and fell in love with it.
azureXtwilight wrote:It's a beautiful sketch! Loved your style! There will be a massive otome project, I can see. ;)
Hee, thank you :D

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#11 Post by afu » Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:26 am

This looks intersted ^^ nice to see another GxB visual novel in the making!
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#12 Post by NatsukiDeath » Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:55 pm

Oh "House of Leaves" is a good horror type music to use.

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#13 Post by Lizzy-Wants-Usui » Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:01 pm

Wow, you're such a great artist. :3
*is excited for this game* xD

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#14 Post by mangakaluna » Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:20 pm

Lizzy-Wants-Usui wrote:Wow, you're such a great artist. :3
*is excited for this game* xD
Thank you! XD
NatsukiDeath wrote:Oh "House of Leaves" is a good horror type music to use.
Oh, thanks for the suggestion!

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#15 Post by desulishor » Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:28 pm

niec artwork, hope it turns out well, even if the genre is not my favorite one. Since it's your first, I'll give you the same advice that I was given, found it very helpful and hope you do too.

advice on music, originally posted by ashewalton (links messed up, just google em)

Music:

Jamendo: Hands-down one of my favourite open-source music repositories. Some songs have a royalty-free purchase option if you're looking to make a commercial game. Try searching by genre (Instrumental and Ambient are my favourite) and then listing by most popular to get to the best music for use in a game.
Newgrounds: I was surprised to hear, but apparently Newgrounds has quite the selection of creative-commons licensed music. I haven't listened to much, so I couldn't comment on the general quality of the archive.
Musopen: Mostly open-source/creative-commons licensed classical music. Also includes sheet music if you happen to be a composer.
Incompetech: Free for use in non-commercial projects, I can't say much on the quality of the archive because I've only listened to a few songs from this archive (mind you, what I've heard is stellar).
Free Music Archive: Not sure about the quality of this archive... it seems to be hard to sort the slushpile material to what might actually be useful, but I'm sure there's some fabulous instrumental tracks.
Sakari Infinity: The tracks are decidedly RPG-oriented, but could work well in a more high-action visual novel. Some of the slower tracks are quite good as well. The general quality of the archive is quite high as it's a closed community.
Wikimedia Commons - Music archive: Useful because a great number of the tracks are already in .OGG format, which Ren'Py actually prefers to .MP3. It's not necessarily all public domain though, so check the licenses for each track carefully.

For editing music for use in your game, you'll want a program like Audacity (free), and then remove ANY silence from the beginning of the track (you'll likely need to zoom in a few times) and most from the end (this will help music loop more seamlessly).

while you can draw characters just fine, you might need a few backgrounds so here's the advice i received on stock images.


deviantArt: Make sure you're looking around in the "Stock Images & Resources" category -- there's lots of photography on deviantArt that isn't meant to be used by others. Also make sure when choosing stock from dA that it doesn't come with a stipulation limiting it for use ONLY on deviantArt.
stock.xchng A huge repository of stock images, all free. Here, you may find some stock images that are free for use in commercial projects.

If you don't have an image-editing program like Photoshop, never fear: free ones exist, probably the best being the GIMP (which is free, and available for all platforms).

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