WIP Autumn Tears

[Momorin]

Prologue:
If there is only one thing I would like to change in this world... that could probably the fact that my brother is my brother. Because I love him as a man but we can't be together because HE IS MY BROTHER. We always see each other and we are always together... it's so difficult to breathe the same air at times. IF only we can be together.... or at least let me forget this feelings for him.....

Characters:

Rika Kudou
Age: 15
Info: Rika is secretly in love with her own older brother, Jun. A very good cook but sometimes clumsy. She has always says what is the contrast of she really thinks in mind. Yes, she is a tsundere.


Jun Kudou
Age: 17
Info: Jun is a caring and gentle brother to Rika. While worrying more for Rika, he hurts her more with realizing it. His feelings are unclear especially about Rika. While being nice and all in front of Rika, he blackmails and orders people to get away from her.


Renge Hanazawa
Age: 15
Info: Renge is Rika's homo friend. Though most likely that it's him/her and Jun that are close. He, er, she is the only person that has able to pass through Jun's wicked barrier for Rika.

This is sort of a otome game since you can end up with onii-chan or maybe you can accidentally fall for Renge and tries to turn him into a man again.
The whole story occurs during autumn season, Since it has a specific purpose for the story.

I don't have much confidence in my programming skills and english grammar but i hope to produce a decent VN.

EDIT:
I will now post official sprites for the game. I've been kinda busy in RL but i'll still try to update.

[NatsukiDeath]

I really look forward to This! Can't wait to see Renge! >3<


Very diffenrt to all the other games haven't seen one like this and quite short since it places in autum but that is fine~

reminds me of Love revo with the borther sort of, and the gay friend reminds me of Tokimeki 4 ever fans!~

Keep up your good work!

[dstarsboy]

Ohhh! An incest VN with some added Yaoi?! Now you're being true to the genre. Keep up the good work.

One note on the sprites... but it looks as if you're coloring them overtop of your lineart layer... are you? I may look better to color it below the linart. I could just be seeing things and you're doing that thing where you color the lineart itself to give it an added smoothness. If so, ignore me.

[Momorin]

@Natsukideath
Thanks! And well, i do intend to make a short vn as i'm just a beginner and this is my very first vn. I'm just curious, how come the autumn season is short? I was thinking it was long enough though...

Ohhh! An incest VN with some added Yaoi?! Now you're being true to the genre. Keep up the good work.

Um, well, if I'm not misunderstanding my own work, i never mentioned yaoi. anyway, if it was about jun-kun and renge did you hit a bullseye....or not? Maybe let it be a mystery for now

One note on the sprites... but it looks as if you're coloring them overtop of your lineart layer... are you? I may look better to color it below the linart. I could just be seeing things and you're doing that thing where you color the lineart itself to give it an added smoothness. If so, ignore me.

Umm, I looked up at my working file and i colored it below my lineart. Well, I'm not a good colorist yet and i'm just getting used to my tablet so... as i have mentioned, I have plans of re-doing my artwork.

[alberte]

Hmm.. i'll keep an eye out for this,
just to mention,, rika sorta looks like dokuro~chan.

[NatsukiDeath]

Oh I mean by short is autum is the time when everything is slowing down till it is turn into a sudden frozen season.

.........Yeah that is an odd explaniation but i'll leave it at that XD

Great story for a first one ! G O O D LUCK~

[machinist]

oo love the idea good luck i hope you finish

[Abeiramar]

So... how is your VN going ? I would like to play it.

[ashewalton]

Your art is really nice and has a lot of potential, you've just recently started digital art? I'm not much of an artist myself, but I do have a few digital illustration tutorials bookmarked on deviantArt, maybe you'll find some use out of them?

Digital Drawing Tutorial by `aeterne
Color References 5 by UltimeciaFF

Good luck with the VN, I look forward to seeing a release~!

[carosene]

Taboo relationships? XD Good stuff. And kewl art! I cheer for this, and I look forward to seeing it's release!

(I hate to be all politically correct and crap, but if Renge likes men because she identifies as a woman, (and is referred to as she) then she would be "transgender," i.e., she's a heterosexual woman, rather than gay. A gay man would like men and still identify as a man. Unless she's questioning, and still figuring out her identity and stuff, then you can get away with whatever you want. X3 Or she could be a bisexual or homosexual transgender woman, and be into other women. X3 It happens, man! Whatever the case, I'm excited about queer characters, and I look forward to seeing him/her!)

Lol, the main character in my visual novel is named Autumn and she's very angsty, and cries and stuff. XD I knew this was wrong when I saw your title, but it cracked me up. X3

[Momorin]

Hmm.. i'll keep an eye out for this,
just to mention,, rika sorta looks like dokuro~chan.

Dokuro-chan? Um, is dat dokuro-chan of Yatterman??? I'm sorry I can't think of any else.

@mechnist:

Thank you!

So... how is your VN going ? I would like to play it.

Slow progress. TT_TT I'm still practicing drawing and I'm still completing the script. I hope to finish it soon too but I would like to do it slowly and have fun making it... unless I want it to look rushed and boring.

Your art is really nice and has a lot of potential, you've just recently started digital art? I'm not much of an artist myself, but I do have a few digital illustration tutorials bookmarked on deviantArt, maybe you'll find some use out of them?

Digital Drawing Tutorial by `aeterne
Color References 5 by UltimeciaFF

Good luck with the VN, I look forward to seeing a release~!

Thank you! I would probably use the color references though I have to say that the Digi-Drawing tut should be saved later once I've improved more.lol.

Taboo relationships? XD Good stuff. And kewl art! I cheer for this, and I look forward to seeing it's release!

(I hate to be all politically correct and crap, but if Renge likes men because she identifies as a woman, (and is referred to as she) then she would be "transgender," i.e., she's a heterosexual woman, rather than gay. A gay man would like men and still identify as a man. Unless she's questioning, and still figuring out her identity and stuff, then you can get away with whatever you want. X3 Or she could be a bisexual or homosexual transgender woman, and be into other women. X3 It happens, man! Whatever the case, I'm excited about queer characters, and I look forward to seeing him/her!)

Lol, the main character in my visual novel is named Autumn and she's very angsty, and cries and stuff. XD I knew this was wrong when I saw your title, but it cracked me up. X3

Taboo relationships are my forte since I love those kind of relationships. Thank you!
Err... He was referred "she" for the sole reason that he wants too. That is the only reason I referred him as "she". I figured that since it would mostly be what he would be referred to in the VN, so I used "her" in terms of "he" instead.

[Momorin]

Umm.... does anybody know where can i find some melodramatic BGMs? I just can't find any anywhere @~@

Currently on the verge on making the sprites of Jun now... coloring is the worst part of doing sprites~

[cloudyssky]

Umm.... does anybody know where can i find some melodramatic BGMs? I just can't find any anywhere @~@

Currently on the verge on making the sprites of Jun now... coloring is the worst part of doing sprites~

Look for BGM's at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio. All the stuff you find there can be sorted by genre, and (best of all) is all the music there is user created under the Creative Commons license, so you're free to use the music as long as it isn't for commercial purposes (unless you make arrangements with the composer of the music you're using).

[Momorin]

ooh! Thank you! It helped me a lot!

[Momorin]

umm, so, i have a question.... what heroine shud i use?(referral was at the first post and in my avatar). I'm having the hard time choosing.lol