Doppelganger (GXB,mystery,horror)+demo [on hold]

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Doppelganger (GXB,mystery,horror)+demo [on hold]

#1 Post by azureXtwilight » Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:02 pm

I was planning it every time I was having a block for the Fantasia series....

Expect less pluff and dark storyline.

Updating:

At last, Clifford's endings are done for! FINALLY!

Here's a quick lint report:

Code: Select all

Statistics:

The game contains 11,786 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 110,584 words,
for an average of 9.4 words per screen.
The game contains 51 menus.
Remember to set config.developer to False before releasing.

Lint is not a substitute for thorough testing. Remember to update Ren'Py
before releasing. New releases fix bugs and improve compatibility.
These screens contain a total of 67835 words

While the whole Fantasia: ROA contains 151,652 words and ROT contains 64,304 words

YAY?


What if your wish actually can come true? You just wish and someone else will do it for you. It comes with a price though...


Play as LUCIA NICOL, a snobbish girl who only thinks of herself. She's trapped in a weird situation after she wished for those who bullied her, ANASTASIA and her gang to feel the same thing. One by one, they are attacked and their body parts were taken. All the clues points to Lucia, but Lucia knows for sure she didn't do any of those... Could it be that the delinquent YURI IVANOV did it?

Meanwhile, some of the people she knows disappear as well, like ENRICO MORETTI and Lucia starts to see people... Those who cannot be seen and heard by others, such as CLIFFORD RHODES. Even his brother, ARTHUR NICOL, says she's crazy.

Her schoolmates, JUN SUWABARA, BLAKE LANDERS, RAPHAEL MARTIS, IGNATOUS IVANOV and LEE ZHUYUAN also have some things they hide... And they are also involved in this thing.... Are they enemies or are they allies?

What's happening to Lucia? Will she be able to prove herself innocent? Will she save everyone who's been missing? What is the source of all these?

With six different paths, more than ten different endings, and many unlockable bonus... Solve this mystery please!

Soo what do ya think?

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Oops, Ralph's supposed to be 18! XD MY MISTAKE!!!

Ignatius Ivanov (15)
Ignatius Ivanov is Yuri's younger brother who is also Lucia's underclassman. He lives next door with his mother and seems to get along with Lucia well.

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Arthur Nicol (14)
Lucia's younger brother whose hobby is visiting message boards, can be an useful resource for rumors and news around the city.

Anastasia & her gang
They like to bully Lucia and other "weak" student, but one by one the "reaper" reaps their happiness....

??? (??)
A young man surrounded by mysterious aura, seems to be present whenever a case happens. Who is he?

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Enrico Moretti (17)

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Rico (Enrico Moretti) is Yuri's arch enemy, a delinquent from Valudeto high, and Anastasia's boyfriend. He appeared to be one of the first victims from Lucia's school, but appeared in front of Lucia asking for help...

Team members:
Me : Story, sprites, lineart, shade, programming, coding
LumenAstrum, Otomeweekend : Basic colorist
Kirroha : Proofreader, co-writer
Riviera : Editor
nero279, Snowflower, kkisaragi, TakeOverWorld : Proofreaders

I can't afford having too many proofreaders, sorry XD

Those who has been picked will automatically become beta-testers as well, unless yu don't want to.

DEMO LINK : http://www.mediafire.com/?4rgdb6bg8j9fx6t

Please do tell me :
1. Fave chara?
2. Found bugs/typo?
3 . A short review, perhaps?


UPDATE : http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... &start=465
Thanks!

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Re: Doppleganger~

#2 Post by kirakiraxpikapika » Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:14 pm

uwaa! Very interesting! Hehe, I can't wait for the art. Um, question: Are the obtainables foreigners? They're surnames do give that impression. :D

If you would ever need some help(in proofreading), I'm here to help and gonna watch for this one XD

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Re: Doppleganger~

#3 Post by azureXtwilight » Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:21 pm

kirakiraxpikapika wrote:uwaa! Very interesting! Hehe, I can't wait for the art. Um, question: Are the obtainables foreigners? They're surnames do give that impression. :D

If you would ever need some help(in proofreading), I'm here to help and gonna watch for this one XD
Foreigners... depends on what country you are on XD
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#4 Post by kirakiraxpikapika » Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:25 pm

actually, foreigners WHEREVER country you're from. I'm seeing a japanese, chinese and well others out and about. hehe, All are definitely foreigners to me... no one sounds like from my country.

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Re: Doppleganger~

#5 Post by YonYonYon » Fri Oct 01, 2010 2:09 pm

Yay for russian guy!
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#6 Post by azureXtwilight » Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:02 am

Sketches are now up~
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#7 Post by YonYonYon » Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:12 am

Umm...I think they're need moar individuality. Yuri Ivanov looks like Nazim somehow...
I'm sorry.
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#8 Post by azureXtwilight » Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:15 am

Heheh, I haven't even colour him yet ^_^

I guess it is because I've drawn so many guys :o
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#9 Post by Asterisk » Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:01 pm

I really like Lucia's look! She looks fresh imo for a mc

Ooo different setting from you!
I can't to see more of this! It sounds interesting!
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#10 Post by sayuri » Sun Oct 03, 2010 1:58 am

YonYonYon wrote:Umm...I think they're need moar individuality. Yuri Ivanov looks like Nazim somehow...
I'm sorry.
Whoa I don't know where you came up with Nazim :lol:. His hair is just like Raven~ :P
Point stands however.

Anyway, it sounds so exciting, azure! Clifford is my favorite (so far). I wonder who is canon... /shot

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Re: Doppleganger~ (w/ sketches)

#11 Post by RabbitDoubt » Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:10 pm

My favourite (from the little I've seen anyway) is Raphael. He seems like the cool but cute type. <3 I also like the uniform. Mini ties!

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#12 Post by ThirstingHeart » Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:13 am

Goodness Azure! I didn't think you would even be thinking of another game so soon. This looks good, I'm pretty excited about a darker storyline. So far it looks like I'm going to like Yuri. I love the coat over his shoulders. <3 Its a great look.
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#13 Post by azureXtwilight » Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:13 am

Well, so much for premise...

Here is the intro...

Forgive the grammar and lack of images for now Smile

It won't be completely in NVL mode, since this only appears whenever 3rd POV is played.

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#14 Post by Pyonkotchi » Sat Oct 09, 2010 2:35 pm

Eeeeeeee

Meganekko MC <3

That Lee guy intrigues me, Long hair held in a ponytail, and wears glasses!? (not all the time but least he wears 'em) :9
THIS IS RELEVANT TO MY INTERESTS <3

Anyways, seems interesting enough, I'll keep an eye on this n3n
Not to mention "Doppleganger" is just a lolzy sounding word, therefore it must be cool /what?
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Re: Doppelganger~ (w/ sketches)

#15 Post by azureXtwilight » Sat Oct 09, 2010 7:04 pm

Pyonkotchi wrote:Eeeeeeee

Meganekko MC <3

That Lee guy intrigues me, Long hair held in a ponytail, and wears glasses!? (not all the time but least he wears 'em) :9
THIS IS RELEVANT TO MY INTERESTS <3

Anyways, seems interesting enough, I'll keep an eye on this n3n
Not to mention "Doppleganger" is just a lolzy sounding word, therefore it must be cool /what?
I should've changed it to doppelganger, google it, it has meaning ;)
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