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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#61 Post by Pyonkotchi » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:17 pm

heh I actually liked Chael first, And I went after Nefferon second,
the whole "evil guy" thing intrigued me n3n

I liked Nefferon's path. Lol Duren. He did bore me D;

I haven't played Kirile's path yet actually o3o;
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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#62 Post by broken_angel » Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:30 pm

Sublime - Haha, I see how it is. xP

And thanks. C:

Pyonkotchi - I'm glad I'm not the only one who likes Chael better than Kirile. ;)

And yeah...Duren even bores me, and I created the poor guy!
But ah well. He's gay, anyway, and his ending sucks, so I don't mind if girls don't like him. xD
He was mainly just added to balance everything out because I don't like odd numbers unless they're multiples of 5. [/OCD]

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#63 Post by azureXtwilight » Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:14 am

Huh? Gay? :o
Duren is gay?
I was about to go to his path...
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Re: (Updated) Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested

#64 Post by RabbitDoubt » Sun Oct 17, 2010 9:12 am

broken_angel wrote:To RabbitDoubt:I think it's interesting that a lot of people like Kirile. Is it just his looks or what? xD
His looks. >__>; Nefferon's good too, but Kirile is clearly superior to every other character in the game. :wink:

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#65 Post by broken_angel » Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:12 pm

To azureXtwilight:

Heh, yeah, in the larger story. xD
So in this game, it teases you with possibilities for romantic moments, but you never get any because of that. >D


To RabbitDoubt:

Heheh, I see how it is.

I personally think Chael is hotter than Kirile, but I guess I just have a weakness for long-haired men. xP

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#66 Post by nefferinthia » Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:51 pm

Just popping in again to say I find Chael's looks to be superior to Kirile's as well. But yeah long hair fetish OTL''
And you should've given one of them glasses xD;;

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#67 Post by broken_angel » Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:59 pm

Glasses = love. >w<

If I hadn't already created the characters before-hand, I might have.
There will definitely be a few love interests with glasses in my next game, though. >D
I created them specifically for that purpose. xD

I'll be setting up a WIP thread for that soon, as soon as I get the last few bits of character art.

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#68 Post by Pyonkotchi » Sun Oct 17, 2010 1:24 pm

hohoho
i love Chaels fabulous hair n3n

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#69 Post by broken_angel » Mon Oct 18, 2010 10:35 pm

In reality, his hair is actually longer, but...I can't complain. xP

And yes, there shall definitely be a few of those in my next game. >D


As far as the game at hand...
I edited the download link in the first post with an updated version.
This one basically just fixes minor things: the white pixels around the boys and a bug that was reported a while back.

I hope everything works okay this time. C:
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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#70 Post by maypaymusic » Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:52 am

Kirile the Powerful looks interesting! :lol:

btw is there a way for you to be able to hide the sketching of the CGs? I mean they look great but the pencil marks kinda ruin the mood for me xD and duran's nose is a bit big? xD but overall I like the game so far :) good job on your first game!
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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#71 Post by Cain0425 » Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:29 pm

i want play the full game and i like Kirile best he my fav out of all the guys but kirile looks more of a demon then a angel you know

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Demo - Feedback Requested]

#72 Post by broken_angel » Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:58 pm

To maypaymusic:

Thanks. C:

And no, there's not really a way to "hide" them. It would've cost twice as much to have them "finalized" without the sketchy look, and quite honestly, I just don't think it's worth it, especially not for a free game.

I didn't draw any of the art, so I can't do much about it. xP
There are a few jokes about Duren's nose thrown in if you take the time to view his "secret ending," though. :lol:


To Cain0425:

If you played it, then you did play the full game. xD
I know it says "demo" in the title...I should probably change it to "download."

And in this particular story, I have my own definition of an "angel," so an angel can be either good or evil. Demons and angels are not opposites in this case; Kirile is, in fact, both a demon (which is just as much an ethnicity as it is a species) and an angel by my definitions.

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Download - Feedback Requested]

#73 Post by VenusEclipse » Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:12 am

It's a full game and not a demo? In other words, it's complete?

*Downloads

Ever consider having it moved to the completed games section?

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Download - Feedback Requested]

#74 Post by broken_angel » Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:16 am

It's complete except for some art that I'm missing.

So I'll move it to the Completed section once I get the last bit of art (and once I'm satisfied that I've fixed all the bugs). ^^;

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Re: Memoirs of an Angel [Download - Feedback Requested]

#75 Post by Cain0425 » Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:59 pm

it missing some art work so that why i am missing 3 of the CGs and where i was think i did not get it be for

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