The Spiritual Equivalent - The Host of the Other (GxB / WIP)

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#76 Post by Miss-Mae » Sat Feb 19, 2011 7:43 am

Oooh, nice looking screenies! I can't wait to see more. :D P.S, liking the school background. ;) <3
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#77 Post by Alera » Sat Feb 19, 2011 7:59 am

Something little about the main menu:
Like papillon said it's a bit hard to read. The logo gets lost too much in the background, probably because all of the effects on it. If you clean the area around it and leave less details, maybe change the contrast of the colours- it would look better in my opinion. ^^
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#78 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:04 am

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Which one is better : old one or new one?
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#79 Post by Snowflower » Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:13 am

The first one has a bit Fantasia feel & the second has a more mysterious feel.

i like the 2nd
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#80 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:19 am

Fantasia feel? Lol XD
Yeah, I personally like the second best but I am asking for all your opinions... :D

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#81 Post by Snowflower » Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:20 pm

Lumen_Astrum wrote:Fantasia feel? Lol XD
Yeah, I personally like the second best but I am asking for all your opinions... :D

Yeah, Fantasia?
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#82 Post by Riviera » Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:18 pm

While I like the second one as a menu, I really like the character art in the first one.

If the second one becomes a menu, will we ever see that particular picture of all the character in game, somehow?
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#83 Post by Elenakiara » Fri Feb 25, 2011 4:03 pm

Riviera wrote:While I like the second one as a menu, I really like the character art in the first one.

If the second one becomes a menu, will we ever see that particular picture of all the character in game, somehow?
Yeah, I agree 100%! xD Maybe the image could be used in the beginning as a kind of intro image or while the game's loading? :3
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#84 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sat Feb 26, 2011 1:40 am

Hm... that is possible, but then I dunno how to do it :o
I was thinking of making A Dark Cut as the title screen music.
(made by MaestroRage too, like the one who made "Tell Me Once Again" for Independent XD)

Plus during the silent part before the loud bass/drumming-of-sorts in the beginning, I want the load screen on that part before the main menu shows up~
Get me? XD

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I just looked again at the old main menu and realized that Sharia's travel outfit looks way too garish, and too... fancy XD

A sneakie of Sharia's sprite and her new travel clothes :

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I tried my best to make it look Greek-styled, since Sharia likes Greek mythology a lot.
And it looks like shorts, but she's wearing a skirt XD

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And another thing : I'm starting to hate my design of Aiko's travel clothing. Should I change it?

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#85 Post by Riviera » Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:54 pm

So pretty!~

I dunno, I think the only reason it might look like shorts is that you can see her legs through it in the concept sprite. I doubt it'll be that way when it's finished. This all makes me want to bribe you to do some art for my possible-future barely even scratched out VN. ^_^
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#86 Post by JamesH » Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:00 pm

Sprite looks amazing :D

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#87 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:13 am

Here's progress for Shariaa~!! :D

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And Aiko's complete set of outfits :

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(travel outfit changed to make her look more like a farmer's daughter and less like a weirdo XD)

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#88 Post by JamesH » Thu Mar 03, 2011 7:21 pm

The sprites look amazing :)

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#89 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:19 am

Thank you!

Here's the link to TSE's two songs written by mint-and-chocolate :

Here We Go Again

One Week With You

The songs, so far, always makes me cry everytime I read it.
Probably you have all read "Here We Go Again", but "One Week With You" is more beautiful.
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#90 Post by mint-and-chocolate » Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:33 am

...delete my name there.

Like, right now. Or eeeeelse.

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