I figured the same people who'd help her escape may attempt to talk her out of it. Well, some of them. Some of them would "see the greater good", some may simply not care. But there's always gonna be the one that has to be the Tidus to Final Fantasy X's Yuna. "Just cuz that's the way everyone says it works, doesn't mean it really IS how it works! You can't go die!"Ulin207 wrote:Ah I see, that's what was meant. That would need more thought then. It certainly seems like a nice idea, but doesn't really fit with what has been written so far. I hope you don't mind me saying, why would someone really want to talk her out of it? Makes life better for them. XD This wasn't meant as an attack, so I apologise if you take offence, it's just something that popped into my mind as I read your comment.
I'm pretty good at proofreading and editing, if you guys need any help with that. If a demo's that close though, you probably don't. It's great news that it is!