[Demo] Forget-me-not * (bxb) [Updated 8/1]

[aestate]

YOUR HEADER IS LIKE PURE BEAUTY IN THE FORM OF A HEADER. lolwut. Uh, I mean, your art is very lovely. :'D I adore your characters and the way you write them. The plot sounds like a perfect blend of sad and cute, and who doesn't love childhood friend premises. Hehehe. (Oh yes, and...BL for the win!)

And I would love to proofread your demo! >w< *lurks around your thread*

[Boniae]

OHYUS! I finally got all the demo script finished. I just got to slap on some other sprites and play it through, and it might be ready pretty soon...*w*

@ Night_Serenade; Thanks, I'm glad it sounds interesting to you! XD Awesome, I'd love for you to help! *u*

@ Aestate; LOLS, thanks, it means alot! HURRAY, another proofreader! *I do not trust my grammar skills*

So once I get the coding and such all tied up, I'll PM it to you two (or more, I'm open to anyone else), and it'll be ready for proofreading. After that, I'll release it.

[night_serenade]

Yay~ I can't wait to try it XD
-waits patiently for demo-
Y'know, I bet after I finish the demo I'm going to be so sad, because I'll want the full game ASAP XD
That always happens LOL

[Boniae]

LOL, I know right? You play the demo and get exited for more...;w;

Thanks for all the support everyone, it helps me look forward to releasing it and everything. :'D

[Boniae]

** I've also updated some newer screenshots! **

/DERP pleaaase don't shoot me for a double post 2 days later... ;w;

[night_serenade]

PFFT why would anyone shoot you when you just gifted us with more beautiful screenshots?!

Michael is gorgeous D:
And Miranda is really cool; I love her outfit and her hair! (Actually I just really love everything you draw and colour, your style is amazing! o.o)

The only thing I found a little odd was how you have one BG that's an actual photo (the locker one). It just felt a little out of place. But it's some BIG thing that's bothering me or anything, so don't worry too much about it ;D

Ah you're torturing meeee XD
-is still trying to wait patiently-

[Boniae]

*wipes sweat off forehead* I live another day. XD

Thanks so muuch! ;w; I went all out coloring her hair, lawlss. (She must live on hair dye. XD)

Yeah, I know what you mean, it is out of place. (There's actually 2 BG's with real photos, though.) I tried to find a locker and a lunchroom, but instead I had to get photos. Maybe I can pass it by, somehow. XD

It's tough, but hang in there! XD I hope to give it to the you and aestate by this week.

[night_serenade]

Haha~
Well it looks awesome, so your effort was definitely worthwhile!

hm, well this is a cafeteria : http://translate.google.com/translate?h ... ao.sub.jp/
and this is a locker (though probably not one you're looking for) : http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/downlo ... php?id=117
open version : http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/downlo ... php?id=122

the person (and the thread) who made the last two can be found here : http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?t=889

Hope those might help, but if not, I wouldn't mind two photos at all

And yayyyy~ I'll be looking forward to it~! XD

[Boniae]

ASDFGHJKL, I've been to that Japanese site but didn't see that cafeteria one there, thanks! I think I'll have to use that one.
The locker one, though, I don't think it's suitable - but thanks for finding them!

[night_serenade]

Hehe no problem~! Glad I could help even a little bit =]
I'll stay on the look out for other locker BGs, just in case~!
And you might be able to find someone willing to make one for you, I mean a locker isn't that hard to draw, haha~

[Boniae]

Hurrray, lookouts! XD It is true, drawing a locker isn't very hard (Although I'm not really good at it. Dx), so probably when the whole full game is released little changes will most likely be made.

A little update, I guess; I finally got practically all the graphics in, but then I realized there was a huge problem with some if statements, and I can't figure out the problem. I'm going to have a to make a post in the forums since this is driving me crazy. XD I still hope the demo may be proofread by the end of the week, but for now I can't make any promises. (Those darn if then statements. x_x; )

Thanks for anyone who has been waiting patiently! XD

[Boniae]

HUZAAAAH!!! I finally got the demo done!!! (go to the first page)

Currently I just have a sendspace link, but I'll post some more mirrors soon. (I tried doing the lemmasoft attachment but I finally got it uploaded, but then it somehow deleted it...I was very angry.)

Well, I don't have much other to say than enjoy the demo! ;u; *tears of joy and hardwork*

[night_serenade]

OMG!! Excuse me as I race off to download and play!!!
I'll be back with my thoughts/comments/feelings/other feedback etc. etc.
-is super excited-

[Boniae]

Run forest run! XD
I hope you enjoy it!

(Btw, if you find any spelling errors you can PM them to me.)

[Julie]

I will download the demo now and tell you what I think after playing. ^^