Caught in between GxB (WIP). Update(April 15, 2011) 1st page

[SilverxBlue]

Maybe, but could it still be possible to make him childish that way..?

[monochromia]

Well teasing is considered childish, but people in my general age group and older still do it. xD

[SilverxBlue]

@ Monochromia
Maybe I think i'll just make him so playful that he could be really annoying haha.

To everyone:
Since this project is moving at snail's pace I'm planning to release a demo maybe by late February or early March.
The demo would only focus on the childhood of the three main characters. The demo is almost done all I have to do is to add the art and the music and I would be releasing it.
Hoping that Elze and juryia would respond to my PMs T_T.
Even if it is a demo I would still put some sort of ending and there would be 2-3 of them. Maybe something like a "The end for now".

But Is that still called a demo?

[Elze]

Checked my inbox and replied C:
Maybe it's more of a teaser/prologue?

[SilverxBlue]

"Prologue" That's it..! that was the word I was looking for..!
Maybe I could name it "Caught in between a childhood prologue" or something along that line.

[platonicheart]

I want to proofread

[winternight119]

Omg double posted automatically, I don't know why

[winternight119]

However, during those three years in High School Masaru and Kenji started to grow apart, Masaru spent more time with his "geek" friends and Kenji spent more time with the jocks. But, they still occasionally go together with Misaki and Shione during lunch and during their walks to and from school. Then came senior year

With the school system in Japan, it is 3 years for high school, I believe. If you want to change the setting to a Western setting with 4-year high schools, then that might be an option, but you'd have to adjust the story for believability if you are going to have it set in Japan.

[SilverxBlue]

However, during those three years in High School Masaru and Kenji started to grow apart, Masaru spent more time with his "geek" friends and Kenji spent more time with the jocks. But, they still occasionally go together with Misaki and Shione during lunch and during their walks to and from school. Then came senior year

With the school system in Japan, it is 3 years for high school, I believe. If you want to change the setting to a Western setting with 4-year high schools, then that might be an option, but you'd have to adjust the story for believability if you are going to have it set in Japan.

Oh thank you... then I'll just adjust it to three years... But they are still called seniors on their final year right?

[SilverxBlue]

Hello everyone..!
Well here is the prologue's statistics.

The game contains 898 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 7,271 words,
for an average of 8.1 words per screen.
The game contains 14 menus

I think it's playtime would be 30-40 mins I don't really know for the others. It was my cousin who tried reading it.

[SilverxBlue]

Okay, so this thread is basically almost dead since, I can't post any art -_- and the sprite artist is on a hiatus... Maybe,I'll try pleading for my friend's help again. Anyway, since I won't be working on anything else( besides the script) for the next two months just PM me if you are going to need any help with proofreading or co-writing.

[platonicheart]

Here's the artwork!

[SilverxBlue]

platonicheart- thank you very much...
So, those two sketches over there are supposed to be Shione's and Kenji's very rough teenage draft I asked platonicheart to have it posted here...
Those drafts aren't the final character design though, Elze gives the final decision of what the Main characters would look like.

[platonicheart]

[quote="SilverxBlue"]platonicheart- thank you very much...

don't mention it feel free to tell me anything you need kk

[SilverxBlue]

I officially declare this topic alive again...
Maybe progress wasn't shown much before because I was busy with school work and I got addicted to a few games. (starts to hit self....)
Anyway updates will only be added on the 1st post...