PrettieAngel wrote:I think this definitely sounds like an interesting story, and will be looking forward to future progress. I'm wondering if there's a set character that will be the one who 'saved' her or if any of the three could be depending on the path you take? I like how she had green hair, it gives her a touch seeming not-so-human. Also, not that's it's really important, but don't turnips tend to be purplish? Or is that why her eyes are purple? A fairly random comment so feel free to ignore.
Your BGs look pretty good for first tries, and the one other things I'd like to mention that hasn't been already is that you might want to work on your perspective a little bit. On your second one especially, the angle the table is drawn on and the flat appearance of the kitchen benches make the room look a bit strange.
*sniff* I'll work hard for this!
Hm.. actually she's the white turnip one, well maybe in your country the type of the turnip is different?
I know there's many kind of turnip, and she's the short white one.
there's white and long kind too (in my country the common one is the long and white turnip)
try to google the pic, you'll see maannny turnips :3
her eyes is purple coz' I like it xD
"save her" well...I want to tell you but I want to make it a surprise when this is finished lol
since I don't really like giving spoilers, and actually I've give many spoiler just by explaining the story >.<
Thanks again! My weakness is in perspective thing, I know the table is weird, but I can't help it,
I'll learn more and practice more!
May I ask for your advice?
or anyone advice?
I try to change the hair color and reline Keita sprite, is it better? or it isn't??
(for keita I forgot to change the line in his pocket and his cable >_<, but i'll change it, I want to see if this is better or not)