Turnip in Love

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#46 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Julie wrote:Waa I haven't been able to post here for awhile!
Anyway, I think the sprites are looking much better! Kazuto lost his glasses! Why? Oh I'm not complaining. I think he looks hotter now and that made me want to go for him before Keita now. XDKabuko chibi looks good. ^^ And Ryou... I have a feeling he's related to Kabuko in some way. Having the same hair and eye color is no coincidence.

How is the progress so far? ^^
Thank you, well the progress is good
I've finished 5 BG+ the night and day mode, just need 3 more
The sprite will be remade again, and for the script, I just finish write the prologue.

For now, I'm making the menu pic, the save etc for custimizing the game appearance
. So it'll be more interesting, I hope it'll finish as fast as possible.

But since I'm bit busy with school, the progress is slowed down T_T
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Well not just that, the biggest factor is sometime I got lazy
Argh, I know I can do it faster, but the laziness is roaming around
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#47 Post by Julie »

Sprites look fine now in my opinion. ^^ Good luck with school!

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#48 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Julie wrote:Sprites look fine now in my opinion. ^^ Good luck with school!
Thanks^^
After thinking for hundred times, I really love the story myself
and it'll be sad if just seeing this become really.. I mean really short, so I thought to make this more longer than the actual plan.
I want ppl enjoy this^^
But I think it'll takes a long time before it's finished :(
Is it okay?
If longer I'll add more character, and maybe I'll recruit more ppl, If I want to make this good.
(it's too much when I'm thinking I want to work solo)

Now I'm learning while adding more features for this one.
and while doing the BGs too, lol
xD

Now just need two more BGs.
and the sprites is coming out better than I expected when I'm working this for the first time.

I'm interested in making out demo, but in another character POV not from kabuko's just to see how this will come out.
But I think It'll be short too.

*run to make the game buttons*

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#49 Post by Julie »

Go ahead! You should always take your time and make sure it comes out great. Longer games are much better. ^^

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Julie wrote:Go ahead! You should always take your time and make sure it comes out great. Longer games are much better. ^^
Okay then,
well I'm making the dialogue box and text box
and it come out like this:
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What do you think? If it's bad I'll change it. ^^

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#51 Post by Elenakiara »

Well, the text box itself, I really like it! xD Because I like the small pale turnip image too. xD

The dialogue box(where their names are placed, right? xD), I'm wondering, will it always be in the middle? I think that I'm just too used to them being on the left. xD Or will it change depending on where the person that's talking standing?

Just wondering. :O
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#52 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Elenakiara wrote:Well, the text box itself, I really like it! xD Because I like the small pale turnip image too. xD

The dialogue box(where their names are placed, right? xD), I'm wondering, will it always be in the middle? I think that I'm just too used to them being on the left. xD Or will it change depending on where the person that's talking standing?

Just wondering. :O
Thank you~ :3
Well It'll be always in the middle.
lol
Is ti better if I move it on the left instead?

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#53 Post by Riviera »

It is much more common to see the character name on the left, it's true.

It doesn't mean you have to do it that way, but I'd consider the sprites. Since the sprites are in the middle, the name covers up a bit of them. We like your sprites, we want to see them. :D

I love that little turnip. It's making me want a little turnip plushie.

I'd actually use the image of the turnip from the banner, though. :)
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#54 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

Riviera wrote:It is much more common to see the character name on the left, it's true.

It doesn't mean you have to do it that way, but I'd consider the sprites. Since the sprites are in the middle, the name covers up a bit of them. We like your sprites, we want to see them. :D

I love that little turnip. It's making me want a little turnip plushie.

I'd actually use the image of the turnip from the banner, though. :)
Lol
yeah, I'll move it then :D
Thanks for the advice~

Turnip plushie!
Whee I love to have that too :3
cute turnips~

But in reality the real turnip isn't very...cute I think xD

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#55 Post by Julie »

I agree that the name should be on the left. It looks much cleaner that way. ^^

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#56 Post by PrettieAngel »

I think you should feel free to take your time and improve where you know you can. It's quality over quantity, after all, so if you know that you can do better and are willing to, I'd definitely say to go for it! Progress so far has been pretty good, in my opinion and it wouldn't be good to over-burden yourself. The UI looks pretty good from the picture, although I personally prefer the name not to be in a floating box like that (just personal preference, though). But I'd definitely agree with what's been said already. It would look less distracting if put on the left side rather than in the middle.
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#57 Post by shwippie »

This is so charming! *o* What a cute story. I love the art so far- it totally fits!
I can't wait to play this <3 Kabu is adorable
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#58 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

@PrettieAngel:Thanks! Now I'm making the script for now, while adding some features etc.
(harder than I thought lol) sometimes it's hard because when I finished something, I learned something new and that make the finished one looks bad and I want to change it again xD
Well I'll do my best, so this will come out good!

@kosetsu: lol!
Thank you! I'll try to make it better!

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#59 Post by YuukiCrossPudding »

The sprite is colored by Youngster Joey
What do you think?
Well I've add some buttons too here and there... also some feature here and there...
If it's bad or something please tell me! I'll fix it right away~ :3
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#60 Post by Riviera »

I really like it! She did a good job with the coloring. :)

What's the red thing?
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