thank you for the encouragement
gekiganwing wrote:Also, it sounds like the chance to work at a beach restaurant could be the main character's last chance for happiness and/or sex. He might want a solid relationship in his last days... but he might want meaningless sex while he still has the chance.
right, this is what I wanted it to be, minus the meaningless sex thou. I intended to make that he will enter one of the route after a month, and yes, because 4 years ago the internet trend are around Key(Air/Clannad/Kanon/Planetarian), TypeMoon(Tsukihime, Fate/StayNight), August(Yoake Mae Yori Ruriiro na), Nitro+(Demonbane and the Cthulhu Myth) and of course Haruhi Suzumiya, my ideas are a join from all of that into one story.
So, I planted the seed from other trend into the all of the girl in my story. This is also a good start to explain all of the character which I forgot to add :
1. Genma Keiichi
A hardcore gamer, living alone in the 2-floor house, a gift from his parents. He had all of the console and games, or you can said that he had all of the games available from the stone age until now. After his parent's death, he was judged to have Brain Tumour and making him only have 2 months left to live. Also, if you noticed, genma = ge-mma- = ゲーマー = gamer
2. Vina von Erdlit
The weird name taken from a join of Yoake Mae Yori Ruriiro na and a gag from Einzbern Family in Fate/Stay Night. She was born as a miko in her family, but after a lot of development of the island, bit by bit, the people there forgot their Deity, and forced Vina's family become a normal citizen. A small shrine dedicated to the Island's Deity are built in the backyard of her house, in order to not forgetting the Deity. She was a childhood friend of Keiichi, they both lived side by side. A caring, warm and calm personality, also have the smile of the angel that able to tame any wild beast.
3. Odorokawa Tomoki
A winner in Kendo championship for 3 years-straight. She always brings a wooden sword everywhere, even when she's working in the restaurant. Despise man whos weaker than her, and tends to resort in violence to them. She had long hair to her waist, and decided to use ponytail for it. (If you know, she was taken from Tomoko in Love Hina). Despite her strength, she's really bad with ghost.
4. Ella Padsben
A total beauty, the red roses in the restaurant. A sister from Tere, the wife of the restaurant's owner. Her manner are top-notch, making her like a princess in a certain kingdom. She was also the girl which Keiichi chase in the 1st day of the game.
5. Getsuren Tsubame
The name taken from a title for Typemoon's Fans, "Getchu". The white rose in the restaurant. Her cold stare and slender body making her become the one who able to beat Ella in terms of beauty. Too bad she's rarely talks and had a strange personality. It's up to you to make Keiichi discover her secret, because if you do, you can't run from her. Remember, I have warned you.
6. Maria E. Zaengim
The shy glasses girl from Keiichi's class. Apparently she also working in the restaurant, and had a strange aura that makes other people become so kind to her, rendering her invulnerable to any kind of evil act from the pervert man.
7. Kagiko Ayuki
The name taken from a title for Key's fans, "Kagiko" or Key's Child. This girl supposed to have a role in this VN, but the one who made her was no longer wanted to continued this project, so I also remove her from the roster. This girl supposed to have a tragic ending, just like any VN made by Key where either the girl died, or making the main hero become more desperate due to certain incident.
8. Suzukaze Shin
The little brother of the owner. He was the winner of Karate Championship, and the only man who admired by Tomoki due to his strength. He was a silent worker, just like Tsubame.
9. Suzukaze Tatsu
The owner of the restaurant. Already married 1 years ago. He's so kind to the customers, and as the story suggested, he was totally handsome that he has his own fans club. Usually they got so wild and forced Tere to beat his husband in just a split seconds.
10. Suzukaze Tere
Her last name was Padsben, just like Ella, but after married, she change it like his husband's last name. A woman in her mid-twenty, surprisingly had a charm that makes any man fall by her looks.
11. Anono Toshiaki
Keiichi's best friends, or should I said, the only Keiichi's boy friend. A genuine pervert with bad luck around girls, but had the money to support his hobby.
I think that's it.
"*cackle*cackle*! In short, it's all about cleverly using the gaps between jobs to play. If it goes too far, it can turn to laziness. However, people only become mature when they learn to balance work with pleasure. Simply put, if all you care about is work all the time, you're not fully mature." - Gaap (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)