[Kinetic Novel | COMPLETE] Soul & Heart

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#46 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:25 am

Thank you :3
And yeah, it's near finishing, ;D

Okay, when I say it, I did it.
I'm halfway of completing the emotions! :D
I'm sorry I wasn't really able to do significant progress because we have a problem set due tomorrow morning, and it's like each question is a stab in the brain D:
Crap, also because of too much Phoenix Wright! Get outta my miiiind, little Edgey-san.

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#47 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sun Jul 24, 2011 1:34 am

Bump (again) ;p
Making CGs now~ :)
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Eep, here's Cetus peeking in your new cell! ;)
Sample of a CG I'm making... I'm not really great with this stuff XD
I also know there are some mistakes in it... will edit it later.

I know... the style kinda looks a bit different from the sprites... XD

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#48 Post by Snow Blossom » Sun Jul 24, 2011 7:27 am

ARGGHH Cetus is too adorable!! *Glomps*

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#49 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Mon Jul 25, 2011 5:53 am

Thanks ;p
I will show everybody the intro CGs (the CGs that will appear when a character is first shown into the story, like in RE Alistair) when I'm done with them, but the rest... I'll keep it to myself until the entire thing is finished. XD

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#50 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:47 am

BUUUUUMP.
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My half-assed CG WIP.
The WIP of Daena's intro CG!
(I'm a really messy colorist, I know.)
Any comments/suggestions/critique? O:

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#51 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sat Aug 27, 2011 11:15 pm

I noticed my old sprites for SnH sucks -_- But redoing them will be a waste of time, so I decided to just edit some stuff to make them look better.

Say, like Cetus' eyes and eyeshine. The eyeshine makes it lok her eyes are damn too round, so I redraw it. I also added a hint of blue to her eyes. :)

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Sheesh, working on sprites with SAI is a lot better for me XD

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Then, Daena. Her eyes look off to the rest of the sprites, so I redrew them and recolored. I supposed her eyes look a bit too bright...
Yep, the reason I made the screenshot like that is because she'll never make that face in the game. Herp derp.
Also redrawing the emotions. Gaaaah, hard work~
I'm also waiting for my CG artist to get finished with the linearts. I'm currently coloring the linearts Nebi-san sent me~ :D

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#52 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:06 pm

Obligatory screenshot:

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#53 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:45 am

QUICK LINT CHECK: (I know I'm spamming my own thread right now buy hey, no one's looking anyway)

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Statistics:

The game contains 670 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 7,770 words,
for an average of 11.6 words per screen.
The game contains 4 menus.
OH YEAH. ROCK ON. \m/
I'm nearing finishing! I mean it this time! :D
All I'm waiting for now is the CGs... -_-

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#54 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:13 am

Screeeeeeenie :D

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Apparently I'm suffering from NVL Addiction Sickness orz;
I know I'm abusing NVL so much now hurr durr 8D
Sirius in the CG changes faces as the text goes on :P

Hope you like it.

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#55 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sat Sep 10, 2011 9:13 pm

Herp derp.
Just redid Cetus a bit :D

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#56 Post by Blane Doyle » Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:51 am

Wow... how did I not check this WIP before?

I love these sorts of stories, 25 Second into The Future and all dystopian future, so this is right up my alley! The art looks really good too, and unique, so I am looking forward to this!

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#57 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:43 am

Thank you so much!
You're the first to comment here after a few weeks of endless update T^T

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Screenie again. I'm actually fixing Daena's sprite now, But I think I'll be ending up redoing it -_-

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#58 Post by Desu_Cake » Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:28 am

Oooh! This looks interesting! Gonna be keeping my eye on this.

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#59 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:22 am

Thank you!
Hey guys, I sorta updated the first post a bit. :D

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Re: [Kinetic Novel / WIP] Soul & Heart

#60 Post by Mocha07734 » Sat Sep 24, 2011 8:50 am

Oh wow, this seems so interesting!
I love how most of it's grey scale. >w<

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