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Thank you everybody.
@Elenekiadra:
I know it's short.... But I'm glad that you like it still. I hope xares clothing didn't bother you too much.

@tachyglossus:
I do remembber KiSS dolls. I never made them myself though...
xares looks a little more startled thank shocked, but i really like it xD

@snow Blossom:
you got all the dialoges? that's quite a lot. I'm amazed.
Glad that you liked it. And I'm very happy that the music is so well recieved. I was really worried about that.

Okay! First play-through impressions:

I like the artwork~

The conversation the three have is very interesting, I really like how you have so many choices.

I found and fixed a lot of spelling and grammar issues, sent them to you in a PM. Hope it helps!

I think I got all of the dialogue, and it took some time, but it was fun!

*contemplates making an Alua KiSS Doll... just because!*

/offtopic

Tachyglossus wrote:Gosh, Elenakiara, you are cute, and I don't mean that in a patronizing way. I used to be a real modest, but working on KiSS dolls changed that for me since you have to draw the base nude or at least in their skivvies. People kept telling me, when I was younger, to go to figure drawing classes to improve on my anatomy but I would be like "No... but they're usually mostly naked and that's soo uncomfortable!"

Haha, I am so happy that I went into business school mostly for that reason. xD My friend who drew the current sprites for my VN is studying in art at the moment and she told me about a few of her classes. She said that it was awkward in the beginning of the class, but as she started really concentrating, she didn't really see the naked person as a naked person and just the form. xD I don't know what's a KiSS doll though. >.<

@ Arithra: Nah, it didn't bother me too much. xD I just kind of looked past it after a while. I was especially shy when my mom was passing by, because I felt like she'd tease me if she'd see the image. xDD I'm totally letting her play the finished version of the game though. She loves VNs because of me now!

@Elena: See, I'm not sure I could get over it. It's one thing when I'm drawing vague human forms from my own recollection, but to physically be in the same room as a nude person would be far too distracting... of either gender.

And KiSS dolls are a type of digital paper dolls.

Your demo really short. I liked the music. It has a nice feel to the story. I think it's kinda mean of Xares to joke about Eula death about it was also a surprise to see such a character.
The sprites look really nice.
Good luck on the finish.

Thank you!
Credit for the sprites goes to Tachyglossus
progress has slowed down, but I have finished another ending, only two more left.

Thank you - I worked hard on those sprites! Worked very hard not to draw goatees.

I played the demo, and I have to say I really enjoyed it! Well...It was short, I think that was the only gripe I had about it, and the fact that some of the words were spelled wrong. I can't really comment on the music, since I'm in the library at my college and can't exactly listen to music right now. When *or ever?* are you planning on releasing the full or longer demo?

Arithra wrote:Thank you!
Credit for the sprites goes to Tachyglossus
progress has slowed down, but I have finished another ending, only two more left.

Woot, only two more to go~ ^0^ *jumps up and down excitedly*

Well... at least the king has a goatee right?

I don't have a date set, but I will not let this go unfinished, after all i am not the only one who poured time and effort into it.
And that is by far the best reason to finish it, other that the fact that I really want to <<

A new update!

I have finished the script of Final banquet.
All the endings (six in total) are finished. Now I am looking for a proofreader who will check my writing.
I fear it will be a lot of work since english is not my first language.

The first part of the game is already scripted since it was included in the demo.
I will now throw myself at the interface!

This game looks interesting~! I haven't played the demo yet but I will when I get the chance to

>.< I just downloaded the demo to play
I could help with proofreading if u want... :3

I hope you enjoy it.
I already have someone who is proofreading the script for me. Thank you for the offer though.