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SmileyFace's Art Dumpage

#1 Post by SmileyFace » Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:36 am

Yo. <w<;

Basically I'm going to start posting random pieces that I drew.
Also finished pieces will be basically non-existent...

Sadistic and ruthless comments about what needs improvement is appreciated.
Clothing Desgins.png
I absolutely adore sketching down random clothing designs. <3
Zenith Fibrus.png
A Head shot of Zenith from my VN.
asdasdasdasd.png
Another head shot of a different oc... I really dislike this one. <_<
It just... looks bad.

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#2 Post by YonYonYon » Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:36 am

Nice pics~<3
SmileyFace wrote:Sadistic and ruthless comments about what needs improvement is appreciated.
Hummm... Legs are too long, maybe?
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#3 Post by Alera » Thu Apr 21, 2011 6:08 am

I agree with @YonYonYon - the legs are too long. But I like the design though!

And I like that headshot of Zenith , really-really like it for some reason. >w>

As for the other one- looks quite different...when I see you can do much-much better this is a lil- nyah. :/
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#4 Post by SmileyFace » Thu Apr 21, 2011 9:53 am

@YonYonYon
Thank you and,
Holy fu-!
Just looked at the picture again and just realized it. o___e;

@Alera
Thanks <3
Yeah, the last one I just found lying around on my desktop.
I think I did it in the middle of February where I didn't know what pen pressure was and what not. x_X;

Anyway, more random art crap.
Clothing Desgins.png
Fixed the leg length a bit.
Clothing Design 1.png
Another one. The clothing set also has long lace gloves and thigh high boots but I don't feel like doing it right now...
Maybe later when I'm not lazy. <w<;
(I highly recommend you full view this one to see all the detail in the lace...)
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Woot to not having my own art style... orz|||

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#5 Post by SmileyFace » Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:20 am

More Random Crap~
Hearts.png
Another clothing set design. The heart thing in the middle is a belly button piercing.
(Also ignore her feet and legs... They're just... bleh... ;>_>)
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Random Chibi I drew out of boredom. <w<;
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Another random thing I drew out of boredom. ;>w>

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#6 Post by SmileyFace » Fri Apr 22, 2011 12:07 pm

Moooooooooooooooooore~ <w<;
Brown Hat.png
Err, another random drawing. This time the hat is brown though. <w<;
Chibi.png
Anooooooother chibi that manifested from my boredom.
Wings.png
A WIP that I was drawing... I'm just posting it here since it is most likely that I'm just going to completely forget about it.
"Although I wasn't born with wings, I can still make my own."
Yay to cheesy tag line thingys.

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#7 Post by Shuuto » Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:45 am

You have really cool designs for clothing. The first two you posted are my favorite, but I like all the ones you posted including the mechanical wing one.

If anything, I'd say your lines are really thick, and there isn't really any variation in the thickness. The lines should be different thicknesses based on how they curve or what they're outlining. For instance, you want them to taper off and be thinner as you get the the tips of the hair.

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#8 Post by SmileyFace » Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:35 am

@Shuuto
Thanks for the tip. c:
So something like this?
Lineart Practice.png
The main reason I keep my lines thick is because it's a whole lot easier to color in. >w<;
Yes, I'm that lazy.
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This is an old bookmark I made for one of my friends. <___<;

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#9 Post by Shuuto » Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:15 pm

Ah, yes~ very much like that. I like the lines on the hair much more, and the eyelashes are much nicer.

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#10 Post by SmileyFace » Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:27 pm

@Shuuto
Yay~
To be honest though it is rather annoying having to keep redrawing the lines to get the right look though. = 3=
pfft, I'm such a lazy person.

Anyway here is more random stuff. ^_^;
Lineart Practice 2.png
Ignore the fact that she has no clothes... Or has really wonky and uneven eyes. <____<;
Lineart Pratice 3.png
same goes for this one. <.<;
Random Chibi 3.png
... <_______<;
I promise I'll put some actual proper work up later... orz|||

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#11 Post by Alera » Mon Apr 25, 2011 6:11 am

Ohoo~ Lots of cool arts! >w<

I really like the blue hair on that character from your latest post~

You have a really nice sense of details! :'D
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#12 Post by SmileyFace » Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:42 am

Alera wrote:Ohoo~ Lots of cool arts! >w<

I really like the blue hair on that character from your latest post~

You have a really nice sense of details! :'D
Thank you!
I'm trying to work on my lineart right now. It's hard, harder than it looks. ; w ;

I've been doing requests recently.
I stupidly started a forum saying I had a week free that I offered to do requests for people....
Didn't expect so many replies.
and due to my personality I'm doing 'em all. Also I may or may not be a masochist... o__________e;

Anyway, enjoy!
Lara.png
and now I realize how god damn hard it is to draw wheel chairs.
Nakajimi Twins.png
Rushed this one, especially the coloring. QAQ
Romeo.png
He was so fun drawing. <3
Gonna put shading in when I can be bothered.

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#13 Post by Snowflower » Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:33 am

You definitely have a very unique style for the art, and it's really good. :3
& I look forward to all the projects you are working on. :)
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#14 Post by Riviera » Wed Apr 27, 2011 5:25 pm

I really like your clothing designs. They're such a unique fantasy style without being... weird, like some fantasy clothing can be.
Will edit/proofread for cookies.

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#15 Post by Alera » Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:00 pm

SmileyFace wrote: Thank you!
I'm trying to work on my lineart right now. It's hard, harder than it looks. ; w ;

Yes, I can see the difference! :'D It's more detailed and the variety of the lines thickness is something I really love in linearts~ <3

From the new arts- the last one is really good, even without shading, the textures give it a nice effect.

And I know what you mean-people always go crazy about requests. XD I know that too well from GAIA.
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