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Tag-'s artwork (Requests closed for now~)

#1 Post by Tag- » Mon Sep 05, 2011 1:10 am

Edit: Requests closed~


Completed:
1. HanaMori: (Done!) Link
2. Schizanthe: (Done!) Link
3. SilverxBlue: (Done!) Link
4. Mickychi: (Done!) Link
5. Tsundere Lightning: (Done!) Link
6. Lumen_Astrum: (Done!) Link

See the first 6 altogether here~


7. GeneDNC: (Done!) Link
8. azureXtwilight: (Done!) Link
9. 15385bic: (Done!) Link
10. Mocha07734: (Done!) Link
11. Shattered_Moon: (Done!) Link
12. Death_HUG: (Done!) Link
13. Vynuxys: (Done!) Link

See these together here~


14. Lumen_Astrum: (Done!) Link
15. HigurashiKira: (Done!) Link
16. sonone: (Done!) Link
17. JustAnotherMe: (Done!) Link
18. Chorvaqueen: (Done!) Link
19. Veniae: (Done!) Link
20. Marcelo_Orlando: (Done!) Link
21. KomiTsuku: (Done!) Link
22. Omnificent: (Done!) Link
23. azureXtwilight: (Done!) Link

See this batch here~

24. JustAnotherMe: (Done!) Link
25: MonoPiero: (Done!) Link
26: Sorani: (Done!) Link
27. Kirroha: (Done!) Link
28. Cidz:
29: Schizanthe: (damn yewwwww)
30. Johvalo:

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Greetings everyone :)

I am fairly new to digital art (it's been around 4 months now) and I've been reading around, looking up tutorials and experimenting, and this is currently what my colouring looks like.
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OC Basilio
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Present for a friend
Err, ignoring the glaring anatomical mistakes, does anyone have any tips/critiques about my colouring? If you feel that there is a mistake that is much too large to be ignored, please feel free to point it out, however keep in mind that I am specifically looking for issues with my colouring. Thank you :D

I should also mention, please feel free to be as harsh as you like, don't be afraid to mince words with me :mrgreen:
*braces self just in case*
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Re: Tag-'s art

#2 Post by Crocosquirrel » Mon Sep 05, 2011 4:08 am

Okay, wow. The image of the girl is some seriously creepy. That smile with the big head and the little bitty skinny body makes it look like she wants to eat my face. The coloring on the hair makes it look like someone dipped her in a onto someone's palette, but I assume that's intentional.

Coloring styles are mostly okay. Damn, that smile is going to have me climbing the walls for the next couple of days.
I'm going to get off my soap-box now, and let you get back to your day.

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Re: Tag-'s art

#3 Post by Tag- » Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:59 am

^Haha, that's definitely the most extreme reaction I've gotten so far. :lol:
I'm happy it made you feel that way though, because that means I've completed my purpose :P
And the overly colourful hair was most definitely intentional :)
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Re: About my colouring...

#4 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:06 am

The eyes are creepy O_O
I think I'll be having nightmares the next few nights XD

Overall, your coloring is awesooooomeeee :D

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Re: About my colouring...

#5 Post by Glasskitten » Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:30 am

I agree that the coloring is very nice, it's just that...
*captions the picture of the girl, "I'll Bite Your Face Off"*
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Re: Tag-'s art

#6 Post by Crocosquirrel » Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:58 am

Tag- wrote:^Haha, that's definitely the most extreme reaction I've gotten so far. :lol:
I'm happy it made you feel that way though, because that means I've completed my purpose :P
And the overly colourful hair was most definitely intentional :)
If that's where you were headed with that, open her mouth just a bit, and show the viewer sharklike teeth in that mouth. That will drive *everyone* nuts for many moons.
I'm going to get off my soap-box now, and let you get back to your day.

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Re: About my colouring...

#7 Post by TsukiShima » Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:37 am

I saw your dA, you're actually awesome you know! xD You're able to go and rp with those awesome artists making you are too!
I don't want to say a lot since your skills are better than mine, but just in case, I read up some few tutorials, and they said not to use blur tool too much, and balance the brushing technique. Also suggesting, more clothes fold? I'm not sure myself but I know you can do it!

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Re: About my colouring...

#8 Post by Elze » Wed Sep 07, 2011 4:58 am

Oh heyyy that first image looks familiar. Isn't that Dashi's milizia uniform? LOL <3
I think you're on the right track for colouring. Just keep practicing and trying new things. Good luck!
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Re: About my colouring...

#9 Post by Tag- » Wed Sep 07, 2011 5:18 am

Thanks for all of the comments, you guys :D

If that's where you were headed with that, open her mouth just a bit, and show the viewer sharklike teeth in that mouth. That will drive *everyone* nuts for many moons.
Oooh, I'll be sure to keep that in mind~

HanaMori wrote:I don't want to say a lot since your skills are better than mine, but just in case, I read up some few tutorials, and they said not to use blur tool too much, and balance the brushing technique. Also suggesting, more clothes fold? I'm not sure myself but I know you can do it!
Ah, the clothes folds are something I definitely need to work on, thank you :D I've read about balancing the blur tool as well, but I've habitually smoothed all the shadows xD'' I'll work on fixing that too.

Elze wrote:Oh heyyy that first image looks familiar. Isn't that Dashi's milizia uniform? LOL <3
I think you're on the right track for colouring. Just keep practicing and trying new things. Good luck!
Hehe, that it is~ :P And thank you~
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Re: About my colouring... (Taking requests)

#10 Post by Tag- » Sun Sep 18, 2011 6:52 am

Whoops, sorry for the double post.

Would anyone like a request? I'll give the first 5 people a coloured headshot of any character :D
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Re: About my colouring... (Taking requests)

#11 Post by TsukiShima » Sun Sep 18, 2011 7:55 am

Oh, taking request? Then may I request my OC to you? This is the little guy

Thank you first!

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Re: About my colouring... (Taking requests)

#12 Post by Schizanthe » Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:01 am

Damn you for not letting me request twins. Revenge shall be miiiiiiiine.

Ahem, anyway, I'll request Kaede. You know where to find him~ Toomuchefforttolink.

See, I was nice -- could've requested Rosalind with her short hair and hat. Then where would your fun be? :twisted:

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Re: About my colouring... (Taking requests)

#13 Post by Tag- » Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:03 am

Schizanthe wrote:Damn you for not letting me request twins. Revenge shall be miiiiiiiine.

Ahem, anyway, I'll request Kaede. You know where to find him~ Toomuchefforttolink.

See, I was nice -- could've requested Rosalind with her short hair and hat. Then where would your fun be? :twisted:

Psh, I think you had way too much fun typing that post up -3-
And psh you already caught my kiriban what else could you want.


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Re: About my colouring... (Taking requests)

#14 Post by Schizanthe » Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:10 am

Tag- wrote: Psh, I think you had way too much fun typing that post up -3-
And psh you already caught my kiriban what else could you want.
More bloody, psychotic, weapon-obsessed twins? Your water bottle!

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Re: About my colouring... (Taking requests)

#15 Post by Tag- » Sun Sep 18, 2011 11:31 am

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For HanaMori
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