My Art (Opening Request)

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My Art (Opening Request)

#1 Post by AzerArcacia » Mon Sep 05, 2011 9:13 pm

I don't know where to start . . . I've been joined here for a long time and spare me the time when I joined here, I just lurk around ; A ; aimlessly.

so, here I am, asking for feedback
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Re: My Art

#2 Post by Sapphi » Mon Sep 05, 2011 10:48 pm

I like the first portrait a lot... The girl is cute ^_^

Two things:
The shadows on her neck under her jawline should be darker to make her face stand out a bit more.
Her glasses (while I love them) look almost cartoony compared to the realistic style of her face. I've never seen a pair of glasses that has so much space between the lenses.
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Re: My Art

#3 Post by AzerArcacia » Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:47 pm

why, thank you, Sapphi :D

ah, shadowing . . . I guess you're right. it'd make sense if the area under her jawline's getting darker. as for the glasses, I forgot to fix it -_-' yeah, I know it's crappy.

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dumping more arts . . . some are still in progress.

I wonder, am I allowed to drop some NSFW stuff here?

*PS: the chara sprite (yuripe) on the last one is a collaborate project w/ my friend. I only colored his lineart. =w=
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Re: My Art

#4 Post by TakeOverWorld » Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:16 pm

I don't have any useful feedback for you, but I'd just like to say, I like your artwork - it's very good! :D

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Re: My Art

#5 Post by TsukiShima » Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:45 am

First of all, your icon, at first I thought it was MadokaXKyuubey xD
Ehem, your arts are actually very good, but maybe, the major problem is anatomy and perspective, heck, it's the major problem for everyone including myself.
But I got to say your details are quite good, especially for that Kyouko skating bg, and 'Welcome to my world' (I know that's Kyuubey too right?) bg. I liked them the most.

Also, I mentioned this to someone else too, I learned that most artist avoid using blur, unless needed. Yes, it's smooth, but it's ruining the details you made. Try balancing it. I dug up some useful tutorials as well, just in case you want me to share with you.

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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#6 Post by AzerArcacia » Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:19 pm

I think I need more practice. I'm opening request for drawing. you can request anything here (as long as I could handle it with my current skill) be it sprites, sketches, or even anything related to drawing such as coloring, outline/lineart-ing (not accepting traditional arts)

just post it here and I'll notify you

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thanks :D *oh, you have DA account. gonna see for it :3

@HanaMori

nope. that's kyuubey indeed XD no madoka here. thanks for the compliment

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hmm . . . I must admit I use too much blur, here and here because I feel comfortable that way.

tuts? (tutorials?) where is it?
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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#7 Post by HigurashiKira » Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:22 pm

Ohh, requests.

Could I ask for a simple drawing of any character from my games?
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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#8 Post by sorani » Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:26 pm

I request any character from my game as well! Anyway, very lovely work you have here.

Edit: Link to my project is in my signature, Grand End.
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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#9 Post by AzerArcacia » Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:35 pm

HigurashiKira wrote:Ohh, requests.

Could I ask for a simple drawing of any character from my games?
sorani wrote:I request any character from my game as well! Anyway, very lovely work you have here.
just put the link here and I'll notify you when I complete it :D
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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#10 Post by Death_HUG » Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:40 pm

I would love it if you drew one of my characters from my game! ^-^ The link is in my signature.
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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#11 Post by HigurashiKira » Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:57 pm

AzerArcacia wrote:
HigurashiKira wrote:Ohh, requests.

Could I ask for a simple drawing of any character from my games?
sorani wrote:I request any character from my game as well! Anyway, very lovely work you have here.
just put the link here and I'll notify you when I complete it :D
Confused a bit about the question. Do you mean a link to the thread? If so, here you go
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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#12 Post by Hayzel » Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:49 pm

I'd love for you to do Derek in Keith's school shirt x3~

Derek References:
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http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/downlo ... =10204&t=1

The shirt is basically the shirt under his jacket in the second picture, except it's larger on him. He wears green boxer briefs (if you rather have something not so racy go with turtle boxers.

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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#13 Post by AzerArcacia » Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:04 pm

just finished HigurashiKira's Hector. Is this okay? I suppose he's left-handed since he wears the watch on that side . . . (probably will add the BG later on >_>)

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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#14 Post by HigurashiKira » Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:15 pm

;A; So...beautiful....
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Re: My Art (Opening Request)

#15 Post by SilverxBlue » Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:49 pm

Gah! Please draw one of mine. Pretty please... with a cherry on top.
Draw any of my OCs, the link is on the first logo of my sig. :mrgreen:
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