Mocha's Random Art & Writing of Randomness (requests closed)

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Mocha's Random Art & Writing of Randomness (requests closed)

#1 Post by Mocha07734 » Thu Sep 15, 2011 2:03 pm

Basically I put here whatever there is to put.
Whether it is an old story that I wrote for a silly English assignment or just some sketchy drawings, it all goes here.

Requests are Closed for Art Stuff
I'll be having up to three spaces open for any art requests you might have. I'll be doing it during my spare time so it might take awhile...
1. Lumen_Astrum
2. Renpao
3. GeneDC

Three quick sketches and colours I did this morning as a 'wake up call' sort of thing. (Yes, I wake myself up by drawing something.)
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Also here is a short story I wrote last night before I went to bed... just because. o___e;
It’s Starting to Hurt

“Get out of the way fatty!”

Great. I’m in a rush outside to get to the lockers so I don’t arrive late to class, and I just have to meet him of all people. Christopher Logan, like usual his habit of spitting insults to me whenever we meet has surfaced once again. It makes me wonder how he can be one of the ‘popular’ kids. Actually, I wonder how he has any friends at all. Considering all of the things he says to me on a daily basis.

“Come on, move it. I’m in a bit of a hurry. I’m going to be late and I don’t want the teacher to be getting mad at me.”

Yeah right.

“Man, I’m really going to be late now. Look, it’s already dark out. Oh wait, it’s just you. You’re just so fat that I can’t seem to be able to see the sun. Sorry.”

Damn. I can hear my classmates around us quietly giggle to themselves. I don’t know what annoys me more, the comment that he just made or the fact that the people around us find it funny.
After Christopher’s speech of my so called fatness, he starts to comment on how ugly I am. My classmates are still standing there at the sidelines, still quietly laughing at me. I’m seriously getting sick of all of this…

“Will you just shut up already!?”

Crap, I didn’t mean to yell at him.

“Oh, is Miss. Fats-a-lot getting angry now?”
“Stop calling me fat.”
“I didn’t exactly call you fat, I just implied it by putting the word fat into the name I just called you.”
“Then don’t say anything that implies that I am fat.”
“Okay, ugly.”
“The same with ugly...”
“Whatever. Lard face.”
“Hey! I just told you-“
“Yeah, but you’re not the boss of me. You’ll have to be more like me, like a boss.”
“You’re so dead.”
“Oh? And may I ask, as to how you are going to kill me? You won’t be able to touch a single hair on this godly body of mine.”
“And why do you say that?”
“Haven’t you noticed? You. Have. No. Friends. You stupid idiot. And me? Hmmm. I’m adored and worshipped by more than half of the people here at school.”


I can’t say anything against that. No one has tried to stop Christopher’s insults yet, and no one has tried the many times this has happened before. I really don’t have any friends. After all, who would want to be friends with an ugly, fat and stupid idiot that is hated by one of the most popular kids in school? No one, that’s who.

“Cat got your tongue?”
“Shut up…”
“Hmmmm~?
“I said shut up!”
“Well, this is a first. Fatty is getting violent. Now you look a gazillion times uglier.”
“Shut Up!!!”
“Maybe drinking some milk will help.”
“Please, just leave me alone.”
“Or maybe chocolate milk would be better.”
“Shut up, shut up, shut up!”

Crap, crap, crap! Why? I’m not hurt, but my eyes are tearing up. I can feel my face turn red as it gets warmer. Everyone’s staring at me. I can feel them looking at me as if I were a lunatic and I can tell, they’re still laughing.

“Awwwww. She’s crying. Fine, I’ll leave you alone for today. You’re already in a pitiful enough state as it is. Bye, fatty.”
“I’m not fat!!!”

I’m not fat, or ugly, or stupid, or an idiot. I know it for a fact. His wrong, everything he says is a lie. It’s all a lie. It doesn’t hurt. I’m fine. I’m perfectly fine.
...

But maybe just a little bit.
After all this time, maybe just a bit.
It’s starting to hurt.
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#2 Post by TakeOverWorld » Thu Sep 15, 2011 2:33 pm

I like your art. And the story, the last sentances were ... poignant ( I can't think of a word).
... Basically, I've got nothing useful to say XD

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#3 Post by Mocha07734 » Fri Sep 16, 2011 8:16 am

Some more stuff I quickly drew as a wake up call.
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#4 Post by Mocha07734 » Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:23 am

Some more~
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textures were found by randomly searching on google and choosing one of the random pictures...
Sorry, I can't be bothered finding the proper artist and so on. :I
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#5 Post by GeneDNC » Mon Sep 19, 2011 10:40 am

Can I request a sketch in your style of my character Becky (WIP)? And don't worry, I'm not in a hurry or anything, so take all the time you want. ^__^

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#6 Post by Tag- » Mon Sep 19, 2011 11:16 am

May I request this character please~ o3o

Here
Feel free to change his clothes :)
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#7 Post by Hayzel » Mon Sep 19, 2011 4:12 pm

May I request Keith doing something active? He's the brown haired guy in the Menu screen that's been attached to the first post of Lost Dreams. ((see link in signature))

So something like him running or swimming. His school colors are blue and black.

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#8 Post by Mocha07734 » Mon Sep 19, 2011 10:41 pm

GeneDNC wrote:Can I request a sketch in your style of my character Becky (WIP)? And don't worry, I'm not in a hurry or anything, so take all the time you want. ^__^
ta-DAH!
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@Hayzel and Tag-
I'll start working on your ones tomorrow. ^_^
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#9 Post by HigurashiKira » Mon Sep 19, 2011 11:00 pm

If you're open, could I request a drawing of Tinasa? She's in my WIP for Death Rule.
I have moved to a new account. Please contact me here from now on. T/Y~

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#10 Post by GeneDNC » Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:12 am

Love it! Thanks, she looks awesome. <3 I will probably use your pic as some sort of (unlockable) bonus in my game.

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#11 Post by Mocha07734 » Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:05 pm

@GeneDNC
Thank you very much. Sure go ahead. Be sure to link me your game when you're done. >w<

@Tag-
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Sorry for completely and utterly changing the style of colouring....

@Hayzel
I'll probably be done with your request tomorrow or something, I'm too tired today. > 3>

@HigurashiKira
Of course I can draw her... when I stop being a lazy ass that is. :T
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#12 Post by Tag- » Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:41 am

Mocha07734 wrote:@Tag-
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Sorry for completely and utterly changing the style of colouring....
Oh it's fine, I really like it~~
Thank you so much :D
PM me if needed

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#13 Post by Mocha07734 » Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:31 pm

@Hayzel
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WD@E$G#$Y!#RWRGV#$%@# D:
This was so darn hard to draw without making him look like a deformed sack of potatoes, now he just looks like a deformed potato. :I

Also another random drawing I did this morning... Yeah, I know, it's a mess. :T
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and this is another VN I plan to work on after I finish Toy Box.
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@HigurashiKira
Sorry still working on your request. >_<;
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#14 Post by Hayzel » Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:41 pm

And down the lane comes Keith "Sack of Potatoes" Summers for the win!!!!!
Haha. It's cute, thanks for your hard work :3

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#15 Post by Mocha07734 » Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:16 am

Hayzel wrote:And down the lane comes Keith "Sack of Potatoes" Summers for the win!!!!!
Haha. It's cute, thanks for your hard work :3
Lol, that made my day. :3
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Yep, I totally just used her to experiment with colouring...

And here is another speedy sketch colour thing...
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Requests are open again... but this time it's going to take a while... and this time I'm being serious. D:
I want to try concentrate on my own project.

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