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#1 Post by Sunlit-Dreamer » Mon Oct 17, 2011 6:37 pm

Meh why not? I'll just be using this lil thread here to leave my ideas for future vns so I don't forget. And post art of course. Random art. Not character stuff since those will be in the wip threads. (Once I make them in a couple weeks or so...)

Ideas (Details remain inside my head bwuahaha)

Horror VN: With multiple paths showing hints and secrets to survive and possibly escape the facility. (Based off of novel I'm writing....most endings you'll end up dying. I'm mean. >:3)

Fantasy VN: (inspired by Negima and The Familiar of Zero) GxB Takes place in academy (college type bwuahaha), get to know classmates, blah blah blah, training, more blah blah blah, classmate you partner has different effect on fighting style, blah blah blah, classmate you choose as permanent partner is PERMANENT. (Hahahaha I spoil nothing inside my head)

Vocaloid VN: Unh...this was more a request. So no details. Might make it a KN.

And now I post a random drawing. *does eeny meeny miny mo*
Kit and Pup.jpg
A fox and wolf....without reference....looks so wrong.
Curse you eeny meeny miny mo. Meh oh well not as if posting that old thing will kill me.....right?

(Beware....my train of thought is bizarre)
Wolf_Sketch_by_Christina_Fire_Fox.jpg
Ooooold sketch from old account. (Left account due to stalkers....bad ones)
Wolf_My_Style_by_Christina_Fire_Fox.jpg
Another oldy. Made the legs too short. Grah.
Mahiru and Shiori.jpg
Another old drawing from 2008. (Yup posting old stuff first bwuahaha) Colored with....crayons...
Haruhi_Sketch_by_Christina_Fire_Fox.jpg
Yup 2008. Head sketch of Haruhi from OHSHC. I wonder when I'll eventually add my more recent stuff....XD
Hunny_as_a_Sailor_by_Christina_Fire_Fox.jpg
Hunny from OHSHC. Got his arms and hands wrong. >< Once again from 08.
Butterfly.jpg
Please ignore the girl.....PLEASE! (Again, 2008)
....If only I could turn back time to fix the girl...
Renewal.jpg
Naked fairy. =P 2008
Sakura and Suchina.jpg
This was actually from a picture. No tracing though...instead I stared at the picture intensely and tried to draw it. Then changed a few colors. 2008
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Yeah..."Suchina"...she's gone. No more. So no asking about her please. *gets rid of evidence of the Naruto fc*

Edit: And I shall be posting one drawing every single day in here. But I won't bump. Just edit my posts. Bwuahaha.
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#2 Post by ScottySeng » Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:56 pm

Nice Artwork. I'm sure you'll get to fixing faces with some more practice.

It seems this thread is dead though...

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#3 Post by Sunlit-Dreamer » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:58 pm

Yup. It is deeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaad. Like I stated in my signature. XD But I shall still post in here since it's meh thread for stuff. =3

I'm just surprised you found this and commented in it. o.o

Oh well still happy someone commented. XD (And now I no longer have to keep adding artwork to the first post since I DID say I'd add one every day)

Yeah, I'll get the faces eventually. But for now I'm trying to get bodies right. @@

Now today's art! (And on if need be)
Blank Eyes.jpg
The hands...the hands....*shakes head in shame* Started those fingers at the wrong place...done in 2009 (Yup no more 08 art)
I actually have a finished version of this. Will put it up in a few days when its turn comes. XP
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#4 Post by Artemis Gale » Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:31 pm

Oh, is there a chance you're going to post more recent stuff?
It's nice to see older stuff, but I would really like to see how it compares to what you do now. =]

The 2009 work was looking better, at least the limbs had shape now instead of being a tube. I feel bad saying it but I have to agree, those poor hands. (Isn't that great with hands either.) And her shoulders are very small. I really do like the shape of the arms and legs though.

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#5 Post by ScottySeng » Wed Oct 26, 2011 11:12 pm

Well, I saw your signature, and I decided to make it somewhat alive again. haha.
Shouldn't there more artwork though if you really did draw everyday?

I'm trying to get the faces right first then the bodies. I can't believe I can draw a person's face in 15 min, but I'm having trouble drawing anime faces.. :(

Good luck :)

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#6 Post by JustAnotherMe » Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:41 am

Wut?! You have a thread like this??? Why I never knew of it's existence??

And those ideas? >=( gonna hit you for not giving any hints!! ;^D

Okay, critique timeee XDDD

Hmmm, since these pics are your past works, I can't seem to have many critiques, coz probably you already know about the wrong things (coz you tend to look at details... like mine... ^0^) The only thing I can critique is the proportion and all. Try to focus on sketching the basics then move on with little details after you've mastered the sketches. At least, it works for me ^_^ coz if you focus on one thing at a time it'll surely improve much much faster. And you know everything that have a good foundation makes a great achievement someday!!

Anyway, I'll b stalking this thread from now on!! Gonna see me again sometimes soon (hope you don't mind me stalking you XP)

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#7 Post by Sunlit-Dreamer » Thu Oct 27, 2011 1:27 am

First to explain a few things. XD

As for why I'm posting old work, it's in a way to show how I improved over time before I eventually show my most recent artwork. (Which isn't many sadly, thus why I decided to put old artwork first anyway) Except the fox and wolf one. That one is actually from 2010.....yeah my drawing went downhill...blah.

And I don't draw everyday sadly. Only time I drew everyday was in jr high. And you don't wanna see those drawings....(Plus some were on notebook paper which is pretty much a no no to uploading on art sites) College is in the way. I'm just posting the next drawing in chronological order of when I did them. Sorta.

Okay questions answered. ^^

Yeah...those accursed hands....still have problems with them. But at least I'm less likely to start the fingers at the same place as the thumb. @@

Ahh, thankies! Yay thread's no longer dead! Must change signature now. XD And faces huh? We all have our ways. For me I want to get the entire body right. I'd feel uncomfortable if only the head looked nice while everything else looked.....awkward. So for now, I'm looking at pictures of my family and trying to sketch them.

*laughing @ JAM* The ideas are actually long. And the horror one I think would have many paths. Plus I wanted to concentrate more on the one I'm making before I started adding details to them. I would've told you. ^^ And the reason you probably didn't know it existed until now was because it was really dead. lmao

Yeah....stil trying to get proportion right. Especially arms and the shoulder area. Sadly when it comes to me, I quickly get frustrated than give up on drawing. Among other stuff. Which I won't say since they'll all sound like excuses.

Yay I have an official stalkah! *happy dance*

Note: Might edit this post since it's about half an hour away until midnight, which would be next pic posting time. XP

Edit: And like I said, the picture. XP
Lucinda and Rhonda.jpg
Yeah...pointing fingers all around...and my eraser....evil....I don't think I'll ever make a finished version seeing they'll never be used. 2009
Chains why must you be so tricky?
Look Out.jpg
As you can see, this old thing is where I made my avatar from. Darn hands...2009...and please ignore my chicken scratch hand-writing.
I hate inking. ><
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#8 Post by JustAnotherMe » Fri Oct 28, 2011 12:06 pm

OmiGod! That's you!!! The last pic! So much improvement!!! *0* You're so good with those details!!! I bet you can be pretty great as an artist someday!!!!
And oh why chain, why you are so god**** hard to draw???
Ugh! I must not lose to you! Gonna try some poses and the proportions too XDD
Let's be great together!! /^3^/

...you actually happy to have a stalker... weirdooooooo XP
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#9 Post by ScottySeng » Fri Oct 28, 2011 12:29 pm

Wow, the latest drawing looks amazing. I hate inking too. Once tap on the paper is all it takes to destroy the drawing.
Yeah, I have to agree, chain is hard to draw...

I think you're better than me at drawing figures. I'll catch up eventually.
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I think the left shoulder is a bit too high. I think lowering it would help.

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#10 Post by Sunlit-Dreamer » Sat Oct 29, 2011 4:28 am

Yosh, let us both become awesome artists! In our own way anyway since people view art differently. And I'm proud to be weird!

Yeah...there's some drawings I've never uploaded due to inking them, ruined them. And yeah, for the shoulder I was pretty much guessing and didn't look up reference to double check.

Now this time around after some debating, I decided to upload two older pieces of art from 2007. Of course I'll still be uploading the next drawing as well. XD
Suchina.jpg
From 2007. Only uploaded this to show how I did the hand which I am proud of. IGNORE THE FACE. IGNORE I SAY.
Pay attention only to the hand...please...
Ink Girl.jpg
From 2007 as well. As for why I uploaded this, it's the only piece I inked entirely. (I drew it by pencil first of course) Of course...it looked better uninked.
Her eyes creep me out...hate how I did the face.
Shyness_by_Christina_Fire_Fox.jpg
Sakura and Syaoran from CCS! Back on the 2009 group. Sadly I'm not very good at drawing kids....or boys....really bad at drawing guys...
Syaoran, I'm so sorry I drew you badly! TT~TT
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#11 Post by JustAnotherMe » Sat Oct 29, 2011 11:05 am

Gahahahaha!!! Syaorannn!!! So cutee!!!! XDD
Oh, now I'm getting to cardcaptor's mood!!!!

ps: if you told me not to look at something... than I MUST look at it
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#12 Post by Sunlit-Dreamer » Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:23 am

I shall forever have Sakura and Syaoran as my OTP. ALWAYS. X3 They're so adorable. And realistic concerning falling in luuuuuuuurve. (*le gasp* Tis not love at first sight or after a few days!....Although TRC kinda breaks that...meh.)

Nuuuuuuuu! Look away from them! Look away! Stare at the prettier stuff!

Or be creeped out by this! >:D
Have a Seat.jpg
Went overboard on crosshatching...2009
I'm just going to copy and paste the summary I wrote for this.

This was originally NEVER going to be finished. But one "glorious" day family friends came over...and I was bored as heck. So I decided to practice my shading by doing the girl's head...than her upper body...than her legs...than her feet...(You see what happened?) In the end, I added furniture and curtains. And her face was NOT creepy at all. (It was cute and sweet in the beginning) But since my shading was so dark...you can see the changes to make her fit in...this took me DAYS to finish. More than a week I think...yes. I started at the beginning of the 4 day weekend. No stealing her.

Also a couple things. 1. She's holding a glass of...."wine". 2. She has claws. 3. She has no shoes on those are socks.

Would've looked better if I didn't do the majority of the shading crosshatch style. ><

I know I should be putting 2 pics since I didn't put one up for yesterday buuuuuuuuuuut....I don't feel like it. XP

Might post up another pic later on today though to go with this one. Considering it is now officially Halloween! ^^
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#13 Post by JustAnotherMe » Wed Nov 02, 2011 11:44 am

Oh! I creeped out by you!! Gah!!! Is she... not a human? I have some works I added some shadings too and it turn out to be a really really creepy one like this. I dumped it a really really long time ago though. (might not want the pic to haunt me in the middle of the night or moving by itself...)
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#14 Post by Sunlit-Dreamer » Wed Nov 02, 2011 3:50 pm

Hahahaha, but creepy drawings are good to do every once in a while. Always best to try out new styles instead of constantly doing chibi, realism, abstract, etc. And as time passes by while doing different varieties you eventually come up with your own style. ^^ (I bet it's watching you right now)

Been lazy last couple days. XP But I've been busy like many others. Here's the shaded version of Blank Eyes I have above. Will say now I didn't fix the hands. ><

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I scanned this old thing on another computer which was thrown out since it stopped working. (It literally stopped working) And the drawing itself I gave to a friend who was moving away to another state. So I can't scan it again. Which is why I copied the link that has the watermark. I'll say now I no longer use that devart account and I have a new one. (There are reasons...I think I already stated why.)
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#15 Post by ScottySeng » Wed Nov 02, 2011 4:20 pm

Wow, that drawing looks nice...the paper seems pretty rough though

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